YES I DO (NIBIR SS) part XII page 77

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Nirvrithi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

I am eagerly waiting to hear Kabir's response now!!😃

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Chapter 10- Lovely chapter👏👏👏

A heart-rendering chapter❤️

Even-though there was hardly any Nibir in this part, this chapter was indeed beautiful with the way u described and brought out the bond shared by the cousins👏

Wonderful 👍🏼👏👏

Jwala stood at the door and glanced at Nisha. Nisha gave her an assuring smile. Jwala appeared to be contemplating over something. Suddenly she raced toward Nisha and hugged her. "Jwala I am fine. However grown up you may be for us you are still a child. I promise once you grow up enough to take your own decisions you will be the first one I will call, till then you will have to wait and trust me." Nisha cupped Jwala's face and stared deep into her eyes "Will you trust me Jwala?" Nisha's eyes penetrated through Jwala's soul. Jwala nodded tears welling up in her eyes. She gently brought Nisha's hand to her lips and kissed it. "I trust you. I always have and always will Nishu Bro." Jwala's voice cracked as she struggled to keep her tears from falling. Nisha wrapped her arms around her tightly and brought her closer- Loved the understanding and the bond shared by Jwalu and Nishu😳 This truly was a heart-rendering scene❤️

All the other cousins wrapped themselves over Nisha and Jwala like the closing petals of a flower- What an analogy 👏 absolutely loved this line ❤️

"Dolly Di why didn't you tell me, I would have helped too" Nisha's voice hinted disappointment. "Oh! really Nishu Look at yourself, you look so lost you think you could have helped us in this frame of mind?" Kirti retorted clearly annoyed at Nisha's disappointment.- Kirti and Nishu's emotions have been penned down well👏

"Why do you always hide your feelings? Why don't you feel the need to discuss it with us? Do you think we can't solve your problems as effectively as you can solve ours?" Kirti continued to whine. Nisha furrowed her eyebrows at Kirti's accusation. "Your assumption is wrong Kirti" Nisha spoke softly upset with Kirti's accusation.- It's great that u have penned down Kirti's thoughts cz somehow I feel in the show, they were unable to do justice to her character. Kirti may appear to be a self-centred character but the fact is that she is an important part of the cousins gang and equally cares for their welfare like Dolly or any other cousin. Also unlike the other cousins she doesn't hesitate to speak her heart out which is again something I love about her😉

She struggled to get the words out "Dolly Di I am confused about Kabir."She poured her heart out and shared the entire day's events with her cousins. Dolly spoke carefully choosing her words. She knew it was always difficult to handle Nisha when it came to this topic, any mistake on her part would send Nisha running.- Loved the sensible side of Dolly😉

"I know what you are thinkings about Nisha. You must be feeling that you were not interested in Kabir at alls, you just wanted to get rids of him and now suddenly you have second thoughts about him. Isn't it?" Nisha placed her head in Dolly's lap and lied down on the bed. She nodded her head in Dolly's lap. Kirti pulled back her hands and supported herself with the table adjacent to the bed. Dolly placed her hand on Nisha's head and lightly started patting it. "Nisha calm down. You don't need to be afraids. It's normal." Dolly glanced at Umesh, finding it difficult to continue. Umesh raised his palm at her gesturing her that he would continue. Umesh knelt before Nisha and spoke while stroking her head gently "Nisha you have developed feelings which are unknown to you, which you have never felt before. Such feelings can make anyone nervous you're not the only one. From what you have shared with us I think Kabir is a nice guy Nishu. You should really give it a thought. I know we initially helped you with your plan but now I feel it was not a good decision. I don't mean that we regret supporting you but if we would have succeeded in our plan we would have ruined your chance to have such a beautiful person in your life." Nisha shifted her eyes to look at him. "Yes Nisha inspite of our plan to humiliate him and your deliberate attempts to continue with the plan he only persevered to know you better shunning aside all our immature behavior. Don't throw away the chance to have him in your life. But the decision is ultimately yours we promise to support you in whatever you decide.- Loved this part❤️I just love the dynamics of the relationship shared by the cousins❤️ Also in the show somehow, it was always Nishu who helped the cousins and not the other way round. However, this is the ideal scenerio where the cousins share a give-take relationship and not a one way relationship😃 I also loved the description 😳 Also i love the way the cousins are not forcing their decision onto Nishu or influencing it👏 They are just helping Nishu to clarify her thoughts and allowing her to take a wise decision making sure that it is not taken in haste. Also the part where Dolly and Umesh take turns to explain things to Nishu is just perfect I think this part makes us want to share such a bond and have cousins like the Gangwals🤗

Nisha lifted her head from Dolly's lap and looked at Dolly for her opinion. Dolly blinked her eyes and nodded. "Now go to sleep Nishu. It's quiet late." Umesh ordered her younger sister. Nisha obediently agreed and lied down on the bed. Umesh turned around to check on Kirti since she didn't speak at all. He found her fast asleep against the table, resting her head on the drawer of the table. Umesh smiled at her innocence. Umesh gently picked her up and laid her on the other side of the bed next to Nisha. Dolly gently kissed Nisha and Kirti's forehead. "Sleep well Nisha! Tomorrow is a big day for you." Umesh spoke like a responsible brother.- This part was so adorable😳🤗 Umesh and Dolly behaving like responsible and caring elder siblings and putting Nishu and Kirti to sleep😳

Ramesh and Lakshmi stood at the door witnessing the beautiful bond between the cousins. "I guess we worry too much" Ramesh told Lakshmi overwhelmed at what he had just witnessed. "I think the cousins have explained Nisha all that we would have. I guess she has got a young set of parents in her cousins. The cousins really have an inexplicable connect that binds them together. Nisha is lucky to have them. You know Lakshmi this is what I adore about the cousins they may commit mistakes and plan bizarre things but they are together to support each other at the end of the day."- I think Ramesh's dialogues just mirrored and reiterated the emotions we felt we read the part where cosuins support NishuThe cousins are indeed lucky to have each other🤗

"So five down two to go huh Kabir" Nisha said to herself. "Wait what five down two to go? I was counting myself with the cousins from the start. How could I do that when I didn't want him in my life? No! This cannot happen. I have taken my decision." She closed her eyes and sifted through the day's events. It was a matter of time when she drowned into her dreams. -Nishu being affected by Kabira's charm and counting herself on Kabir's side 😆😆😆 Looks like she is on Kabir's side now😆 What a perfect end to this chapter👏👏😆

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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anjali

@angelanju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

awesome update...

nisha ne ye kya kar diya???😲

and kabir behaving wierd...

waiting for next update...

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picadally

@picadally

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: ammu4u
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No i dt😲..yeh kya bath hui😕..
ab 1 week intzaaar karna padega iska jawab jaan ne keliey..uff
sukku rocked nisha shocked LOL,...Nisha ko udane ke isse acha idea kahi nahi milegaa LOL
loved RN scene...she wanted to tell her father...bt he didt asked anythng...
RaKa scene was also nice...Bt Kabiraas resonse confused me
Nibir scene👏.
waitng 4 d nxt part😉

Yes I DO kab bolenge dono😉

Jee yahi toh shock tha. Wait and watch aage kya hota hai. 😆

People are confused i am loving it 🤣 🤣

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picadally

@picadally

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: SaruSenan
Badi Sissy B4 Going to comment on ur Update.. Lemme tell U sumthing😆(I knw main hamesha aapke SS par hi aise INTRO ke saath comment karthi hu🤣 Saru Pls Focus-Monologue😳🤣)

Jab Se I started reading nah tab se I felt Sumthing is Missing...😕 Then I realised Its Ur Posting Style...😳 jiski main FAN hu..🤗 I told U abt this in My FIRST COMMMENT on this SS😉Toh Mujhe yeh poochna tha aapse ki aapne yeh wale update bina Colour ke q post kia??😲 aur Font bhi alag hai Q????😲🤣 Aap teekh hai nah???🤗

Ab Abt Update...😉 So This was the Surprise I mean Aapne bola tha nah ki aap agale update par apne readers ko yeh bolne par majboor karengi ki Next Update jaldi do..🤣 Waise mere mann main ab bhi ek hi baath goong rahi hai (11 posted now only 1 left..🤔🤣 -Bigadofied ur SS's Dialogue🤣)

Waise I liked the start I was ROFL ng🤣🤣🤣 Jis tarah se Sukku Nishu ko uda rahe the nah I loved it Bhai-Behen ka bond🤣

@BOLD It cracked me...🤣

Suku shook Nisha as if she was some machine to whip cream.

Anyways it was a dead end for me either you would thrash me or she would
I chose the former. Maa spanking me with a ruler would not look decent"
Nisha chuckled at his response. "

Waise I liked Sukku's Idea of Mentioning Kabir to wake up Nishu😉 Smart aa🤣🤣 & Nishu tu toh chat se ud gayi...😲🤣🤣 Kuch toh choot raha hai(ASR DIALOGUE☺️)😈🤣🤣

I can understand How Nishu felt when she didnt see any other cousins & Mujhe aisa q lag raha hai ki sab main kuch na kuch pak raha hai..😈 May be Dey want Nishu to confess her decision without their help?? yaa they r not approaching her bcz they feel Wat if Nishu agsin get confused???😈 Well Yeh toh mujhe bhi jaanna hai vo sab Nishu se milne q nahi aaye...😉🤣🤣

My fav scene was RN Scene... I just imagined Me at Nishu's place & My dad at Ramy's place..😳 Wat wud I tell If I came across such a situation..😳

@PINK My Fav...😳 & I want U to give Spl Claps 4 Writing this..👏👏👏 It Touched Me Soo well😳

"Ready?" Ramesh asked her with watchful eyes. "I think so" Nisha replied
confident that his father meant the mental part of Ready' and not the
physical.

She anticipated that Ramesh would ask her about her decision, she wanted
to discuss it with him but she felt her father was in no mood to ask
her about it. "Don't you want to know my decision?" Nisha asked Ramesh,
her voice was growing edgy unable to bear Ramesh's silence. "No I don't.
The decision is yours. You have always taken your own decisions and I
have never questioned you about them, not because I didn't care or
didn't want to interfere, because I knew you would take right decisions
and if you took a wrong one I knew you had the courage to correct it.
This time is no different." He pulled her closed and wrapped his arms
around her. Nisha pulled back after a while and gave him a nervous
smile. Ramesh pinched her cheeks and left. "I hope I don't disappoint
you with my decision papa" she muttered looking at Ramesh's retreating
figure.

@PINK I just Loved it Natz Sissy..❤️ Just Loved it...❤️ Thank U😳

@BLUE Again I imagined My Sirphira😆(Patha nahi kaun hoga☺️) & My Father 😳My Father will exactly say this..😳 He Knws me Inside out.. 😳 He can read My Eyes...❤️ Just Like Ramy read Nishu's Eyes..😃

"I am her father Kabir. I know everything, all that she wouldn't tell me, all that she wants to, but cannot tell me."

Again I liked How Ramesh Talked to Kabir abt Nishu...👏@RED Loved it❤️

"Kabir ...Nisha is very different from the other girls. She may not be
the girl whom every man would dream about, but she is not a girl you
wouldn't like either. What I want to say is, she is difficult to
understand, she may come across as a very difficult person but if you
look carefully, she is loving and innocent like a kid. She loves with
all her heart once she acknowledges her feelings for someone. I do not
intend to influence your decision in anyway it's just a father's love
for her daughter that wants you to know the real Nisha that hides behind
the present one."

I m Equally surprised at Kabir's Unusual Behaviour..😕 Pehle Cousins ka Weired behaviour aur ab Kabir too joined them???😲😕 Aur toh aur He wanted Nishu to say her decision first😉 Smart hai banta.. 😉socha hoga pehle uski "HAAN" sunu phir boltha hai mera "HAAN"😆🤣Ab Sissy Aisa Kya Raaz chupake rakha hai Last part ke liye??😆🤣🤣

YES I DO bulwa hi doo ab toh...

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗(Aftr this SS too😉) Q ki Saru ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Congo Shongo 4 ur promotion 🥳 Once gain I commented on ur Appreciation thread..😆 Do check🤣

So i hv already told u the reason behind the non colourful update 😆

I hv always loved hw ramesh has always given nisha the freedom to take her decisions
And i wanted to highlight that.
Kabir's behavior and nisha's answer has confused everyone 🤣 but u will get all ur answers as the last part unfolds 😉
As usual u pointed out my fav parts. Yes i hv fav parts in my own story 🤣

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picadally

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
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Awesome..update...
Starting with sukku nisha scene was hilarious... Loved it...
Convo between ramy and nisha..was also nice...loved the trust ramy had on nisha...
RaKa scenes are always welcomed...
U managed to create..the suspense well...but...I guess...there..is some twist...that nisha...is going to say..something more...and...it will change the entire equation..
Continue soon

Not bad sarthak. But i am liking the way ppl are waiting to kn what happens next.