Nibir SS: Even The Death Can't Separate Us! (Part 5- pg 10) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update
Can't wait to find out whats gna happen
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Loved it
I hope she stops him
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Hey! Really nice story!👏
Part 2 is described beautifully...Kabir is leaving really? Do something...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys... as many of u told me to post a long one... here is the next part ... tis one is indeed a looonggg one.. i wanted to give u a different storyline in wich kabir wont leave a letter to her instead tell a bye to her and then leaves so i tried this one... hope u like tis... enjoy😉

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Part 3

I just followed him to our bedroom. I want to shout to him that please don't leave coz I love you', but I can't, because of 2 things - 1) he is determined to achieve his dreams. 2) I don't want to lose one my best and special friend.

Before I could tell anything to him, he went inside the washroom to get bath. He didn't face me. So maybe he is kidding as always or is he serious? He can't leave me like this. Right now I have no expression in my face. I'm not sad and I'm not even crying, that doesn't mean I'm happy. I just... just don't know what's happening. I have to talk to him. God, he must be joking... I opened our cupboard which made me dumb. I rubbed my eyes to see whether it's true. Man! It's true... its hell true... he has packed his items... I took a look around our room to find nothing of his belonging... there is no clue that he ever lived here, except... Except his MEMORIES!!

Water filled my eyes. But I never let it flow. The truth stuck me hard. He never loved me. The smile, concern, care, and... Love I saw in his eyes was all fake. I'm so stupid to believe that he loved me too. No actually everything is real, only the love was fake. I know him, he considered me as his best friend, but nothing more than that. I look up and saw the fan. Now it is just rotating like my head. I'm fully confused. My heart says he loves me, but my brain says he doesn't. First, I believed my heart, so as a result I'm now fully broken. Brain was right. I don't want to cry. I should give him a happy farewell. I don't want to make him embarrassed by expressing my feelings.

I heard him coming out of the washroom. I went out of the room, and sat on the sofa. Now I'm just like a statue with no expressions. I'm just petrified.

"Nisha", I heard him call for the second time. I turned towards him like a robot, but I dare to see him, I may break, the second I see him.

"Nisha", he called thrice compelling me to see him. I stood from the sofa and saw him from top to bottom. He wore the shirt of our first meeting. Then the bag he carried in the trip. Suddenly the series of events that happened following it started running marathon in my mind. I rubbed the thoughts off my mind.

"So... I'm leaving ... I mean I'm going", he said. I feel that he too was hurt as much as mine. NO! My brain said. I followed it. Then I noticed, it was my turn to speak.

I opened my mouth, but nothing came out. I feel like something is crushing my throat. It happens whenever I control my tears. So just said "hmm..."

I'm damn sure that he didn't expect this response from me. I have never compressed my feeling this hard. I will cry it out or shout it out. But now I can't do anything.

He turned his head away from me. Is he crying? No nisha stop your dreams.

"When is your flight?" I asked him

"At 8:00"

"It's only 6:30 now"

"But I have to leave... Soon"

I felt my eyes moist.

"Bye" he said and walked towards the door. Opened it and went out. All happened in a second. It took me another second to put it all inside my head. What? He is going! Just like that. Without even saying a proper goodbye? I ran to the road.

"Kabir!"

"What happened?" he turned.

I don't know why I called him. "Bye" I said, this is the height of stupidity.

I saw his face turning even worse. I shouldn't have said that.

"It's GOODBYE", he corrected and turned find a rickshaw.

I felt someone is stabbing me 1000 times right in my heart. A drop of tear rolled down my cheek, which I instantly rubbed. I won't cry. I don't want to, at least not in front of him. He may feel guilty.

"Kabir" I called again.

He turned with some expectation in his eyes. I don't know what it is.

"All the best"

"Thanks, nisha", he noticed a rickshaw and called it.

I opened my mouth to call him again, but to my surprise he turned.

"Did you call me?"

I nodded no.

"Nisha, you seriously don't want to say anything?" he asked me.

I again nodded no. I lied.

He turned. His smile which always lit me up is now vanished. I don't want him to leave like this. Like with no clear conversation or with no happiness. I don't know after he goes I will be happy or not but I want him to be happy, forever.

I ran towards him. "Kabir" I shouted his name. My hands encircled his neck. I hugged him tight with all my love. He hugged me back. I felt the same love in his hug. I closed my eyes tightly to capture this moment and felling in my mind forever, because this is our last hug.

I felt his hands were doing something in my neck.

"I will miss you" he said, "will you?"

YES! I would miss your mesmerizing eyes, your evergreen smile, your care, concern, laughter, fight, etc... I will miss you totally, so please don't leave.

I said "I will miss you so much"

We were still hugging, the rickshaw man was seeing as spectator watching a show. I broke the hug, in half-heart. I looked the ground. Wait? What's just hanging in my neck? Wow! It's so beautiful. I touched the little heart shaped red color pendent which was connected to a silver chain. I gave him an incredulous expression. He smiled a little. Wow! He smiled.

"It's just a farewell gift" he said after a pause "wifey"

I smiled, and registered each and every second in my heart deeply, because it will never repeat.

"Nisha, remember one thing, always follow your heart, it always tell you the deep truth of life, which your brain won't!" he said me with a low pitch of voice.

He went inside the rickshaw, making me more and more vulnerable.

"Airport, bhaiyya" he said to the rickshaw man, the vehicle moved and I realized that I'm still holding his hands. Slowly, our hands were separating. At last it was separated. We are separated, forever. I saw the rickshaw carrying my love vanishing inside the fog of the early morning.

PRECAP - Nisha's breakdown...

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PART 4 - PAGE 8

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sry for any mistakes... i was in ahurry... ofcourse cmmnt and tell me how iz tis... silent readers click the like button... i hope u guys loved it...


Edited by ..krystal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Loved it krystu
It was great
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
krystal nice part..Nibir separted😭.
waitng 4 the nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Awesome update
Feel bad for nisha
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome update..
please bring back Nibir together..
waiting for your next update..!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
oh man...kabir is not expressing his feelings...nisha will see that wont she?...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Krys u have the talent of bringing an emotion into a person with ur writing .
Its beautiful
NiBir separated 😭
u penned it very elegantly👏
Continue soon 😳😳

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