Nibir SS: Even The Death Can't Separate Us! (Part 5- pg 10)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys... weekends are very boring without nibir... so i decided to write a ss on them... here it is... its just a start... as i said before i'm not a good writer and i feel writing is definitely not my cup of tea... but u guys have to bear me and my writing😆... becoz i cant control myself from writing about nibir...
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PART 1

It is a dry summer. The first beam of sunlight hit my face, disturbing my sleep. I extended my hand to feel him. Where is he? I felt a hard surface. I frown in puzzlement, then lift my head a little and open my eyes. It took me few minutes to recognize where I am. I screw up my face, trying to remember. Snatches of yesterday are vivid in my mind. Ya! I am in our terrace. We both slept here yesterday, as there was current cut. Yes! It was his idea. I took my mobile, the time is 5:50 am. I think he woke before me and went down without disturbing me.

I rubbed my eyes and stood on my feet, ignoring my throbbing head. I walked further and placed my hands on the boundary wall. I looked around to admire the beauty of this place. We shifted to this flat 1 month ago. It is indeed a beautiful place. Due to summer the margins of the leaves were nibbled with brown, and the trees are shaking slightly because of the soft breeze, just like my hair. It felt like the air is kissing me softly. A small smile crept in my lips unknowingly. I realized myself as a fully changed one, yet remain the same. It's hard to explain. But I know this change is only because of him. He made me change in an unexpected way. He is my prince charming and the savior with golden armor. Is I am in LOVE?? I don't know, maybe yes! He is everything for me. I smiled again thinking of myself. Me the great tomboy of Jaipur is now standing in the terrace at early morning and admiring the beauty of nature and blushing because of a guy. I smiled thrice. It's indeed a perfect scenario to think about him.

My phone beeped continuously, dragging me out of my dreamland. I rubbed the thoughts off and reached for my phone. It was a remainder. REMAINDER?...

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okay guys... tis just a start as i said before ... i hope u liked it... if not then your scolding are also welcome... so tell me how iz tis?

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INDEX

PART 1 - ABOVE

PART 2 - PAGE 4

PART 3 - PAGE 6

PART 4 - PAGE 8

PART 5 - PAGE 10

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RosaDola99 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ya it is boring in the weekends without nibir
nice story
hope its not a bad reminder
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Terra04

Ya it is boring in the weekends without nibir
nice story
hope its not a bad reminder

sorry... if i disappoint u buddy...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start.do continue..eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely strt
so continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely start
is it the reminder suggesting that 3 months are over???
ok i have to be patient😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey lovely start to ur story
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start
Update soon
And if possible please pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bravo start krys 👏
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start dear
Continue soon and thanks 4 the pm

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