Nibir SS: Even The Death Can't Separate Us! (Part 5- pg 10) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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An interesting start would love to read further... Continue soon
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Nice start.. loved it..please continue soon..!!!! 😛
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comment se to lagta hain tumhara ki 3 months khatam hone wala reminder hoga...I love u a lot krystal and loving this story as well :* ummmah!
Posted: 10 years ago
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woh wat a start...
who told u that u r a bad writer???
damn this was so amazing one :)
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madly waiting for next part... update asap as i m not made for waiting...

waiting karna mere system me nahii hai :p

pm karna mat bhoolna meko :D
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Nyc starting
luvd it
plz do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww.. thnk u sooo much guys 4 ur lovely cmmnts... it means a lot to me...
will update today for sure...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikhad003

comment se to lagta hain tumhara ki 3 months khatam hone wala reminder hoga...I love u a lot krystal and loving this story as well :* ummmah!

niks have patience yaar... will update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnk u soo much frnds... no more need to wait i'm updating now... 😊
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krystal nice start.waitng 4 the nxt part
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Hi to my dear k khandhan... so here im updating the next one...
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PART-2

My hands were shivering like hell now. My eyes blurred due to my tears, I don't know when and how it came. I just instantly rubbed it away as well as praying to god that it should not be that.

I read it - "phew!! The end of marriage contract" I made this remainder the day we got married. I again read it, hoping that I was wrong. But it indeed said so, the reality stuck me. What the hell? How can three months go this much soon? I checked the date. Oh man! Why everything is against me? Oh my god! He now will leave to London ... wait!! Has he left? No. No, that can never happen... he would at least tell me... Or not? My chest feels tight; I feel like I'm being smothered. I could be having a panic attack. Panic hit me like lightning bolts. What if he has not left? What if he too loves me? I should at least check before coming to conclusion, alerted my brain.

"KABIR!!" I shouted rather calling. I ran downstairs like a cheetah following me, calling him. My steps halted in our doorstep. I stopped in front of our door. My hands were ice-cold. With a shivering hand, I pushed the door. It was open. There was pin drop silence which was killing me right now. I searched him in our living room - no he is not there. Then I walked towards our disastrous kitchen-no! I searched him in our bedroom, washroom - no, no he is not here. Even this thought killed me. But he is somewhere here. I can feel him. How he managed to make me this much foolish??

I hear someone humming. I ran to the balcony to find him admiring the nature just like me, few minutes ago. Thank god for showing me your mercy. He is here right in front of my eyes. He is with me. My heart continued to beat now. I think maybe he has forgotten about our contract?? If it is so then it is great. I saw him; he have placed his hand on the grill and humming some song. Wow! How beautiful he is? I went to him placed my hand on his. He turned and smiled at me. Thank you so much god! He is near me only, and it's not a hallucination. His watch showed me the time as 6:00am.

"How come you woke sooo early today?" I asked him, stressing the word so'.

"I have to", he smiled.

"Why?" I said in reflex.

"Yaar, wifey don't act, today is your happiest day, you are free now, and I'm going to leave" he said increasing his volume a little, without meeting my eyes.

Now I really want to jump from this balcony. So, he remembers!

He continued turning away "I'm going towards my dream and you back to your family" with this he left the balcony, leaving me stunned. I'm not sure what have I just heard? I thought he too loves me! But...

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PART 3 - PAGE 6

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So howz iz it? i hope u liked it..silent readers jst press the like button...sry if u feel its too short...

Edited by ..krystal - 10 years ago

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