Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 21

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

OMG!!!Laxmi angry😲... but still again it was a very nice update 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Niha205

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Loved it..waiting for your next part.. 😛

Just awesome...😊...and cute ...😛

Awesome so cute really loved nisha drunk😊

Amazing update yaar...luvd it...!!👏

thanx all ^_^

Very sweet and cute update 😳👍🏼

Hy guys... 😃 What's ups?? :p U all really wanted to read next parts?? Haina? Me bahut zyada hi intezar karwaing!! :p Sorry!! But i promise will update before this week end,,.. :) Today gonna talk abt something else... Read out plz... 😉 I m famous on instagram for my crazy captions... Main hamesha serials & all pe comment pass karti rehti hu... (just for fun type) I make ppl laugh with my post... Soch rahi yahan sab ko thoda hansa du... Aj koi serial ya kisi chiz pe nahi apni hi story pe tippani karne ka mann h!! 😆 Meri story me flaws Ki koi kami nai h!! 😆 galtiyan to bhari hui hain... Typing mistakes ki baat nahi kar rahi... :p Aur b bahut utpatang chize likhi hai maine iss story me... 😆 Ab tum sab to hamesha tareef hi karte rehte ho... ^_^ Halanki Khamiya to sabko dikhti hongi... Par koi batata nahi hai... I know why... Bcoz nobody wants to hurt me with rude comments... Right?? So Let me criticize my own writings today 😃 ... Bcoz m crazy... 😉 u know wat ye ek 3 shot story Thi!! Last 3rd part me climax... But first 2 parts pe itna achcha response Mila meko k Maine climax ko push away kar Diya and i extended the story... Aur aise dhakka Mara hai climax ko k ab mujhe hi nahi pata Wo kahan gumm ho Gaya hai??? 😆 😆 😆 mujhe kahin mil hi nahi raha hai Wo!! 😃 TS se SS ban gayi ye story... 15 parts likh dale... Par abtak end door door tak nahi hai!! Lagta hai ab SS se FF hi karna padega isko 😆😆 Meri story i think Last 2 months se chal rahi hai... Exactly yaad nai!! Part 15 tak pahunch gayi But story me ab tak 2 din hi poore hue hai!! Can u believe that??? 😆 Yar me to CVs se bhi slow hu!! 😆 😆 Meri story na musical love story hai!! 15 parts me 6 songs daal diye maine lol 😆 all my fav songs 😉 ab bhi song list khatam ni hui!! Jo tv show me ni hua, wo khuwahish yahan poori kar rahi hu apni!!! Saare favs songs nibir ko dedicate karing 😉 Ye to hui story ki baat... Ab chapters ki karte hai(inside the story) Part1 me kya solid English use ki thi maine... Phir dheere dheere aukat par aa gayi 😆 😆 Puri story+dialogues in English... >_< iey humse na hui :p Dekho bhai HINDI HAIN HUM... And waise b nibir dialogues ka real fun Hindi me hi ata hai... 😉 Part2 me wo mangalsutr stuck into chain scene... Ufff tooo much typical 😃 bachpan se leke aj tak pata nahi kitne serial & movies me dekha hoga ye typical scene!! 😆 lol And part 3 ... One of my favs... Chutu Sa Tha but i really wish Wo real scene hota... Nibir Realization aftr almost kiss scene... Haye re Maine kitna achcha likhti Hu dialogues!! 😃 I m too good lol.. apne muh se apni tareef... 😆 😆 And Part 4 me cousins bonding... Jisko we really miss nowadays... Part 5 Nibir cute convo and pillow fight... K & j dialogue... Kitna time ho Gaya ye dialogue sunke... Last episodes me v cv log ne nahi Diya ye dialogues ... And ab to nauc is over!!& I miss it badly!! And cute wala cheek kiss... Kabir ne kiya part 5 me... Part 15 me Nisha se karwa Diya Maine.. 😆 Hosh me to ni karne wali aasani se... Isliye Uske nashe hone ka fayda utha liya maine... 😉 huhuhuh... Evil Smile But u know wat ... 10 parts me ek hi din khatam hua hai yar!! Ek raat pehle Nishu ko kissi mili & second night Kabir ko...!! 😆 😆 ROFL and pata ni kisi ne notice kiya ya nahi... Saare songs Kabir hi imagine karta hai yar!! Pehle 'Is this love' wala song (part4) and then 'banjare ko ghar'(part 10) and abi part 16 me v hai ek 😆 Part 6 & 7 me Nisha ka Kabir Ko pani mar ke uthana!! 😆 Dadaji ka Nibir ko bulana ... Wahan pe Kabir ka Nishu ko tease karna & phir sorry bolna 😆 Kabir ke aise wale dialogues bahut yaad ate hai yaar!! Last last me to ekdum rotlu bana diya usko show me CVs ne .. -_- Oops yahan critize karna tha and main to discuss karte baith gayi story... 😆 😆 SORRY 😆 And one more thing... The songs... Yar mereko pasand v aise songs hai jiske lyrics complicated hai!!! 😆😆 Itna googling karna pada !!!ufff... My sis toh said inn songs ke lyrics ko leke sab confused hi honge & meri story padhke sochenge "achcha to ye lines thi song me!" :p lol 😆 And me bahut bahut lazy Hu!!! Ab tak i didn't completed writing this story!!! Kab start Ki Thi izko?? I think nibir Ki 2 shaadi ke 2 ya 3 days baad!! and ab show v khatam ho gayi!! But meri story part15 pr hi atki h!!! 😆 kabi kabi toh i couldn't believe k Maine 15 parts likh kaise diye??? 😃 lol Chalo ab tum log Ki baari... Feel free to criticize my story... Ab tak sabse bakwas part konsa laga??? 😃 sachchi sachchi bolna!! 😉 aj bindaas bolo... Me bura nai manungi!!! 😉

wat a post... awesome yaar