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Posted: 10 years ago
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i wanted to discuss about a os yaar. i have got a plot in mind. it will have 3 scenes KN RaKa and RN. Its about nisha's dream. can u help me??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sure yar...tell me...😊

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it will start with KN talking about dreams and then through their talks kabir finds out nisha's passion for archery. but when he asks her to continue it she denies. then he thinks about talking to ramy about it. then ramy convinces nisha to take up archery again.
I am confused with raka now. what will they talk. should i make kabir aware of nisha's past or should it be unknown. i want it to be unknown but how will ramy tell him why nisha left archery??? i dont want a serious plot too. I want it to be simple.
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Originally posted by: Teogapi

it will start with KN talking about dreams and then through their talks kabir finds out nisha's passion for archery. but when he asks her to continue it she denies. then he thinks about talking to ramy about it. then ramy convinces nisha to take up archery again.

I am confused with raka now. what will they talk. should i make kabir aware of nisha's past or should it be unknown. i want it to be unknown but how will ramy tell him why nisha left archery??? i dont want a serious plot too. I want it to be simple.


Dreams in career...I thought nightmare.

Hmm...I think containing it to 3 scenes might be difficult. Here is my idea.

KN have a talk, as you said..and Kabir gets to know of archery but Nisha brushes it away.

After few months or so...RaKa can be discussing about their academy perhaps...and would be excited as their dream would come true...and Kabir can tell Ramesh how Nisha isn't pursuing archery and is wasting her talent. Ramesh understands what Nisha's problem is...and then talks to her?
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Originally posted by: Shwets1502


Dreams in career...I thought nightmare.

Hmm...I think containing it to 3 scenes might be difficult. Here is my idea.

KN have a talk, as you said..and Kabir gets to know of archery but Nisha brushes it away.

After few months or so...RaKa can be discussing about their academy perhaps...and would be excited as their dream would come true...and Kabir can tell Ramesh how Nisha isn't pursuing archery and is wasting her talent. Ramesh understands what Nisha's problem is...and then talks to her?

good idea. there can be a time gap and nisha will snap at kabir whenever he talks about her restarting her career in archery. but shoud kabir be aware of her past in the os??? i dont want him too coz he then can try to convince her in a differnt way instead of irritating her now and then. but if he is aware he will approach it in a serious manner na?? but if kabir does not know about the past and goes to ramy and asks him why did he quit archery wont ramy tell him??? i want a Raka convo without touching the past. it can be in ramy's thoughts but kabir should be unaware, thats where i am confused. maybe ramy canassume kabir knows about the past and mentions it in a way like tumhe toh pata hai napilani mein kay hua nisha ne bataya hoga types??? kabir nods his head thinking agar inhe pata chala ki nisha ne nahi bataya toh he will find out about cm??😕
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Originally posted by: Teogapi

good idea. there can be a time gap and nisha will snap at kabir whenever he talks about her restarting her career in archery. but shoud kabir be aware of her past in the os??? i dont want him too coz he then can try to convince her in a differnt way instead of irritating her now and then. but if he is aware he will approach it in a serious manner na?? but if kabir does not know about the past and goes to ramy and asks him why did he quit archery wont ramy tell him??? i want a Raka convo without touching the past. it can be in ramy's thoughts but kabir should be unaware, thats where i am confused. maybe ramy canassume kabir knows about the past and mentions it in a way like tumhe toh pata hai napilani mein kay hua nisha ne bataya hoga types??? kabir nods his head thinking agar inhe pata chala ki nisha ne nahi bataya toh he will find out about cm??😕


Oh...so this happens when CM is still on?
In that case, we would have detective Ramy na?
Why don't you set it, just after CM?

May be Kabir senses there is something that Nisha hasn't told him...and Ramesh also knows that...but want Nisha herself to tell it? And hence subtly makes Kabir understand that Nisha left because of her past?
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Originally posted by: Shwets1502


Oh...so this happens when CM is still on?
In that case, we would have detective Ramy na?
Why don't you set it, just after CM?

May be Kabir senses there is something that Nisha hasn't told him...and Ramesh also knows that...but want Nisha herself to tell it? And hence subtly makes Kabir understand that Nisha left because of her past?

but if i set it after cm then kabir ka lsd wala sapna will be phuss na??? i was thinking to continue from the scene where kabir got into LSD> before bunty tamasha and all. tab even sumit was not in chuha mode. and he did not know about cm and gda had not started.😆
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Why not end all the problems before 3 months itself? CM/GDA all comes out...but 3 months isn't over? Just that...Kabir-Nisha haven't confessed their love for each other...?
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Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Why not end all the problems before 3 months itself? CM/GDA all comes out...but 3 months isn't over? Just that...Kabir-Nisha haven't confessed their love for each other...?

but kabir going to LSD is an important part yaar. and i dont want them in love. i like their friendship more than love. i want KN in friendship mode.😆
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