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Originally posted by: Teogapi

then he can allow umesh and sukku too to try out their dreams in the end.

We made one concrete story na last mein. Like ramy allows her for the trip but she comes back coz people gossip because of PC then she gets her nightmare back them the olxing attacks become more frequent and rl come to know. Them they take her to counsellor but she runs back home them somehow the family too comes to know then they support her and she overcomes her past fully. No viraj no kabir only ramy and GF.

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

It would just be a OS...Dadaji seeing the difference of parenting. When Ramesh was brought back from Mumbai...or even when he returned now...Dadaji behaved very coldly and taunting na...He probably would think Ramesh would do the same, but Ramesh would be more understanding? And then would see Bunty opening up and telling his problems and also confessing that he indeed made a mistake and a genuine apology?

You should have said...family getting to know Nisha's past wala story...I would have got it..😆 Yeah...that takes time though...Let me finish what I have in hand...😆 Lakshmi-Dadi one is the toughest one...the rest two can be completed quickly.

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Sukku? But Sukku running away would mean questions raised at Ramesh's parenting na? Bunty may run away in impulse or because of bad company?

Haha...Come on yar...Write a small scene...You are underestimating yourself. Just come up with a rough one...

It's not like I am an expert in writing. I love writing and want to improve...I just put down my thoughts..that's it.

Originally posted by: _UptoNoGood_

Shwetha di... Ab I'm feeling like a little kid tugging at her teacher to see her drawing... 😳

Maine ek aur Gayathri sonnet likha. Thoda sa macabre hai...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4279914&TPN=8

Originally posted by: Teogapi

sukku runs away coz if dadaji maybe???? U can show that during sukku ramy talks and dadaji hears Ir and feels bad???

Me and my friend wrote one GF in DMG forum. Actually it was my friends we divided the work. She wrote for the main couple while I wrote for others. She was more into romance and mW in comedy.😆

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Because of Dadaji? Yet Ramy talks good about Dadaji and how his viewpoint is also right and that makes Dadaji feel bad?

Haha...try a comic one here also na? Nisha and Ramy cooking..😉

Originally posted by: Teogapi

dadaji guilty would be cherry on the cake.

Let me try one. Rn cooking like nisha getting feeling bad that only Lakshmi cooks and then ramy.and nisha together decide to ciiko for lakshmi as a surprise bit it turns into shock??