Brother mine [TS, Rajbir] - Part 3, pg. 9

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#21

Originally posted by: kaku17
Amazing. ...loved the convo between the two brothers. ..I love kabir n his character portrayal. ...guess more than nibir I like rajbir. ...a request if possible plz send a pm wen u update. ...

Thank you, dear 😆 Yes, I, too, am eagerly waiting for RajBir - that holi scene had me over the moon 😆 I will send you a pm 😉

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#22

Originally posted by: _UptoNoGood_
Wow!
*tries to reinstate power of saying more* *not working*

Wow! *gapes at screen in awe*

This is... *what have you done to me* This is amazing!

*Still dizzy with the awesome-ness*

Next update pe PM milega? 😛

Aww, thanks, Shivi! 🤗

Was soo happy after reading your comment, you can't imagine! 😳

And haan, PM zaroor milega 😉

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#23

Originally posted by: Kriyansh
Awesome yaar..now I m Lin love with RajBir if this actually happens...write the next part fast can't wait...

Thank, yaar! 🤗 Well, CVs trying to throw water on our RajBir dreams 😆 But I still keep hope 😉

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#24

Originally posted by: SONAL30
nice start yaar
continue soon

Thank you, Sonal 😳

Originally posted by: sunless-sea
I juzxx love it...beautifully written..plzzz cont. Soon...

Thanks a lot! Will be posting in a bit 😳

Originally posted by: achirasingh16
nice one...you are an amazing writer!!!

Aww, thank you, dear! 😳

Originally posted by: ashred12
Awwwesome...plsss continue soon...

Thanks a lot! 🤗

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#25

Originally posted by: aditi_sweet
Wow!!👏😎...Awestruck by your RajBir inspired writing...@ Noor..you spoil us by giving such a beautiful piece of story, as it would lead to disappointment if in the serial, they dont match up at that level...!!.😉.. The best part about the TS is you retained the originality of the characters :)...
Looking forward to reading the story ahead

Hey, Aditi! 😆 Wow, thanks a lot 😳 Lol, well, seeing the newest spoilers, we will have to wait for awesome bromance of Rajbir 😭 Chalo, let's enjoy Sukku-Kabir in between 😆 And thank you 😉

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#26

Originally posted by: bobadekajal88.8
your story is so different from others girl.the emotions expressed by your words are awesome girl eagerly waiting for the nxt part hope that kabir will be ok.nisha was worried for kabir so sweet and also emotional.love nibir.

Thank you 😉 Yes, most stories are romantic ones and here, I come with bromance 😆 Glad you liked it 😉

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#27

Originally posted by: CrazyMe_04
Wow! Although I am a Niraj fan I prefer Rajbir bromance than Niraj or Nibir romance...Therefore this story of the two brothers was absolutely amazing!!! Please give the next part soon...

Really? 😉 Yes, I'm more excited for RajBir than NiBir 😆 I am updating the next part in a bit 😃

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#28

Originally posted by: Asyalover
i hope kabir wont die...nd nish comes too

Nah, I love Kabir 😉 And Nisha will be there, too, don't worry 😆

Originally posted by: janvi0513
This is greatI wish they show RabBir story properly and don't mess up stuff

Thanks, Janvi 🤗 Well, they threw in a bomb for RajBir, let's see how that goes 😆

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#29

Originally posted by: zainabawoon
Wow!!! This was Amazing!!! Just LOVED it! kabir suffering and Rajbir phone convo 😭 you have very beautifully expressed Nisha's kabir's and viraj's feelings and emotions 👏 it was really heart wrenching! Hope the cvs also show the RajBir bond and their story properly and beautifully. It has so much potential

Aww, thanks, yaar! 😉 I was about to PM you that day when I read you comments and had to smile 😆 CVs threw in a bomb for our RajBir - let's see what they do and if they are able to portray a sweet bond, at some point 😳