Brother mine [TS, Rajbir] - Part 3, pg. 9

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Aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Wow!!!...Absolute delight of a chapter...it just digs into the hearts and renders it full of emotions whether be it happiness, sympathy, hope for two people who have since being in same place collided at wrong places and yet plan to sue destiny and win against it!!...

RajBir in the show, I am hoping against hope to have such a beautiful start instead of obvious hate track...

Couldnt stop myself from commenting inspite of having decided not to comment on any of the Fiction works as of now!!! :p

Happy and safe journey Noorie...:D

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: shailusri1983
A very beautiful and touching piece of work. Glad that I caught up with this one just as I am on the verge of leaving IF for a couple of months. Thank you for sharing this creative piece of yours with all of us.

Thank you, dear! 😉 I am really happy that you liked this little story of mine 😳
Thank you for commenting - and hope to see you soon on IF again 😊

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: aditi_sweet
Wow!!!...Absolute delight of a chapter...it just digs into the hearts and renders it full of emotions whether be it happiness, sympathy, hope for two people who have since being in same place collided at wrong places and yet plan to sue destiny and win against it!!...

RajBir in the show, I am hoping against hope to have such a beautiful start instead of obvious hate track...

Couldnt stop myself from commenting inspite of having decided not to comment on any of the Fiction works as of now!!! :p

Happy and safe journey Noorie...:D

Aww, thank you, yaar! 🤗 So glad that you liked this chapter- as I was in somewhat of a pressure writing it, I feared that it might have come out... not so good 😛 And you are right - the hate track is so obvious that I would simply love to see them taking a different route. It would be a delight - I simply want some sweet bromance 😳

And I'm glad that you commented 😆

Thank you! InshaAllah, we will have a safe journey - and I will be back soon 😉

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Perfect ending ! Fab dearie! 🤗 n happy n safe trip hun!

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Ashliana

@wayback

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Hi Noor...have a safe journey 😊 ..
Be happy and safe... 😃
Amazing work with amazing ending..
Just loved this part was eagerly waiting for this...

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Loved it Noor...thank you so so so so sooo much for posting...thank you ...update was very nice...i have no words to say but it was excillent...really it was amazing...the way you have write it...its brilliant...beyond words... 👏

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samara275

@samara275

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Yayyy!! I was waiting for your update!😃

Noor you're too good man! Loved it! You've expressed their internal turmoil so well..
Please do update No Bounds as well! Nibir ka season chal raha hai na..😳

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kaku17

@kaku17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Wow. ..what an update. ..perfectly balanced. ..amazing ending to an awesome ff...Thanks for posting. ...n wish you a safe journey. ...( btw was keeping tabs on this ff...everyday used to check for the update )...

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1032447

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

This is indeed beautiful! A very touching one..
I'm really really .. I don't know what to say..
But the pain was felt.. In my heart too.. Though its imaginary..Reel..Fiction.. It's affected!
:)

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