Brother mine [TS, Rajbir] - Part 3, pg. 9

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Aww, you ended it there?! I wanted to read more!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Long update yayy.

Is der a cont ??
I wanna c viru's reaction:)
Awesome update as usual noor!!

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kajal bobade

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Eagerly waiting for it continue soon yaar

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Ashliana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awesome yaar Noor...
Amazing loving Rajbir...
And Kabir awesome...
👏 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: WaterIce
Great story!! Something different, and totally worth reading. Also there is the fact that you write beautifully... every thought, every emotion... everything is so well portrayed👏👏
Can't wait to read more...

Thank you a lot, dear 😳 So glad that you like my story as much as my writing 😆 Emotions are the part in which I put most of my effort into- they are most important so that wen can feel with the character; so really happy that I am doing an alright job with them 😳

Will post the next part soon 😉

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Originally posted by: Aditi_28
You had me howling at "Do you think m fat?" 😆
I loved this way too much. Beyond words. It was really brilliantly written.
And I don't know what else can be said here :P
But now, I'm desperately waiting for the next part...

Isn't that so typically Kabir? 😆

And, aww, thank you, yaar 🤗 So glad that you are loving this little story of mine 😳 And I will post the next part soon- will start working on it very soon.

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Originally posted by: bobadekajal88.8
Wow what an update yaar 👏 👏 ...what an awesome writter u r...really loved it the way nisha was worried for kabir and also rajbir bonding was express really well...tumne toh hame apne story ki lat laga di...ab main nxt part ka wait kaise karungi?

Thanks a lot, yaar! 🤗 Are, Nisha is just irritated with him on the surface, inwardly she cares a lot 😉 Aww, wait to karna pade ga 😆 But promise, I'll try to post very soon- RajBir has me now, I'm very much inspired by these two 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: janvi0513
Amazing
Simply amazing

Thanks, Janu! 🤗

Originally posted by: Asyalover
love the family's nd nisha concern

Yes, I think that would be exactly how they react should such a similar incident happen in the show 😳

Originally posted by: Sweets101
Wow, wow, wow...beautifully written

Aww, thank you 😳

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Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
Rajbir... ❤️ them. N kb's non stp nonsnz ? Totally awesome! 😆

Thanks, Nix 😆 It's just how I imagine Kabira with Viraj. He talks a lot, anyway, but in this case... I just imagine him annoying the hell out of Viraj and in the process, growing on him 😆

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