Brother mine [TS, Rajbir] - Part 3, pg. 9

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Aditi

@Infinite_Flame

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wow!!👏😎...Awestruck by your RajBir inspired writing...@ Noor..you spoil us by giving such a beautiful piece of story, as it would lead to disappointment if in the serial, they dont match up at that level...!!.😉.. The best part about the TS is you retained the originality of the characters :)...

Looking forward to reading the story ahead

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kajal bobade

@bobadekajal88.8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

your story is so different from others girl.the emotions expressed by your words are awesome girl eagerly waiting for the nxt part hope that kabir will be ok.nisha was worried for kabir so sweet and also emotional.love nibir.

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Shree

@CrazyMe_04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow! Although I am a Niraj fan I prefer Rajbir bromance than Niraj or Nibir romance...Therefore this story of the two brothers was absolutely amazing!!! Please give the next part soon...

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

i hope kabir wont die...nd nish comes too

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janvi0513

@janvi0513

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

This is great
I wish they show RabBir story properly and don't mess up stuff

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zainabawoon

@zainabawoon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wow!!! This was Amazing!!! Just LOVED it! kabir suffering and Rajbir phone convo 😭 you have very beautifully expressed Nisha's kabir's and viraj's feelings and emotions 👏 it was really heart wrenching! Hope the cvs also show the RajBir bond and their story properly and beautifully. It has so much potential

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kajal bobade

@bobadekajal88.8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

pls continue soon yaar eagerly waiting for it...

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Vrushika321

@Vrushika321

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Really very nice one.

Loved the way u showed all of the three characters emotions.

Do update soon.

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Rainbow2525

@Rainbow2525

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Wow amazing...just love it :)

plz continue soon

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1018283

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Aditi_28
I loved your descriptions. Of pain, confusion, angst, everything. This was just brilliant. Also, a word of praise for keeping everyone true to character. I loved it! :)

Thanks, Aditi 🤗 Glad you're liking this SS of mine 😉 I'm just trying to portray them as I see them, glad you like it 😳