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-Drama_Queen-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: zaara610
Glad to know that you are continuing your ss..
please pm me..we are waiting..😛

thanks Rituu!! 🤗 and ill pm u surely! 😃

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-Drama_Queen-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Another Note:

Hi guys, time to update!! 😉😉 Firstly the new/old characters that are not clear in mind, ill introduce them😃

Sakshi Rathore (Kabir's girfriend):

Suketu Gangwal (Nisha's younger brother)

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-Drama_Queen-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Heyy guys, new chapter is up! Enjoy Reading!

Chapter 3: D.R.E.A.M

"Love comes like a dream and leaves as a nightmare." Who knew Nisha, a simple cheerful girl would suffer one of the most agonizing battles of her life where she awaits for the sunrise each day; the pinkish glow, clouds tinted, colours spread across the sky announcing the new day. Orange and red painted across the clouds as if by a celestial hand. However, she had forget the past and safeguard her little brother, Suketu.

"Dida!" comes a voice behind the sofa, Nisha sat on.

Nisha turned around and took a 4 year old child into her arms and indulging him by kissing him on the cheeks.

"I'm hungry, dida, please give me food". He made a puppy face.

"two minutes only" Nisha made him sit on the dining chair and gave him pasta.

She drops him off to school and reaches her workplace in time. Meanwhile, at Kabir's house, there was a different morning; sunrise is the precious gold that is to be found in Kabir and Sakshi's life.

"Meri jaan is making pasta to make it up for me from last night." Kabir whispers to himself. He hugs her from behind and spreads his arms around her waist.

"Jaan, aaj dinner karne chale!" Sakshi trys to act romantic.

"Sure love! I'll meet at 5 in your office, wahan we'll go." Kabir says excitedly, believing his girlfriend. They soon eat breakfast and leave for their respective workplaces.

Late in the evening, Nisha was lost in her thoughts while getting ready for her date with Kabir. "Maybe this stranger too is a double-crosser, who knows he will also..."

"Dida" Suketu sweetly hugged his sister.

"Haan bacha" Nisha replied

"Chalo naaa...my friends waiting for me"

Nisha smiled and nodded.

*Kabir and Nisha's Attire for their dates:

While, Nisha drops Suketu at daycare, Kabir gets a message from Sakshi where she informs him that she'll meet him directly in the restaurant. Soon, they both reach their destinations and await for their partners.

It is said Patience is power but it waits on the right time to act. Kabir and Nisha had the power to have patience but waiting for something that will never happen isn't what they want, thus they stood up from their chairs and left the place.

They thought to go somewhere where they would be alone for the rest of the night, thus they drove their cars to another destination and co-incidentally landed on the same place; the beach.

Nisha walked out of her and locked it whereas Kabir was still in his car holding Sakshi's photo and sobbing.

"Maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha, u'll do this to me" Kabir spoke to himself while crushing the photo and throwing it away from the car's window.

While Nisha saw a Ice cream van and ordered a chocolate ice cream. She noticed a piece of paper near her foot. She picked it up and it turned out to Sakshi, however the girl was unknown to Nisha. She didn't spot anyone looking for a photo. Thus, she held it to herself and kept enjoying her ice cream.

Kabir got out of his car and started looking for the picture but he didn't know he was running into danger. He suddenly bumped into a girl and a glance of her made Kabir guilty as she was the same girl whom he met on the bridge, the girl who saved him from falling over, who made him smile after years.

Precap:

"Nisha...please don't go" Kabir held her wrist from behind.

"Kabir, let go of my hand" Nisha struggled with Kabir's strong physique. Though he pulled her to his side and placed his arms around her waist and noticed the sparkle in her chocolate brown eyes. He brought her an inch away from his face.

Soo!?? Kaisa laga mera waapis aana and how was the chapter guys?? 😃😃 eagerly waiting for all ur comments.

P.S Pms will be sent out later, im so hungry right, rushing to eat my breakfast!😆😉 par please read it until i send pms! love u all! hope it was upto ur expectations! 😃

Edited by -Drama_Queen- - 10 years ago

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picadally

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Wow very nice update kiran

I feel as if nisha has a past too. I hope she gives kabir her piece of mind for not turning up 😡

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ammu4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

superb update Kiran👏

u added pics👍🏼 nishu ko 4 saal ka bhai sukethu so sweet😉

this sakshi is😡 tune kaira ko sakhi banaya😆

Kabir forgot abt date with Nisha😡

bt he bumbed into nisha😆

precap sound intresting update soon😉

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NITI VYAS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Kabir forgets abt date wit nisha but bumps im to her. Shows that they r made for each other. Suketu was cute nd this ome is toh super cute. Nocely written pm me nxt.tym plz.

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Saranya Senan M C

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

res😆

UNRES NO:61😆

Hello Kiruzz😉🤗
Saru here.. Hope U rem me..🤣

First Welcome Back to NAUC FORUM & NiBir WRITING PANEL🤗

I had read the pre 2 chapters b4 during my KS mode here but commenting on it 4 first time😆🤣

Now I read all chapters in a row again to recollect the stry😉😆🤣

Superbly written...👏👏👏
Kabir ke liye bura lagtha hai.. Sakshi😡🤢🤢 Doesnt desrve him yaar..👎🏼

Nishu trying to make Kabir SMile.. Aw... Cute & Sweet😳😆

Nishu &Her Bhaiyaa Cute Sukku...😳 Loved the way he calls "DIDA"😳

Toh Kabira bhool gay kya unka DATE??😲 vo bhi uss SAKSHI ke liye😡🤢

Acha hua Uss Sakshi ne usse dhoka dia..

AB Hoga NiBir ka Date😉😆🤣

Waise Mujhe aisa q lag raha hai Nisha too had a past??😕 vo bhi Hurt huyi hai pyaar main?😕

Donom ek saath ek hi jagah.. Ayee Hayeee Dekho toh Destiny also want them to be together... DAKKANS ko kab akal aayegi???🤣

Precap So cool👏👏👏
Update soon..😃
Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago