NiBir SS: The Perfect Stranger - Chapter 3 - Page 11 and 12

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Okay, so im new to this forum! and im just loving NiBir, i couldnt help but write an OS on them, lekin as u will see, i have changed the characters traits a bit, i thought it will be fun! 😉 hope yoy guys like it! 😃 Happy reading :)

Chapter 1: Our New Beginning!

Sydney, Australia, 20:30

"Main tumse baat nahi karna chahti Kabir! You're so immature; you don't care about me or this relationship"

"Please listen to me baby"

"Don't baby me...just get out of my life Kabir!"

"Sakshi dekho yeh humari life ka sawal hai!? Please mujhe samjhne ko koshish karo?"

"Sirf tumhe samjhun and tum...kabhi mujhe samjhne ki koshish ki..." :( *crying

Kabir put his hands on Sakshi's cheeks very gently but she instantly took his hands off from her cheeks and dropped them down.

"I hate you Kabir!" She bursted out her emotions and ran away from there. Kabir broke down into tears, closing his eyes.

"Its final main aaj sab khatam kar dunga" He said to himself while climbing on the railing of the Harbor Bridge.

Kabir once again closed his eyes and gulped in air. He took a step to the right on the bridge but accidentally hung in the middle of nowhere; he held the railing, looked down to see the height of the bridge., if he survives then what would he do.

"Come on Kabir, ab I should let my hand go and saari problems khatam ho jaayengi..."

"Marene jaa rahe ho?!!!" A lady came and stood right in front of Kabir on the bridge.

Kabir raised his chin and saw a pretty girl; a gaze in her eyes and mischievous smile with black hair and casually dressed.

"Nahi, just hanging garden mein jhul raha hoon." Kabir said sarcastically and smiled.

"Actually mujhe pehle doubt tha but ab its all clear now." The lady said while smiling."Okay then main chalti hoon!" She turned around to walk further on.

Kabir let his hand go but the lady caught it in the right time.

"Itna aasaan nahi hai, pehle tumne mujhe dhoka diya aur ab suicide! Nahi, main tumhe aisa nahi karne dungi!" The lady said in a filmy style.

"Nahi yaar, bahut zyaada drama ho gaya; kuch aur try karte hai...hmmm..."

"Will we pull me up ya mujhe giraane ka iraada hai?" Kabir was furious.

"Sorry!" The lady apologized. "Lekin jab I am drunk naa toh aise hi filmy style mein bak bak karti hoon! Hahahaaahahaa..."

By the way I'm Nisha, she took out her hand forward to Kabir. She couldn't handle the headache she was having and was about to fall back. However, Kabir held her by grasping her waist. He admired her by just looking in her eyes so deeply.

"Mujhe bachpan se naa shaadi karne ka bahut craze hai by god!" Nisha bursted out saying a Bollywood dialogue.

Kabir laughed for the first time that evening, Nisha joined him. Kabir and Nisha rose up from the ground.

"Hi I'm Kabir!" He forwarded his hand out. Nisha smiled and shook hands with him.


How was it!!?? :D im really excited to read all comments, and if you liked it then hit the like button :)

*Edited:

changed from OS to SS!😆 NiBirians, a long story for Nibir now😉Excited??! :)

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Chapter 1: (above) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/nisha-aur-uske-cousins/4327753/nibir-ss-the-perfect-stranger-chapter-3-page-11-and-12

Chapter 2: (Page 4)- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/nisha-aur-uske-cousins/4327753/nibir-ss-the-perfect-stranger-chapter-3-page-11-and-12?pn=4

N.O.T.E - Reopening: (Page 8): https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4327753&PID=125311585&#p125311585

New/Old Characters (Page 11): https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/nisha-aur-uske-cousins/4327753/nibir-ss-the-perfect-stranger-chapter-3-page-11-and-12?pn=11

Chapter 3 (Page 12): https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4327753&PID=125380028&#p125380028

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Posted: 10 years ago
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kabira ka toh nikal padi ..os hi os all around now 😃😃
am loving it 😛😳

nice 😊
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Originally posted by: I...

kabira ka toh nikal padi ..os hi os all around now 😃😃
am loving it 😛😳

nice 😊

@bold hehhehee😆😆

thanks!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WoAh!!!!!!!!!
Awesome just perfect
Nibir first meeting
Kabir!!!!! Luv his every dialogues...
Good start do continue soon👍🏼
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Originally posted by: FairyHM

WoAh!!!!!!!!!

Awesome just perfect
Nibir first meeting
Kabir!!!!! Luv his every dialogues...
Good start do continue soon👍🏼


awww thanks alot Hema!! 🤗🤗 btw its just OS - so a one time story, but u want me to continue it?? :D
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Originally posted by: -Drama_Queen-


awww thanks alot Hema!! 🤗🤗 btw its just OS - so a one time story, but u want me to continue it?? :D

of course sss do continue its just awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FairyHM

of course sss do continue its just awesome


okay!! 😃 ill try to update soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm a die hard niraj fan...but I like your style of writing...really nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha anjana anjani style..it was too cute...good to see nisha being the funny one...loved it Kiran...do write more...aur thoda lamba plzz..I wanted to read more..lekin khatam hogaya...haha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aash2302

I'm a die hard niraj fan...but I like your style of writing...really nice

thats really means alot to me, thanks! 😃

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