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Nishkala

@nishkala

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hi...Urmi,
Very nicely written..I really can feel the pain of a real father and his daughter...not just any character of a serial...

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Di that was so heart wrenching.. I honestly marvel at your ability to get into the character's skin while you write these snippets..Kudos to you di for allowing us a peek into the deepest emotions of these characters..👏
Yesterday was probably one of the hardest days of Deepu's life..Seeing his daughter's life crumbling in front of his very eyes and knowing that this time he can't set things right for his baby girl, he must have felt so helpless..
Great job once again di..Keep writing..🤗

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: nishkala
Hi...Urmi,
Very nicely written..I really can feel the pain of a real father and his daughter...not just any character of a serial...

Thank you for your kind words dear..but the track is so beutifully portrayed, that i really forget at times that i am watching a show..it seems very real indeed..

Originally posted by: Preet078
First Urmi thnx u give me d ans of que which is struck in meh mind after yesterday episode dat y deepak not slapped guatam or questioned him...?

U do completely justice wid urs words to realise us d pain of deepak..👏..after reading ur post first i gave hug meh dad..thnx dear for such a nice post and PM me...

Hey preet thank you for such kind words..and yes Deepu had to control his anger because htis si a very delicate issue...

I am glad i was able to d ojustice to deepak's emotions...aww..you gave hug to your dad..oh i miss my dad even more😭.

thanks for the reply dear...

Originally posted by: s.souravi

DAd missing u a llottt there..
Always feel Proud being ur daughter

Thank you for your reply dear..yes i too miss my dad

Edited by barbie2011 - 14 years ago

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: laddoo598
Di that was so heart wrenching.. I honestly marvel at your ability to get into the character's skin while you write these snippets..Kudos to you di for allowing us a peek into the deepest emotions of these characters..👏
Yesterday was probably one of the hardest days of Deepu's life..Seeing his daughter's life crumbling in front of his very eyes and knowing that this time he can't set things right for his baby girl, he must have felt so helpless..
Great job once again di..Keep writing..🤗

Hey Tanu..thanks oyu for such kind and humble words...I am glad i waas able to touch deepak's emotions to an extent..I am a fan of your post , os your words are a big enocuragement and inspiration for me...

Yes ytesterdays epi was indeed the omst diffiuclt day fo Deepak's or i would say any fathers life...it is so painful ot feel youself so helpless at such times...i just hope Deepak is able to find a way out..

thank you for your lovely words..once again..

P.S...Loved your oogle siggy dear...

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Newly_Born
Thanks 4 this ossam post.

thanks for the reply ..Arvind

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Mridula

@imnowhere

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Amazing post Urmi, very well written and heart wrenching.
I felt touched by the emotions.

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Noaddict

@Noaddict

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Awesome Urmi...👏👏

I didn't know you had such hidden talents😃..very well done!!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hi Urmi, a very deep & emotional poem, absolutely loved it. You've captured Deepak's thoughts perfectly. It was too sad to see Deepak's helplessness, yesterday, felt his pain again reading your lovely poem. Wish there was a way to help him out here. Keep writing...

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Aishwarya

@..AiSh..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

First of all...👏👏👏 to u...
loved it di...gr8.. gr8... n... gr8...

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shamya1
First of all...👏👏👏 to u...
loved it di...gr8.. gr8... n... gr8...

thank you for your sweet reply and the applause dear..

Originally posted by: pixiegirl
Hi Urmi, a very deep & emotional poem, absolutely loved it. You've captured Deepak's thoughts perfectly. It was too sad to see Deepak's helplessness, yesterday, felt his pain again reading your lovely poem. Wish there was a way to help him out here. Keep writing...

Hey dear..thank you for your eeply and such encouraging words..it means a lot...

I know it very sad for deepak to be in this situation, i just hope he comes out of this soon...