Deepak's emotions -Ek Pita ka Dard - Page 3

Ahhh Urmi...

very touching and awesome post ...

U did a fabulous job in expressing deepak's pain, hurt, helplessness n desperate urgency 2 make things bttr for his daughter...i loved ur poem..u always write in a manner that once a reader begins 2 read then is unable 2 stop..i cud imagine deepak's state while reading ur poem..u r too gud at capturing a person's (character) feelings n express it so beautifully in a poetic manner..i always belived that expressing smthing in a poem n that 2 in way that al can grab its essence is a tuf job..bt u manage 2 do it brilliantly..as i said b4 poems hardly used 2 hold ne inerest for me bt i cant stay away from readin ur's n always end up loving ur work..👏😊

Originally posted by: sajni786

Ahhh Urmi...

A father's pain is literally indecipherable... I personally cant even imagine wat it wud be like to be in a father's shoes...for men are actually more weaker than women when it comes to handling emotions of the heart n thats why they are known to wear that stern protective sheild over their faces to mask over their inner most self n protect that extra-vulnerable heart.

I cud somewhat even relate to a mom's pain coz I am a woman n to some extent can feel or imagine the depth of a woman's pain...but a father...I dont think I cud have ever justified a father's emotions...

Kudos to u for taking this plunge!! 👏👏

Hey Shilpa..i feel honoured to read your reply..i love you writign a lot..so your comments means a lott ome..I agree..it is difficult to understand and protray fathers emotions..and i was scaredto post this poem, as i was afraid i might not do justice to deepaks emotions, but still the pain and hurt touched me so much that i had to pen down my emotions..i have just tried to penn down what i saw and felt in the epi thru a father s eye...i am sure there are many other emotions which i probaly missed in my post, due to inexperience i should say..

awesome post...u potrayed the feelings very well👏...loved ur post...😊

Originally posted by: Lata2011

very touching and awesome post ...

Miss my Papa a lot...

thanks for your reply lata...I miss my dad too

urmi di awesome one

Originally posted by: bs8889

U did a fabulous job in expressing deepak's pain, hurt, helplessness n desperate urgency 2 make things bttr for his daughter...i loved ur poem..u always write in a manner that once a reader begins 2 read then is unable 2 stop..i cud imagine deepak's state while reading ur poem..u r too gud at capturing a person's (character) feelings n express it so beautifully in a poetic manner..i always belived that expressing smthing in a poem n that 2 in way that al can grab its essence is a tuf job..bt u manage 2 do it brilliantly..as i said b4 poems hardly used 2 hold ne inerest for me bt i cant stay away from readin ur's n always end up loving ur work..👏😊

aww..sonia..thank you so much for such kind and lovely words..you always have such sweet words for me, i really feel obliged..i really dont think i deserve all the love and praise that you shower on me..I try to portray the emotions that i feel in that particular scene , which is depicted by that person( chracter)...i just try to do justice to their emotions..i am glad I am little succeful in that...it makes me feel very special..I am happy my words are captivating enough to hold you to read my poems..and i am touched to read that my poems are the reason why you like poems now..that feels so good..it gives me lot of emcouragement to kep writing..

Originally posted by: shrav05

awesome post...u potrayed the feelings very well👏...loved ur post...😊

thank you for the sweet reply and thank you for liking my work dear...

Originally posted by: nishi755

urmi di awesome one

thanks 4 d pm

thank you for your sweet reply..Nishi