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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: anantanant
It's brought tears in my eyes Urmi... I like deepak - the actor playing him is so sweet, teddy bear types, don't understand why mita always worries about his reactions...

Coming to your poem, it has captured the essence of the episode - wish cvs spent more time on these scenes than rama plotting...

Please write more and write often :-)

thanks for the pm :-)

Hey Usha;

thanks for your lovely comments dear.I am glad you liked my attempt...I agree..CV's should give more screen time to actors like deepak and ranbir,but they are busy pleasing our Rama all the time.

thank you for all the encoutagement dear...

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Savithacrao
Awesome shayari as always urmi 😊

Even though I have missed watching Navya this entire week, i have been able to visualize it thru' the wonderful posts in the forum...

You have wonderfully expressed Deepak's feelings and truly very emotional one...
Keep writing wonderful lines and u can try to write a poem on daadi's feelings and I know u r the best person to write emotional shayaris...

Hey Savitha..thanks for the kind words dear...

As you, even i gety most of e gist of the epi form the variour POst on IFonly..really what would we do without IF.

Thanks for liking my work dear..

And yes you have know me well i guess..i am good at emotional stuff but it is a long way to become best...

I'll try to write on Dadi's feeling, but it is alittle difficult for me because even thoguh i feel her pain..i have never been lucky to experience dadi's love..so i guess i miss that experiece and emotions to fully describe her state of mind...

Thank you liking my work dear..it means a lot...

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Oh, Urmi,

Just splendid...words fail me , ...Deepak, is a ,complete dad...and, today, your words, made him, absolute...👏👏..

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

@Anya_an..thank you for your sweet reply and for liking my work dear...

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Jen_IloveAR
awhhh (:
that was so swweet! i really do feel bad for poor deepak! but i hope issues resolve and his kids are always happy!

Hey Dear..thank you for your reply..

even i felt bad for waht deepu had to go thru ..it is really painful

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: supria
hey barbie...very touching lines...its so painful to go thru what navyas dad is going thru..esp after he has seen renu's pain n hurt n the creep gautam flirting..i just cant think of my dad going thru something like that...its so tough to be in his shoes...he has to be strong for the ladies n silently bear the pain ...a daughter whom he has brought up so close to his heart...he gave away n now the very hands which he thot wud be the safest is crunching it all...hope he does not have to see any sadness for navya...if ananth messes up things n navys gets into heartbreak, then deepak wud be the most hurt!!

Hey Supria..thanks for your lovely reply ..I know deepak's situation is realy unbearable..and i hope no father has t ofact these days i ntheir life..i am sure Anant will never do anytihng to hhurt naya or her family..o Deepak should not worry abt that..

thanks for your reply dear..

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barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Aanchal15
Oh, Urmi,
Just splendid...words fail me , ...Deepak, is a ,complete dad...and, today, your words, made him, absolute...👏👏..

Hey Aanchal..

thank you for liking my work and thank you for such kind words..it means a lot...

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Deadlydynamite

@Dar_Fitte_Moo

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

wow di u r one of the most priceless gem of Navya forum this poem is an epic i m so glad u wrote this post i just love how u make those fictional characters so live that they dont seem fictional or a mere imagination of writer we feel for them .its like we can actually feel what the characters r going thru .i m a big fan of urs .each n every line covered the pain the guilt the helplessness the love so many varied emotions 👍🏼🤗 its like a beautiful can embed with the lively colors of emotion superb👏

P.S. i dont know how bad or worse i m as a TM but i m so glad that my not so good posts encouraged u to penned down ur creativity in such a beautiful words .i m so happy n proud that i made a small inconsequential part in it.i m so glad di .i hope 1 day u become a great writer u ll definitely have a bright future .god bless u

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barbie2011

@barbie2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: manojshonafan
wow di u r one of the most priceless gem of Navya forum this poem is an epic i m so glad u wrote this post i just love how u make those fictional characters so live that they dont seem fictional or a mere imagination of writer we feel for them .its like we can actually feel what the characters r going thru .i m a big fan of urs .each n every line covered the pain the guilt the helplessness the love so many varied emotions 👍🏼🤗 its like a beautiful can embed with the lively colors of emotion superb👏

P.S. i dont know how bad or worse i m as a TM but i m so glad that my not so good posts encouraged u to penned down ur creativity in such a beautiful words .i m so happy n proud that i made a small inconsequential part in it.i m so glad di .i hope 1 day u become a great writer u ll definitely have a bright future .god bless u

Hey Manoj..i am really humbled by your words today..thank you so much for such kind and encouraging words...I tried my best to portray deepak's emotion, and i am really happy my words were able to reach your heart. Manoj your post are my inspiration..and they are really very good..this is your kindness that you are praising me so much..i dont think i deserve this great words from you..it is still a long way for me..I can write only when i feel the emotions..whereas you describe everything everytime so beautifully you are just amazing manoj..

Thank you once again for appreciating my work and for the inspiration...it means a lot to me dear...

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ashakd

@ashakd

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Wow Urmi, gr8 , u r doing a gr8 job . Very sorry for the late reply. But better late than never. Urmi, my knowledge is limited in all this, but loved u expressing this. U r getting better each time, Keep it up.

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