Ab aage kya? Anya FF. *Part 6 updated on pg.8* - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
that was awesome! i could actually imagine them performing the same...God we actually wanna see them life how 19-year old newly in love couple does in their pehla pehla pyaar hai yeh not the rona-dhona and under age marriage. common CV's if you need any idea their is ample of good posts here for you to guide you to a better plot. And coming back to your post i loved specially this part "Navya, sach? yeh tum keh rahi ho? abhi tak nahi jaani mujhe? 😆 Tumhi batao, aaj tak kitne chakkar laga liye maine tumhari "padosi" ke ghar ke?" so true anant...we love you Anya and hope you love story lives long and goes strong...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Very cute Dialogue😊..Awesome⭐️⭐️...loved it.
waiting for the next part soon..😊..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Got directed here from my FB navya fan page...for once, its been worth it...very funny... ur emoticons and bracketed expressions made me 😊...more like this please!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Simply WOW!!

Njoying every tits and bits of it...plz update soon!!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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itz very nice but i think kuchh aur hoga letz see 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
WOW all!!! thanks sooo much for your support!!!! wasn't expecting this much positive reaction at all :):) will def post the next part soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
😳Okayyy... Here it is, PART 2:

(Navya's back at home after college. She is fretting and pacing and very worried!)

Navya: (in her head...) ab main kya karungi? Anant. aur woh bhi yahan? Aaj toh tu gayi Navya. Kaise samjhaou us ko... kya kahun ki woh nahi aaye. or woh, woh itna ziddhi bhi toh hain. woh teri baat kabhi nahi manega Navya. Bhool ja. Lekin agar woh yahan aa gaya. aur daadi ne... ya phir papa ne... papa toh bahut dukhi ho jaayenge... kuch samajh nahi aa raha hain.

(doorbell rings... Navya gets shocked and goes to answer it... Only to see...Ritz and Appy walk in 😊)

Navya: Ritz!?!?! Appy!?!??! Tum dono yahan...? Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho! 😡

Ritz: Ohhf ho Navya. Tum abhi tak tayaar nahi hui. Kya kar rahi ho?

Appy (in her typical super excited way): Haan Navya!! dekho 7 baj gaye. Ek hi ghanta baccha hain... Ab toh jaldi kardo maharani ji!

Navya (looks at both questioningly ❓): tum dono ko kaise...

(both look down)
Accha. toh tum dono ko Anant ne bheja hain.

(both nod guiltily 🤔😳)

Phir toh Anant ne yeh bhi bata diya hoga ki main nahi jaa rahi hoon.

Rita + Appy 😲: Lekin kyun Navya!?!

Navya: Tum dono ko lagta hai ke Papa mujhe jaane denge. woh bhi Anant ke saath. Raat ko. (mumbles to herself): Lagta hain aaj kal sab pagal ho rahe hain.

Ritz + Appy (give each other a "not again" look): Uff Navya.

Navya: Kya!? Aise kyun dekh rahe ho? Main nahi jaa sakti. Sach.

Navya's Mom (or just Mom from now on 😆): Kahan?! Kahan nahi jaa sakti? Aur Ritz, Appy tum dono kab aayi. Bethon main abhi snacks leke aathi hoon...

Ritz: Nahi aunty. woh uski koi zaroorat nahi hain. hum to bas Navya se milne aaye the. woh kya hain na, bahut din se hum teeno ki baat nahi ho paayi hain... aur Navya bhi todhi down si lag rahi thi toh hum soch rahe the ki kyun na movie chale jaaye... woh 8 baje ka show hain...

Appy: Haan!!! par dekho na. yeh Navya maan hi nahi rahi hain.

(Navya and Mom exchange looks...)

Mom: Tum dono toh jaanti ho na... yahan yeh sab... tum aisa karlo, yahi pe movie dekhlo. main woh "popcorn" bhi banadeti hoon.

(enter Navya ke Papa)

Papa: Kitne baje khatam hogi movie?

Ritz: Uncle aap kab aaye? Namaste.
Appy: Namaste Uncle.

Mom: Aap?! 😲 Woh kuch nahi, bacchiyan hain na, aise hi keh rahi thi...

Papa: Ritika, main kuch poonch raha tha.

Ritz: Haan Uncle, woh 10 baje.

Papa (looks at Navya, jiske chehre pe already 12 baj gaye hain 😛...): Navya, tum jaana chahti ho?

(Navya looks down...)

Papa: Navya, sach kaho.

(Navya slowly nods. -- (awaaz toh atki vi hain na.😆))

Papa: Toh teek hain. Jao. 😃 Par thik 10:30 baje wapas ghar aa jaana. Movie khatam hote hi, seedha ghar.

Navya (runs up and gives her papa the biggest hug ever 👏): Thanks papa!!! Aaap world ke BESTTT papa ho!

Papa smiles 😃😊 then leaves...

Mom: lo khush? 😊😉 smiles and says to Navya... Bilkul Pagal ho. 😆

Mom leaves too...

In the background, Appy ka phone aata hai:

Appy (quietly whispers into the phone): Haan, haan, ho gaya kaam. Permission mil gayi! Hum tumko 8 baje milte hain, neeche 😳

------------------- End Part 2 ---------------------------

Sorry, yaar... had to get permission na before more anya scenes :) But don't worry part 3 should be up soon! UP NEXT: Anant and Navya both are becoming very restless getting ready for their big night... (ahem, date =p)

Edited by strawberry111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Loved the ff pl add me on your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Superb and awesome pls add me for the PM and update next part ANYA Scenes soon , waiting 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: yaminirajan

Superb and awesome pls add me for the PM and update next part ANYA Scenes soon , waiting 😳


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