Pehla Nasha (Fanfiction) Chapter 3 - Page 2

Guys i almost finished chapter two, then my computer shut down. I'm sorry guys! I'll update soon. And one more thing, I don't do PM lists, I might in the future but not right now. Thanks for all the reviews!

Hey guys, sorry about not having pm lists right now, but I really don't have that much time on my hands right now. There's so much to do. I'm going to update the title after every chapter, so that's how you can see if there's a new chapter up! :)

So, here's your update!

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Sonia got up from her seat and shot Navya an angry glare, before taking the seat Navya had previously occupied.

Sonia: Who does she think she is? Look at her flirting with Anant! Me uske tange torunge.

Ritz: Oi! We'll kill you before you do that to her.

Appy: Seriously, Sonia, shut up and take notes.

Sonia: How dare you. Just watch. Ab tum dekho mein kya karti hoon.

On the other side of the room Navya and Anant are looking into each others eyes. Navya looks away quickly and blushes. She drops her pencil accidentally and goes down to get it. Anant does the same. Their hands brush and they look into each others eyes again for a few seconds. Then, she realizes where she is and removes herself from her reverie.

Navya: Sorry!

Anant: Don't be sorry. You didn't do anything wrong.

Navya blushes and sits down again. She spends the rest of class taking notes.

END OF CLASS:

Anant: Um, Navya, kya tum mere saath... will you... want to go somewhere?

Navya: M - Me? Par... Sonia... Accha nahin lagega.

Anant: Sonia ko accha nahin lagega to kya hua? Mujhe to achha lagega na?

Navya: I -- I want to. Me chahta hoon par meri maa aur papa mana kardengi.

Anant: Theek hai. I was thinking we would go with Ranbir and Ritika film dekhne ko. But if you don't want to then... I guess Sonia mere saath chalenga.

Navya: Nahin! Theek hai, me ajaoonga. Ritika ja raha hai to zuroor me aoonga.

Anant smiles and she blushes. She decides that she needs to tell her parents as soon as possible.

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It's short, but it's the best I could do for now. Thanks for all your nice replies guys! (: Sorry for my horrible hindi too, if you have tips, then they're always welcome!

wow awesome.....but dear add mee to ur pm list and update soon

thee part is veryy nicee n plzzzzzz update d new part soonnnnnnnn👏

awesome😊........and i'm glad anant makes the first move....pls try 2 update next chapter fast...

i parttt was veryy nice n plzzzzzzzzzzz update d parttttt soonnnnnnn😊

noce part..:) BTW do write d PG number in d title it'd be easy to find den..
Gud job..

Pls continue soon. And u r going great.

hey nice part...do update soon with a longgggggggg part 😳



okay and umm just a few tips, you made Navya a boy in the dialogue 😆
so gonna help u change the line :)

Navya: I -- I want to. Me chahti hoon par merein maa aur papa mana kardengein.

Anant: Theek hai. I was thinking we would go with Ranbir and Ritika film dekhne ko. But if you don't want to then... I guess Sonia mere saath chalengi.

Navya: Nahin! Theek hai, me ajaoongi. Ritika ja raha hai to zuroor me aoongi.

Alright I bolded the parts where I saw the mistake 😳
if you ever need help with the hindi lines, you can always PM me for that 😳