Pehla Nasha (Fanfiction) Chapter 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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If the writing is like this (bold and italics, it's actions).

If it's like this (normal writing), it's dialogue.

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Navya, Appy, and Ritz are sitting in class taking notes. Anant is sitting with Sonia who is trying to hold his hand.


Appy to Ritz: Arre! Ritz, dekho na! Look at how she's holding on to him. Aise karne tha to college kyun atte? Ek club me jakar bhi yeh sub kar sakta.

Ritz: Ha. She's so clingy. Just look at her, thinking she's all that. Hey, Navya, tum bhi dekho na. So disgusting, right?

Navya: Hmm... (She's looking at Anant with a sorrowful look in her eyes)

Appy: Ha yaar, yeh to Anant ko pasand karte he. She loves her hero. (giggle)

Ritz: She can't live without him. Din raat sirf Anant ke baare me sochte hein.

Navya: Haaa, sirf Anant... (sigh), KYA?! Nahin! You guys tricked me! No way. Tum log bhi na.

Ritz and Appy laugh as Navya blushes. They all turn to look at Anand and Sonia. Sonia is still trying to flirt with him, and he has an irritated look on his face.

Ritz: How can he take it when she's acting like this?

Appy: Let me teach her a lesson.

Navya: Appy, no!

Appy gets up, the professor is writing on the board, not seeing how close Sonia is trying to get with Anant. Then she talks, so loud, that the whole class can hear.


Appy: Hare Ram! Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?! Are, Sonia, don't you know class mein ladka ko pareshan nahin karte?! What a distraction.

Navya and Ritz smiled.

Ritz: Ha, I'm getting distracted.

Anant: Same here.

Navya's heart beat faster. He wasn't standing up for Sonia which made her very happy.

Anant: If it's possible, sir, can she change seats with someone?

Professor: Don't interrupt my class. Sonia switch with Navya.

Appy and Ritz move closer to each other while Navya's cheeks turn pink. She picks up her books and walks to Sonia's seat. Sonia gives Navya an evil glare.

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That's it for today! I'm sorry, my hindi is HORRIBLE. So if you'll forgive me for that. How is it? Should I continue? :)

Edited by ilovepyaar - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......i seriously luvddd it......😃..❤️..👏..🤗....!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waoooooooooooooooooooooooo wonderfull start
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey wooow.....

Liked it... Liked it... Liked it... Liked it... Liked it... Liked it... a lot....

So please do continue soon.... & do add me to ur PM list

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Posted: 14 years ago
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please continue..... 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...what a bang start...😊...and update fast coz i have a thousand odd questions and scenes running through my mind...like what will navya feel as she sits next 2 anant...what will b his feelins...and ya i'm lookin forward 2 lots of eyelocks....cant wait seriously...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzz continue and pm me soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start!!..Plz update soon!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey please continue

heheh Annat too spoke up 😆
aww they will sit together!! anxious to know what their convo will be 😳

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