Pehla Nasha (Fanfiction) Chapter 3 - Page 3

Aww, this was too cute!

loved both part 1 and 2..plz continue😊

awesome update............add me to ur pm list plz.........n update soon..

wow. wonderful updates. pls do continue soon.

Originally posted by: Dr.BasketGupta

hey nice part...do update soon with a longgg part 😳



okay and umm just a few tips, you made Navya a boy in the dialogue 😆
so gonna help u change the line :)

Navya: I -- I want to. Me chahti hoon par merein maa aur papa mana kardengein.

Anant: Theek hai. I was thinking we would go with Ranbir and Ritika film dekhne ko. But if you don't want to then... I guess Sonia mere saath chalengi.

Navya: Nahin! Theek hai, me ajaoongi. Ritika ja raha hai to zuroor me aoongi.

Alright I bolded the parts where I saw the mistake 😳
if you ever need help with the hindi lines, you can always PM me for that 😳

Thank you SO much dear! <3 You really helped me! :D


[quote]Aww, this was too cute!

woow thatss reallyy nyccc i juss
love navya and aanat ..

Okay guys! I'm back with another update! Hopefully you guys will like this chapter. And just a reminder, I don't do PM lists. I just don't have the time to do so right now. Sorry guys! :)

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AT THE NAVYA HOUSEHOLD.

Navya: Arre... mein kya penoon?

She looks around her closet, wondering what would be appropriate for a film. Then she gets a phone call. Smiling, she realizes it's Appy.

Appy: Hey Navya!

Navya: Appy, I need your help. Fashion emergency.

Appy: Navya, what did your parents say?

Navya: Uh... I didn't tell them... yet.

Appy: NAVYA! Jaldi batao, nahin to bohot naraz hojayenga tumhara mummi papa.

Navya: Pata hain... par mein kaisi kahoon unko ki mein ... ek ladka ke saath bahar jarahihoon.

Appy: To theek hai. Wo mut batao. Sirf yeh batana hai ki tum Ritz ke saath jarahi hain. Jhoot bhi nahin bolrahin hai.

Navya: Ha... mein woh karunga.

Appy: Aur ha, adhe film ke vakt tum wha se tumhari mummy ko sub kuch mut batana. Don't confess like the ice cream day, okay?

Navya: Haan, tum to meri maa ho naa.

Appy: Haha, kuchh acchha peno. Tumhare woh laal rang ke suit hain na. Woh peno.

Navya: Theek hain.

Then she hangs up the phone.

She wears her suit and leaves her room.

Navya: Maa... kya mein Ritz ke saath film dekhne chaloo?

Maa: Haa, kyun nahin. Chalo.

Navya: Thank you so much Maa!

She gives her mom a big hug, leaving her mother stunned.

Navya goes to the theatres where Ritz, Ranbir, and Anant are waiting for her. She smiles when she sees Anant, looking as good as ever.

Anant: You look nice.

Navya: Thank you.

Anant: Under chale?

Navya: Haan.

They go inside and watch a romantic movie. Ranbir and Ritz are cuddling and Navya feels awkward to be beside them. Anant looks like it's awkward for him too.

Anant: Haa.. toh... iss scene kitane baar play hogaye kitane movies mein. Kuchh original sochh nahin sakta tha kya?

Navya: Pata nahin.

Anant: Navya...

Navya feels her heart beating faster.

Navya: Haa Anant?

Anant: Navya... kya... nevermind. It's nothing.

Navya: Oh. Tum chahte ho toh bahta sakte.

Anant: Batana chahta to hoon, lekin mera mun inkaar kar rahin hai.

Navya: Aur tumhara dil?

Anant: Mera dil to batana chahta.

Navya: Tumhara dil ke avaaz suno.

Anant: Haan, theek hain. Batate hoon. Par hyaa nahin.

Navya: Hyaa nahin to kaha?

Anant: Kahin aur jaana hain? Aur... private? I don't want to say what I want to say over here. There are too many people.

Navya: Okay, chalo.

She feels guilty because she hasn't called her mom. She feels for her phone, but remembers Appy's words. Appy said not to call her mom. So she restrained herself.

Navya follows him out of the theatres and into the front seat of his car. She can't help but enjoy the moment. She knows she might never get this moment again in her life.

Navya: Anant, ab batao?

Anant: Not here. Park jaana hain?

Navya: Haan, theek hain. Park me batao.

They drive to the park. The sun is setting and he takes her hand. Navya blushes, not removing her hand from his.

Anant: Is this okay?

Navya: Yes... achha hai. I like it.

Anant: Good.

She follows him to an ice cream stand.

Anant: Ice cream?

Navya: Haan, vanilla.

Anant gets a chocolate for himself. Then they walk to the bench where they can see the sun setting clearly.

Navya: Anant, this is beautiful.

Anant: I know. That's why I brought you here. I want to tell you in the most beautiful of places.

He looks her in the eye and she can't help but blush.

Navya: Kya bataana tha?

Anant: Yehin ki... Navya... I... I love... Navya... Mein tumse bohot pyaar ... I love you a lot. Mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon.

Navya is speechless, not sure if she heard correctly.

Navya: Mein bhi.

She remembers her parents and how she is not allowed to date or have boyfriends. If her parents found out about this, she might as well be dead.

Anant smiles and takes her hand in his, before bringing it to his lips and kissing it. She feels butterflies in her stomach.

Anant: Abh, kya hum, ek saath? Do you want to be my girlfriend?

Navya couldn't imagine the thought of being somebodies girlfriend. But, she so desperately wanted to be his. She nodds, putting all thought of her parents at the back of her head.

Navya: Haan. Par. Ek shart hain. Hum iss baat kisi ko nahin bata sakte. Sirf Ritz, Appy, aur Ranbir. Aur koi nahin. Kyunki... meri maa aur mere baap ko pata chala to me zindagi se darungi.

Anant laughs and nods.

Anant: Theek hai. Jaise tum chaho.

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