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Barbiedoll_sona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

good going love traingle... 😆 ...purab looks nice here..lets see how he changes his iquation towards seher

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Barbiedoll_sona
good going love traingle... 😆 ...purab looks nice here..lets see how he changes his iquation towards seher

purab is nice yet but baad mein he's gonna wear evil wala look😆

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veenisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

wow this is another superb update from you

im very xcited to see what happens when sammer and meher will meet at the hospital :D:D:D:D:D

super work dear

loved it

do update soon :D

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Neelam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Love it lots!!!! 😳 😳
Can't wait for Saher face to face... 😆 😆 😆
I just have two request plz think about them 😭
01.Plz bring that little kid Balli in some other character but same evil mind type kid (I think) in your story.I love him a lot... 😳 😳 😳
02.Don't turn the characters in love dovey kind
*Meher to be always full of life
*Sameer aaahhhaaa!!!!!! no problem he can be any type (love his any character) 😳 😳
*Puru him too.
Plz think at my points I know it weird,but it will make the story way better than the show where kissie and huggie are done (with an army officer ugghhh!!!)
Thanks in advance!!! 😉 😉

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: veenisha
wow this is another superb update from you
im very xcited to see what happens when sammer and meher will meet at the hospital :D:D:D:D:D
super work dear
loved it
do update soon :D

thanks veeshu...and glad that u like it.!😃

and next update is just coming soon😳

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: oracleraider786
Love it lots!!!! 😳 😳
Can't wait for Saher face to face... 😆 😆 😆
I just have two request plz think about them 😭
01.Plz bring that little kid Balli in some other character but same evil mind type kid (I think) in your story.I love him a lot... 😳 😳 😳
02.Don't turn the characters in love dovey kind
*Meher to be always full of life
*Sameer aaahhhaaa!!!!!! no problem he can be any type (love his any character) 😳 😳
*Puru him too.
Plz think at my points I know it weird,but it will make the story way better than the show where kissie and huggie are done (with an army officer ugghhh!!!)
Thanks in advance!!! 😉 😉

thanks dear...

well balli is so cute and me too love his character...but i dont think so that i would be able to add balli in this storyline too...but still i'll try my my best to look after ur idea...thanks 😊

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sana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

a so excited to read what is gonna happen after saher face off...

plz update the next part as soon as possible...

just cant wait now plz... and do pm me :)

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: -lisana-
a so excited to read what is gonna happen after saher face off...
plz update the next part as soon as possible...

just cant wait now plz... and do pm me :)

huh...itni bechaini?

dont worry the update is just coming up next...😳

wait for half a hour...

just then u'll get it 😉

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Ramisa (Saba)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

First of all hello to my reader's...am glad that am getting ur support in this ss but i noticed that some NP member's didn't leave comment's on my thread...maybe they don't know or maybe they are not interested in reading for saher...well...let's come to the main point...

CHAPTER 4

it was about 5pm...the sunset was on it's way...

At the hospital...

Meher went inside the I.C.U...mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ke mein ap k shukriya kese ada karun...lekin ap ne meri jaan bacha kar mujhe ek nayi zindagi di hai...iss ke liye mein hamesha ap ka ehsaan mand rahun ga...said purab thankfully...

arry nahi...mene ap pe koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai...insaniyat ke naaty yeh mera farz tha..jo mene poora kiya...said meher

ap ki baat bi thike hai...lekin phir bhzindagi mein jab kabhi bhi mujhe ap ka yeh ehsaan chukaane ka moqa mila to mein zaroor koshish karunga...said purab while smiling

hmm...agar ap sach mein isse ehsaan samajh kar yeh ehsaan utarna chahte hain to mere paas ap ke liye ek way hai...said meher while smiling back

purab : wo kese?

meher: Dosti kar ke...

he smiles...and forward his hand to meher saying" to dosti pakki?.."

she too forward her hand and said "Pakki" while smiling...

she move her eyes to the clock and what she saw that...it was almost 6 pm...she thought that bebe will be worry for her...she took permission from purab to leave for home and hurriedly ran toward's the door...

On the other hand sameer reached the hospital...he parked his car and hurriedly came out and ran to went inside...

meher was walking...wondering about bebe...and there sameer was coming worried for his elder brother...they were walking in full speed that they hit each other's shoulder's...

they both look's back to say sorry to eachother but misfortunately they rocognize eachother and recall that incident which was happen that day's morning...

they booth point out their finger's to eachother while yelling tum? tum?...

tum mera peecha karte karte yaha bhi aa gayi? said sameer angrily...

o..hello mr...mujhe koi shoq nahi hai tum jaise ghamandi logun ka peecha karne ki samjhe na...mujhe to tum pe doubt ho raha hai ke tum apna badla lene ke liye mera peecha kar rahe the...said meher with full of anger

sameer: excuse me...muj...(he stop's suddenly when a sister come's to them and warn them to be silent...it's hospital not any circus to speak loudly...other patient's are getting irritate because of them)...

afte hearing that they both was just silent...they gave a strong look to eachother and walk toward their own way's...

meher took Rickshaw and leave for home...

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sameer went inside the I.C.U. ward...and stop for a moment when he look's at his loving veerji's condition...he was able to feel the pain of his elder and loving brother what purab was feeling at that moment...

he then suddenly looks at the door where sameer was standing and watching him with wide eyes... he call's his name sameer...politly and sameer step's towards purab...he run to hug his loving brother...

veerji ye sab kese hua? asked sameer...

arry kuch nahi..bs gaari chalate waqt i lost my balance and as in result i got an accident..that's it!

that's it?...veerji how could you say that? apni halat dekh kar kya ap andaza laga sakte hain? ye koi chota motta accident nahi hai...look how badly you are injured! said sameer harshly...

Ignore Grammar and spelling mistakes...coz it's not edited

PS: Now your turn...leave your view's plz...and sorry i know it was short update but kya karu i was able to write till this only

Have a good day😊

Edited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago