SaHer Ss: Gone With The Wind (Part5-PG13) Discontinue :( - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: -lisana-


right but teri stories mein kuch to khaas hai jo mere dil ko choota hai

hmmm...well muje ye toh ni pta that what's there in my fictions which force u to read it but u r ma true frnd 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Just read the update..
sorry for late comment as i just saw it now.
i must say it's gonna be an amazing story.
so good of luck and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: aimen.naseer

Just read the update..

sorry for late comment as i just saw it now.
i must say it's gonna be an amazing story.
so good of luck and thanks for the pm

thank u so much dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Loved reading it,but one question: 😆 😆
Yeh Veerji itne meherbaain kyu ho rehe hai.. 😲 😲 😲
Not possible..!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: oracleraider786

Loved reading it,but one question: 😆 😆
Yeh Veerji itne meherbaain kyu ho rehe hai.. 😲 😲 😲
Not possible..!!!!!


dude...wo actually iss story mein woh brother's hain na and they have like do dil ek jaan type relation...iss liye veerji itne meherbaan hain apne sameer pe...but dun worry aage aage dekho kya hota hai hehe...
well thanks for liking it and commenting 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Then it's okay,
Or hume laga suraj aaj suraj Purab se ooga hai 😆 😆
P.S. I'm not a dude!!!!! 😡 😡 😡
I'm a girl,check what oracle means...
I raid people's mind!!!
Hahahahahahaha!!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: oracleraider786

Then it's okay,
Or hume laga suraj aaj suraj Purab se ooga hai 😆 😆
P.S. I'm not a dude!!!!! 😡 😡 😡
I'm a girl,check what oracle means...
I raid people's mind!!!
Hahahahahahaha!!!! 😆 😆

okay boss soryy...i thought u r a boy or something like that...dont mind here😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

thank u so much dear😊


Your welcome sweetie..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
He NPians...back with another update...

Part 3

it was almost 2:00pm on day...the weather was so sunny that the he rays of sun was pricking so hardly like a niddle to a body...she was sadly walking on the road with tears droping on her cheeks...


on the other hand purab ws in way to home for lunch...suddenly he got sameer's call he told him that he's just reaching there in 20 mins...


While purab was on the call a truck came from his opposite..he tried to save himself and move the way of car to other direction where the car bumped the the tree...


meher was the one there who saw that all..she immediately run towards the car and get off the man from the car...


she saw that he was injured somewhere on his forehead and arms etc...she screams for help but nobody come to...


she then herself took that person to the nearer hospital...she hurriedly asked doctors to check him weather if his condition is serious or not!


doctors took him to the operation theater and asked her to wait outside...there outside the operation theater meher was sitting worriedly while a her phone rings...she took it out from the bag and see it was


bebe...she recieved bebe's call..
bebe ask her that how was the interview do she get the job or not? after hearing that she got emotional and just started crying ...bebe asked her to stop crying and come home as soon as possible...


meher told bebe that she's in the hospital right now which make's bebe feel the hell worried for a sec...then she tell bebe about the accident that happened moments ago in front of her eyes...


meher was still call while doctor come's outside from the operation theater...she asked bebe to cut off..she'll call her later...


doctor sahab wo aadmi kesa hai jo abi...(doc cuts) and said there is no need to worry he is now out of danger it was just some external injuries...she tanks to the doc's and was abut t leave while doc asked her a question...


kya ap unhe janti hain? ya kya ap ne unke ghar ifform kiya iss accident ke baare mein?
umm...nahi doctor ...mera un se koi rishta nahi hai wo to bs road pe achhanak mujhe besahara mille to mene un ki madad kar dii... said meher and after saying that she leaves...


purab was admitted to I.C.U here he was now in conscious..he feels little pain in his head... he tries to get up but sister said him to stay layed you're injured...


he recalls the moments when the accident happened...he then ask sister that who have brought him here...she told him that somehow a girl brought him here..you should thanks to her that if she didn't brought u you here otherwise you may doesn't live right now...


he was shocked after hearing that and wished to meet her...sister asked her again to keep calm plz...


he then saw that the door is opening...the doctor came inside but along him a young beautiful lady also walk's towad purav with him...
"How are you feeling now mr Atwal?'' asked doctor...


"better now...but mein yaha kese aaya i mean..i was on the accident side na...toh.." said purab


ap ko ye miss yaha layi hain...bhayi badi qismat hai ap ki jo ita injure nahi hue aap warna accident toh kaafi dangerous lagta tha...


purab look's at Meher and thanks her saying "Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ke mein ap ka shukriya kese da karun...lekin ap ne meri jaan baha kar mujh pe bohat bada ehsaan kiya hai"...


"mene ap pe koi ehsaan nahi kiya mr Atwal...mene to bs apna farz nibhaya hai..aur insaaniyat ke naate itna to banta hai.." said meher with a cute smile on her cheeks...


"ap ki innhi baaton ne mera dil chuu liya"...said purab in a good mood while smiling...


"ap tu mujhe shrminda kar rahe hain" said meher while smiling back...
acha ap ne apne ghar mein kisi ko kuch inform kiya iss incident ke baare mein? asked meher..


nahi toh...mere bhar mein bas...mera ek chota bhai aur chandd nka wagera hi rehty hain...badi meherbaani hogi agar ap mere chote bhai ko inform kar dein gi toh...said purab pleased...


she took his phone and dial sameer atwal's number...he pick the call and say's veerji kaha ho ap yaar...( meher cutt)...mr sameer atwal baat kar rahe hain??


ji haan...ap kon? Said sameer Wondering...
"wo...actually mene ap ko yeh imform karne ke liye call kiya tha ke ap ke bhai ka accident ho gaya hai " she said...


'WHAT?' Kab..kese...aur kaha...? said sameer worridly...
"look there is no need to worry about he's now out of danger" ab please city hospital aa jayein...


IGNORE GRAMMAR AND SPELLINGS MISTAKE


PS: sorry guys for shout update...wo kya hai na ke mama lappy zyada use nahi karne deti so issi liye short update...

Edited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Superb
awesome update
and thanks for pm.

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