SaHer Ss: Gone With The Wind (Part5-PG13) Discontinue :(

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Hey everyone...this is my first post in NPGA forum as a new post...
as i saw that pplz talk about forum's activity which is quite low...so i decided to start any story etc which may help us to increase our forum's ranking
So here i go...




Meher..she is a modern girl with lots of innocence she's an open heart , chulbuli and friendly person. to be kind with others is included to her Nature..


her inner beauty makes everyone run after her... she believe to live with full of fun bcoz she thinks ( Zindagi Chaar din ki hi to hai...khul kar jiyo aur bs life mein khushiyaan hi khushiyaan bhar do gham ki to chuttihi kar dalo..) and she live with her mother ( Bebe ).


On the other hand it's Sameer...(Totally opposite of meher) A Rich modern buisness man with bore thinking..never know's what is love about?! everyone thinks he's a khadus persoj but he also have a hurt which beats every sec...and he have also emotions somewhere deep in his heart whom he never show to anyone... He's also kind to others but when he got angry then he never look whom is standing infront of him... he live's with his elder brother purab...


Atwal's Residence:


someone knock a door...a voice comes from inside (Come in)..he open the door and there a guy standing infront of mirror setting his tie said, haan ramlal nashta idher table par rakh do..


the other person speak up...hmm..hamare chote bhai ko itni bhi fursat nahi hai ke apne bade bhai ke saath beth kar nashta hi kar liya jaye...


He turn back and say : Veerji (PURAB) ap...(with a little smile on his face) ap kab aaye mujhe bula liya hota mein aa jata ap ko kya zaroorat thi yaha aane ki taqleef karne ki?


Arry bhayi mene socha ke hamare chote sahib (sameer)ko to fursat milti nahi hamare saath mil-beth ker do chaar gappein (gossips) marne ki..to hum khud hi chale aaye apne laadle ke paas... said purab with a smile...


Sameer step foward and hug him tightly...and said veerji...ap to jaante ho na ke ap se badh kar iss duniya mein mere liye aur koi cheez nahi hai..ap hi to meri zindagi ho..mere jeene ki waja ho..


Purab : acha ab bs bs...zyada maska lagane ki zaroorat nahi hai .he put his hand on sameer's shoulder and say's jaldi se ready ho ke neechy ao phir office ke liye saath nikalte hain...already bohat late ho chukey hain..Sameer nooded his head and give a little smile..
After that purab leaves..


Meher's Residence :


Meher...meher putar uth ja...
meher turn herself on a side and put pillow on her head and said politely...sone de na bebe...
Bebe : Dekh aakhri baar keh rahi hu uth ja warna.. meher cut off and said smiling..warna tu mujhe aur sone de gi..


iss larki da kuch nahi ho sakta...padi reh bistar pe phir jab inteview ke liye late ho jayegi tab saara ghar aasman pe utha legi..said bebe with full of anger and leave..


meher slowly open her one eye and look at the clock it was stiking 07:40 O'Clock . she immediately get up and sit...haye rabba 07:40 baj gaye aur mein abhi tak so rahi thi?


she hurridly get up and after changig she come's in hall and saw bebe sitting on sofa busy in doing some work . she run towards bebe and hug her from back..


bebe with love put her hand on mehe's head and said uth gayi meri bacchi...haan bebe said with a smile on her face..par bebe tu ne mujhe jagaya kyu ni dekh poore 8 baj gaye hain. aj to pakka late ho jaun gi she said with a worried face...


bebe hold her hand and make her sit infront of her on table and say's kaha tha na late ho jayegi pa tu konsa kisi ki sunti hai bs apni hi manmaani jo karni hoti hai tujhe...


meher hold her ears and say, acha baba Maaf kar do na plz..bebe smile and put her hand on meher's cheak and say chal mein tere liye nashta laga deti hu... meher gives a big smile and said : haan bebe jaldi kar bohat bhookh lagi hai sach mein aise lag raha hai jaise peyt (Stomach) mein titliyaan (butterflies),choohe (rats), ghoode(horses) sab dhod (running) rahe hain...
pa..gliii said bebe with smiling back...


Back to Atwal's Residence :


Sameer after getting ready for office come down from stair's and round his eyes in hall and asked ramlal who was busy in cleaning the house..veeriji kaha hain?
Ramlal: Arry chote sahib, bade sahid to kab ka nikal chuke hainn aafis ke liye
sameer to himself (Nikal gaye...bina btaye?).. acha unho ne koi message choda mere liye?


Ramlal : haan chote sahid unho ne ek maasaage choda hai ap ke liye...ou keh rahe the ke chote sahib ko kehna mujhe ek (he stops and start thinking something) after a sec he speak ou ka kehte hain im...impar... sameer cutt off and said important... ramlal said : haan oui oui impartand claaand (client) ko mile jawat hain... sameer sahid ko keh dena ou akele hi aafiss a jayein..


sameer : thike hai...and he leave for office..
Back to Meher's Residence :
she was sitting on dining table finishing her breakfast hurridly...bebe was sitting beside her and said putar...kuch zaroori saman laana hai abi fatt se la de na..


meher : bebe abhi? tu janti hai na ke mein pehle ki bohat late ho chuki hu ab tera yeh samaan laane gayi to phir to mil gayi mujhe nokri... and continue her breakfast..


after a sec she look's at bebe's face and said : acha bebe...parishan kyu hoti ho...abhi jaati hun! bs yun gai aur yun ai chutki mein...


Sameer were driving the car..suddenly his phne rings...he pick the can and it was purab there...Bhayi Sorry yaar...mein tujhe bina bataye office aa gaya...wo actually mr.chadda ne achanak aj hi meeting rakh li thi...aur mein tujhe inform karna bhi bhool gaya


sameer : it's ok veerji...relax
on the other hand meher was walking towards her house in hurry...
Purab: Acha tu jaldi se office aaja wo mr.chadda tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain...
sameer: veerji...mein bs 10 min mein pohnchta hoon...
sameer was talking to purab and suddenly meher come's infront of sameer's car while crossing the road...sameer Immediately stop the car and asked purab to be on hold...
meher fell down while all her Goods fell along with her...


Plz ignore grammar or spelling mistakes...
So gusy no precap for now as it's the beinning yet..
PS:I hope u guys may like it...and am sure that after reading this... u guys may thora thora understand the concept... leave your replies and tell me how's it? should i continue? if yes then for that i need your support...otherwise i'll discontinue it here...'ll be waiting eagrly for your response..😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow in your story sameer can drive the car...great 😆
nice story do continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbiedoll_sona

wow in your story sameer can drive the car...great 😆
nice story do continue 😊


yes sameer in my story, is totally different from the serial wala sameer...hehe..
btw thanks.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovely_Bajwa_

Awesome!!
Please contineu soon!!


thanks dear ..and i dont think i'll be able to continue the story as am not getting much response to continue this ss 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow intense sameer! plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls pls pls continue it im dying to read more😳 its the first story in d forum❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wlcum back
awesome story
plz continue soon
and thank 4 pm saba.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Ramiii...
Got ur pm..and am happy that u r back..
a hearty welcome to u
i dont follow NPGA forum but i follow the serial as iqher are mine fav..
just read the first part and loved it !
really differ from the story concept
plz do continue it !
am loving it🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow.. happy to see ua new story...
though i don follow the show, willl read ua story...
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Wlcum back
awesome story
plz continue soon
and thank 4 pm saba.


thanks dear😊

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