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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
ramisaaa... missed you so much 🤗
welcome back and super happy to see you back🤗
OMG u write so well...i loved it
superb concept yaar ... and excited for ur next update so don't make we wait for long chalo jaldi jaldi update karo 😆
do continue soon
love ya 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: veenisha

ramisaaa... missed you so much 🤗

welcome back and super happy to see you back🤗
OMG u write so well...i loved it
superb concept yaar ... and excited for ur next update so don't make we wait for long chalo jaldi jaldi update karo 😆
do continue soon
love ya 🤗


OMG veeshu u here ?
thanks god ap mill gaye..😆
am also very happy to see u after a long time🤗
thanks for liking the concept and ya i'll continue soon dont worry i'll not be last this time like earlier😆😳..
Love ya Tooo❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
hey rammiii
plz do update soon
eagrly waiting for next part..
ab aur intezaar mat karwao plzzz

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki,
aayi na kuch khabar mere SAHER ki
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Part 2

meher fell down while all her Goods fell along with her...Sameer got out of the car and walk towards meher he sit near her...meher was busy while lifting all her things suddenly a strong wind come's across them...


her hairs were flying with the wind, sameer was just lost in her beauty for some time...when meher look at her...they had an eyelock...


After a while meher speak up and said,andhe ho kya? gaari thike se chalani nahi aati to chalate kyun ho? itni badi gaari lekar ghoomte ho kuch dikhayi bhi deta hai ke nai?


Sameer was now in full of anger...he speak up, mein to nai lekin lagta hai tum zaroor andhi ho itni badi badi aankhein lekar ghomti ho..kuch dikhayi bhi deta hai ke nahi?


Meher in anger mood pick her finger towards sameer and said, tum..tumne mujhe andha kaha?


sameer quickly said, haan kaha..kyunke pehle tum ne kaha...
U...(mein bi pata nahi kess pagal ke mooh lag rahi hun) meher muttered to herself..


kya..kya kaha? said sameer..
jo bhi kaha tumhe kya? said meher in a childish way
tumne mujhe pagal kaha hai? said sameer


haan kyunke tum shakal se hi pagal dikhte ho...waise konse mental hospital se aaye ho?said meher
kya tum janti ho..ke mein kon hoon?
mujhe koi shoq nai hai tumhe jan-ne ka samjhe...


sameer was about to continue suddenly his phone rang..he looks at the number it was purab's call.. sameer look at her angrily and run towards his car saying ( Tumhe to mein baad mein dekh lun ga)..


meher in a shocky way said : Kinna ajeeb aadmi hai...ek to ghalti ki aur upar se bina maafi mange..attitude dikha ke chala gaya...tumhe bhi dekh lun gi mein huh...! ( and walk towards her house)..


sameer in the car pick the purab's call..purab speaked: bhayi kaha rah gaya hai tu sameer? Mrchadda kab se tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain..
am..am sorry veerji wo mein ek musibbat mein phass gaya tha...badi mushkil se nikla hoon..purab shockley asked: whaat...tu thike to hai na sameer? kya hua kya hai?
sameer : relax veerji mujhe kuch nahi hua hai...bs ek pagal se saamna ho gaya tha...


Meher's Residence:


pata nahi samajhta kya tha apne ap ko...itna gurrur...itna gussa...bebe looks at her and come's to her saying aa gayi tu..
but meher was lost in muttering with her self...


bebe asked: Arry kya hua meher beta? kya badbada rahi hai khud se?
meher : bebe tujhe pata hai aaj mera taakra ek mental bande se ho gaya...itna khadus...itna khadus ke bs pucho mat..


bebe: n beta sab log jaise dikhte hain waise hote nahi...ho sakta hai wo dil ka acha ho...meher cutt off and said...arry bebe us ki toh shakal dekh kar hi banda darr jaye..itna harsh hai wo...
bebe: acha ab jaa ke late hone ka iradaa hai?


meher get up and said : haye rabba...mein to bhul hi gayi thi...acha chalti hun bebe she un hurridly towards door and leave...


sameer arrive the office and went in...purab was sitting on sofa worridly lost in some thought...suddenly he look's at the door and watch sameer entring inside...


purab get up and go to sameer and said : bhai kaha reh gaya tha tu? thanks god you're finally here...


before sameer say something mr chadda speak up and said: Mr sameer plz join us mujhe kisi important kaam par bhi jana hai..sameer noded and they begin's the meeting again..
On the other hand meher reach to the office where was her interview today...


At Atwal's Office:


sameer and purab was walking towards their cabins as their cabins are attached together...rabb ka shukar hai veeriji ke yeh deal humein mil gayi...said sameer...


haan...shukar hai rab ka ke tu waqt par pohanch gaya..mujhe to 0.01% bhi chances nahi dikh rahe the yeh deal haasil karne ke..
veerji mere hote hua ap ko tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...said sameer with a little smile..


arry yehi vishwaas to mujhe tujh par proud feel karwata hai..said purab while smiling back..


on the other hand meher went in and look that there is no one sitting for interview...she then asked the receptioner that why is there none for the interview...? there was interviews for jobs here na?
receptioner told her that interview's are over now..you are late..



Precap : Meher and sameer came face to face once again...


IGNORE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING MISTAKES... 😊
IT'S NOT EDITED SO IGNORE THE MISTAKES..
PS: i know am late but u guys dont do the same so plz comment fast fast...
Edited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wah ji wah sameer lost in jerk beauty... And both are fighting here too..in your story sameer is iqbal right...sameer will teach her lesson or meher will take next panga ... For more updates check this space...

Aww sweet story saba... Enjoyed it thoroughly[:*]

And missed you saba so much ..hoping to see you around 🤗
Edited by Barbiedoll_sona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Res...
unres...


wawww...ramii tune to unhe first meet mein hi pyaar ka nasha chadha diya...hae i can imagine their first eyelock
ohh..bechari meher feerling sad for her...beechari ko nokri ni milli 😒...
so cute story and u have described it so well...ke bs kya puchoo...Mazaaa aaa gaya
loved it !
and OMG the precap is more excited😳
plz continue soon...

Edited by -lisana- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
aamane samne aa gaye apne bacche😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
dear i havent seen this seriez so i cant say anything

i did read yr update but i was lost as i have no idea of the series itself so is ke liye maafi yar as mei koi comment nahi de paragi hu but i would say that you r a fantastic writer

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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
they had a eyelock, means pyaar ke sath takraar. wow i luv ur story, keep it up😛

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