AvNeil 2S : 'New Beginings.!!' (Complete) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
How was it???
It was wonderful wrierji...
For me it was more of ananya than avni...tripping falling and talking to herself...
Waiting to read what other reasons avni has to reject tillu😉
Edited by srain10 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Wow... this was so awesome!!! I cannot wait for the next part, this was adorable, please update soon, thank you for such an interesting plot :D x
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
🤣🤣🤣
Tillu!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Who does that to her son or prospective Son-in-Law...no wonder she thinks she'z meeting some starched shirt, oily hair, wide framed, mama's boy!!😆

Omg...I can't wait to find out how Avni will react when she finds out that she was stuck in the elevator with Tillu & I can't wait to see how Neil will make Avni fall for him in such a short time!

Since its complete, don't make us wait too much for the last part...😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Woah ! thanks a lot for the perfect weekend dose its an absolute pleasure to read your ff always & this was so so cute and interesting simultaneously i thought she was really going to attend an IV for job and I thought maybe Neil will be her to-be-boss but I was totally surprised just like Neil to know this preparation was for meeting tillu urf Neil for marriage and not for job 😆i liked how she rejected his name tillu directly without even actually knowing him or his actual name can't wait to read more update the next part asap if possible 😃
Much love to you
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Edited by Chocolatebond - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Wow awsm 👏
Bechare tillu k naam ka mzak bna dia avni ne
Hahahha
Loved it...plz update next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
I read as soon as you updated . What a bouncer by Avni at last ! Tillu , who even has such a name 😆 I had a nice laugh imagining his face . Shock should be an understatement . Her fist reason for rejecting him was his pet name . He must be shocked cum embarrassed.😆😆 Poor guy ! He must have made a mind to give two cents to his mum 😆She was so clumsy and nervous to meet him and was confident that they won't click 😆 How this becomes a formal meeting to him
Special mention you never miss a chance to remind me of NK scenes . I travelled back to the scene where Neil chases her and she shuts her eyes tight and keeps her fisted hands near her chest in fear of stumbling while reading lift scene😳

Thank you for much needed dose for weekend
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Will get back in an hour or so, Riya. Outside with family.


Will be waiting.!
Enjoy ur family time 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Unfortunately, I am reading your write up for the first time. I am quite imactive as a reader. Please excuse me for that. However, I happened to be just going through the forum when I found this. So I thought, why not give this a shot. And I am glad I did. 😆

It was an interesting piece of write up. Initailly, I thought that Avni was really there for an interview. Instead of it being a weekend. But that's how the life of a full time employee happens to be. You don't have a personal life, forget the weekends and holidays. I speak from personal experience. Hell, had I been in Avni's place to recieve that question, I would have definitely answered, "Dude, You don't have a life as an employee. Instead, if you ever get a chance, be a boss than an employee. Take it as a piece of advice from a friend."

Enough of that. I was stunned for a second that she was there to meet her prospective groom. I was, however, certain, it had to be Neil. Who else could it be for Avni? *Dreamy sigh*

Shweta has some big lecture coming up from her son. God, I love her character. Inspite of her not having an actual presence in the part.

Eagerly waiting to see how Avni reacts to finding out who tillu actually is. Also, the way Neil makes her realise how well can they work.

I believe by the end of this conversation in the elevator, Avni would seem to find Neil as a better fit than tillu, not knowing that Neil and tillu are the same. 😆 Just assuming.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Ok.. I only have one question to be asked.. when is the next part going to be updated???
And to tell you about the part, it was beautiful and ya I am going to use this lift concept in my ff. Please don't mind.. I just loved the concept.

Please update the status part sooonnn
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
she is gonna get a shock of a lifettime, but a pleasant one I am sure

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