AvNeil 2S : 'New Beginings.!!' (Complete) - Page 3

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

This is super fun!!! They're meeting their respective prospects without realising it. Yes, ofcourse.! The next part will be about how it turns out when one has realised the fact 😉 Never I could guess it's their marriage setup as I was rather expecting a work interview. That's a huge surprise. Blame my twisted mind for it. Had u all didnt know Neil's nickname, you wouldnt have known whats going on till the end of the story 😉 Pity Neil, for being introduced as Tillu. Hahahaha... Ikr.! It is more embarresing than offending Avni here appears less uptight with more Ananya traits and Neil, remains adorable. Thats true.! They're discussing abt them unknowingly whilst being stuck together, very interesting thought that you have there. Loved the light hearted yet subtlely dramatic meet. Thank u so very much. I am glad u enjoyed reading it 😉 Waiting for next inquisitively.. wonder how it's gonna end in the next shot.. thank you for lightening up my weekend. It will be up very soon.!

Originally posted by: srain10

How was it???

It was wonderful wrierji... Aww, thank u so much dear

For me it was more of ananya than avni...tripping falling and talking to herself.. yeah maybe, but then hai toh voh bhi Avni hi. 😉.

Waiting to read what other reasons avni has to reject tillu😉 ohh they are going to be fun. 😉

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

Wow... this was so awesome!!! I cannot wait for the next part, this was adorable, please update soon, thank you for such an interesting plot :D x

Originally posted by: paayaal

🤣🤣🤣

Tillu!!🤣

Who does that to her son or prospective Son-in-Law...no wonder she thinks she'z meeting some starched shirt, oily hair, wide framed, mama's boy!!😆 Exactly.! Avni cant be blamed fully.! His MoM did it for him 😆😆

Omg...I can't wait to find out how Avni will react when she finds out that she was stuck in the elevator with Tillu & I can't wait to see how Neil will make Avni fall for him in such a short time! Ahaa, dont underestimate the power of Neil Khanna's charm.! It always Works 😉

Since its complete, don't make us wait too much for the last part...😉 Nah, i wont.! You know me.! I myself gets terribly excited that i cant hold back. 😉

Originally posted by: Chocolatebond

Woah ! thanks a lot for the perfect weekend dose its an absolute pleasure to read your ff always & this was so so cute and interesting simultaneously Aww, thats real sweet of u to say that. Thank u so much! i thought she was really going to attend an IV for job and I thought maybe Neil will be her to-be-boss but I was totally surprised just like Neil to know this preparation was for meeting tillu urf Neil for marriage and not for job😆 Blame that thing to my twisted mind.! Though she was going to meet a guy for a marriage, but her preparation was more like an iv so you thought the expected 😉 i liked how she rejected his name tillu directly without even actually knowing him or his actual name can't wait to read more update the next part asap if possible😃 Yes, will post it preety soon.!

Much love to you

🤗

Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Wow awsm👏

Bechare tillu k naam ka mzak bna dia avni ne

Hahahha

Loved it...plz update next

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I read as soon as you updated . What a bouncer by Avni at last ! Coming that from Avni doesnt make it unpredictable 😆 She is an ajooba 😉 Tillu , who even has such a name😆I had a nice laugh imagining his face . Shock should be an understatement . Haha 😆 True Her fist reason for rejecting him was his pet name . He must be shocked cum embarrassed.😆😆Poor guy ! He must have made a mind to give two cents to his mum 😆 Anyday.! Shweta always lend him up in such embarresing situations.! He would have never ever thought that his mom will introduce him as tillu to his supposed bride She was so clumsy and nervous to meet him and was confident that they won't click😆 The nervousness sometimes brings out the worst of us 😉 How this becomes a formal meeting to him He said personal yet formal, since he was supposed to meet his mother's best friend's daughter for the first time and that too woth a prospect of marriage.! Isnt it formal.! 😉

Special mention you never miss a chance to remind me of NK scenes . I travelled back to the scene where Neil chases her and she shuts her eyes tight and keeps her fisted hands near her chest in fear of stumbling while reading lift scene😳 Thank u so much.! I am begining to like ur observations.! Well NK and AvNeil run in my blood and imagination, so whenevr i write i magine their body language only so it comes out to be exactly like adiza portraying it.! And thats where readers connect to it

Thank you for much needed dose for weekend And if u think its over here, then no my dear friend we have more to come. 😉

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Unfortunately, I am reading your write up for the first time. I am quite imactive as a reader. Please excuse me for that. No probs dear.! I am glad you decided to give it a chance ! However, I happened to be just going through the forum when I found this. So I thought, why not give this a shot. And I am glad I did. 😆 I am obliged to know that

It was an interesting piece of write up. Initailly, I thought that Avni was really there for an interview. Instead of it being a weekend. But that's how the life of a full time employee happens to be. You don't have a personal life, forget the weekends and holidays. I speak from personal experience. Hell, had I been in Avni's place to recieve that question, I would have definitely answered, "Dude, You don't have a life as an employee. Instead, if you ever get a chance, be a boss than an employee. Take it as a piece of advice from a friend." I can totally understand where u are coming from.! If life of employee is as such then imagine what it must be for a doctor.! I could remember the last movie i have seen completely and not been disturbed by an emergency call to go and see the patient asap.! Me being a movie buff, this happens with me all the time

Enough of that. I was stunned for a second that she was there to meet her prospective groom. I was, however, certain, it had to be Neil. Who else could it be for Avni? *Dreamy sigh* Hahaaha 😆 Well i have a real twisted mind to come up with such twisted plots. But i am happy u guys enjoy it 😉

Shweta has some big lecture coming up from her son. God, I love her character. Inspite of her not having an actual presence in the part. Hahaha, Trust Shweta to lend up his son in terrible awkward and embarresing situations. 😆

Eagerly waiting to see how Avni reacts to finding out who tillu actually is. Also, the way Neil makes her realise how well can they work. That will be really interesting.! Will put that part soon

I believe by the end of this conversation in the elevator, Avni would seem to find Neil as a better fit than tillu, not knowing that Neil and tillu are the same. 😆 Just assuming. You are in for a surprise then.😉