AvNeil TS : Renewal of vows : last and final part updated pg 8 - Page 8

Originally posted by: paayaal

Such a perfect end to a perfect story! But this was too short!Aww...two 'perfect' in one sentence.what more can I ask.Thnk you😊.

Avni seeing visual proof of Neilz love for her & then proposing to him in such a heartfelt manner was so...Now here I give u the credit😉.U were the one who suggested about the night before the wedding.

Neela is just #mothergoals...she knew that Avni had gone out in spite of Avbi being careful about it...she only breathed a sigh of relief when Avni came back home even though she knew she had gone out with Neil! She is my fav.A mother alwys knws abt her child.

The joke on the eariler bride swap coz of ghonnghat & the bribing of pandit was just so cheeky...m loving it!.My idea of comic relief...lol😆

The redoing of greh pravesh with ref to the earlier one was lovely as well!!

This was an amazing journey that got over too quickly!! I m demanding another story from you that too soon & this time a longer one please!!!It was meant to be a one shot.Likhte likhte lamba hogaya😆

Originally posted by: drbeth

Thnk u dear😊

You always write such encouraging words. 😊

As for another story dt too a long one...I'll give it a try.I'm not a gud writer to be honest😆

Thnx for all the love nd support.

Originally posted by: darsh333

Next part was fun!but it ended tooo soon

I was expecting more after the shaadiToo soon😆.Such a long update it was.Chptr wise it would hv been 4 chapters give or take.I meant it to be a TS, remember? After shaadi.. .meant SR and I didn't want to go der

I liked how the shaadi rituals were happy ones and there was no crying scenes in it😊 Thank u .I wanted it to be smiles all d way.

This was a really happy os😊..please do write a new os soon!

Though i was a late comer i had already written a review on the previous part😕I'm so sorry abt dt.Saw it later.

And about sorrys..i had told you might need a lorry for it😆 I definitely need to get one of those.

Originally posted by: paayaal

I'll gladly accept all the credit if my humble ideas result in such amazing moments!!

U r an awesome writer whose words resonate so closely with us readers!!

Waiting for ur next story with bated breath!

Originally posted by: drbeth

Thank u Darshana😊

Don't expect me to write another OS.Who knows it better than you how terrible I'm at that.I started it as a single shot and finished it as a three shots😆.Thank God TS cn mean two/three shots😆

Thnx again

Love ya

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

This was so beautiful, every ritual had a charm of its own. Immensely enjoyed your writing. Why did you feel like I will laugh, this was so nice and very romantic. AvNeil were damn good and full of love in air. Thanks for writing this!

Love,

Nivi