AvNeil TS : Renewal of vows : last and final part updated pg 8

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia
Awww tapasi such a cute a beautiful update had huge smile on my face the whole time thank you for this wonderful story the whole late night drive idea was awesome 👏
Using bright face smart idea 😉 giving adiza feel I like it 😳

Do write more stories

Much love
Safia

Thnk u dear😊

Thnk God... Someone liked the night drive idea.I thought I messed it up😆

I realised it later that it was Adiza not Avneil 😆 .

Thnx for all the love.😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Awww.. it was beautiful! very soothing to read. i'm glad you wrote this FF. kaash aage show main jab avneil reunion hojaye they can show us remarriage. after all neelama ki bhi aakhri khwaish hai! unko toh maar daala atleast unki last wish toh hopefully poori karenge! very well written. thank you! hope you will write more FFs in the future

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Awww.. it was beautiful! very soothing to read. i'm glad you wrote this FF. kaash aage show main jab avneil reunion hojaye they can show us remarriage. after all neelama ki bhi aakhri khwaish hai! unko toh maar daala atleast unki last wish toh hopefully poori karenge! very well written. thank you! hope you will write more FFs in the future

Thnk u Neerja😊

I hope so too.Neela Ma's last wish should be fulfilled.But it won't be the same widout her.Bt it will still be beautiful.

Thnx for reading and appreciating😊

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AvNeil123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

This was such a sweet story. Full of happiness, peace and AvNeil moments :)

Do continue writing more on AvNeil :-)

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-
This was such a sweet story. Full of happiness, peace and AvNeil moments :)

Do continue writing more on AvNeil :-)

Thnk u so much 😊

I appreciate u taking the tym to read it😊

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Awesome story
Love it

Thnk u so much😊

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
beautiful story

Thnk u so much😊

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Hayee

Awesome update.

I really sad it's end.

But u made everyone smile.

It's very soothing to see them like this.

It's so beautiful. Do write more dear. 👏

Iam waiting for Ur next story.

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: darsh333
Haayeee such a beautiful update..it brought a huge smile on my face😊 Finally. Yayee I'm smiling nw

I liked how u began the story..neil grinning and saying haa avni instead of taking bebe's name..😆 Thnk u thnk u😆

Neil is so impatient😆the "creative thoughts" and just one more day..mmm😉 Ahem ahem.His impatience is making him creative😆

I liked your song selections😃it made me feel like i was actually at a shaadi😆 That is wht I wanted😳

And sorry for not reading it till now :| i know im pretty late :| sorry again :| so many sorrys😡.Where should I keep it??

Update the next part😃and start writing a new os😃

Thnk u for finally taking time to read it😊

And for such lovely comments😊

Next part is updated. Do read.

New OS...dnt knw abt that.

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Hayee
Awesome update.
I really sad it's end.
But u made everyone smile.
It's very soothing to see them like this.
It's so beautiful. Do write more dear. 👏
Iam waiting for Ur next story.

Thnx a lot dear😊

So sweet of u to say dt I made evry1 smile.😃

Its means a lot to me that you want to read another story frm me.😊

Thnx for taking tym to read it