Avneil ff - Page 22

Wow wow wow 🤗 thanks for writing such a beautiful chapter... Loved every bit of it...

Originally posted by: Brightglow

Wow wow wow 🤗 thanks for writing such a beautiful chapter... Loved every bit of it...

I could actually visualise Zain being so excited, impatient and on toes to reveal the news sab se pehle to Avni... And when he did I could very well connect to Avni's response and loved the idea of recording such a special once in a life time moment...

And the way she surprised him the next day with gifts was and the chit jar idea is fab... And ur 100 reasons !! Bang on dear... 😃

The 100th one though made me think of Adiza rather than AvNeil 😳

On a whole it was too good... And as always close to reality incidents which are any day a bliss to read on AvNeil...

PS : sorry for not commenting on the previous chapters... I did read and loved them a lot... Just that time constraints pls don't mind.. and u know that if I have time I really give u a longgg review of mine :))

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing update
Continue soon

superb

Oh god, ali got angry he have a reason to mad on her.

If I were Ali even if would have reacted the same. No one will like his or her friend intruding in their business unless asked for . It's so natural of him to feel Avni is doing charity. He was bit too much miffed that he pointed she was showing off she is rich. And we can't blame Avni too . Neil made her understand it so easily. Lets see what she does to convince him .

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Oh god, ali got angry he have a reason to mad on her.

Avni ko yeh nahi karni chaiye thi.

Anyway, neil khanna convinced her. And made her understand wat she did.

Now eagerly waiting for their patchup.Continue soon.

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

If I were Ali even if would have reacted the same. No one will like his or her friend intruding in their business unless asked for . It's so natural of him to feel Avni is doing charity. He was bit too much miffed that he pointed she was showing off she is rich. And we can't blame Avni too . Neil made her understand it so easily. Lets see what she does to convince him .

Hello Neerja , brilliant updates back to back ..sorry for being MIA for long ..

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Hello Neerja , brilliant updates back to back ..sorry for being MIA for long ..

Coming to the updates..

Man , mainotaining work life balance is a daily struggle and you have portrayed it so well..that phase of fights for anything and everything is a pain..you portrayed very realistically .. are you married ? 😃..it was as close as it can get to reality ..loved their patch up and promises ..

Family planning and pressure from elders ..avni ke reservation we're very well portrayed and she is lucky to have such an understanding hubby ..kudos to Neil for acting upon her wishes of clubbing with him ..talli avni is my favorite and I love her adventures 😆.. it's beautiful how they are so attuned to each other ..

Neil is now a dcp and I love how you wrote the celebrations part ..speci sp mention to swetha ..how far she has come ..had it been her previous self she would have created tamasha about Neil sharing his big news with acni and not her first ..you see the typical pehle maa vs biwi situation 😆

Looking forward to further updates