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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: TSharan
Loved this Avni-Ali special episode!!

Thank you! honestly i wish i had written it a bit better but the words werent flowing well. but i'm glad i wrote an ali-avni bit because I feel they have such a precious bond..wanted to get atleast some of that in my FF. I wish we got more of their scenes together on the show too!

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Thank you! honestly i wish i had written it a bit better but the words werent flowing well. but i'm glad i wrote an ali-avni bit because I feel they have such a precious bond..wanted to get atleast some of that in my FF. I wish we got more of their scenes together on the show too!

I don't see any hint from his return

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Posted: 7 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
I never expected him to be miffed so much . Felt a little bad for her . Best thing was that group hug at last

ali and avni's bond is a beautiful one. bachpan ki dosti khaas hoti hai. and I really wanted to bring out some of that without it being typical nostalgia trip...i wanted to also show that they have conflicts too because of the fact that she wasn't around for a large portion of their life and because shes married now and cant devote as much time to their friendship anymore...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I don't see any hint from his return

Ya i know! so sad :( saesha ka exit karake they should bring back ali.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#235

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Just received a message congratulating me on 25 chapters and it suddenly dawned on me too...25! Yay! Not bad at all for an amateur I'd say. Certainly didnt think I'd write 25 chapters when I started this one off. Thank you to all the readers who have hit the like button and commented on it so far! your appreciation means a lot! much love!❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago

#236

It was really really awesome chapter ...loved avni ali bonding very much...their past memories their fighting...i still like them and u brush up my memory by this beautiful piece of writing...thanx a lot dear i loved avni tactics to resolve fighting climbing on pipe hahha and tree branch ...and finally they hug loved it all yr...plz update next

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#237

Originally posted by: Kiranrathore
It was really really awesome chapter ...loved avni ali bonding very much...their past memories their fighting...i still like them and u brush up my memory by this beautiful piece of writing...thanx a lot dear i loved avni tactics to resolve fighting climbing on pipe hahha and tree branch ...and finally they hug loved it all yr...plz update next

Thank you very much babe! Glad you enjoyed this chapter too.😊

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WhtinAname

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Posted: 7 years ago

#238

Hey Neerja.

Sorry I hv not been a regular reader.

But I hv read a few chapters in between.Let me tell u I find it really amazing how you build up stories around regular day to day life stuff and make it interesting.Also you update so fast...great how you come up wid so many ideas.

Congratulations on 25 chapters.

PS: dt 100 reasons... was awesome.Couldn't believe you actually wrote dt many.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: drbeth
Hey Neerja.
Sorry I hv not been a regular reader.
But I hv read a few chapters in between.Let me tell u I find it really amazing how you build up stories around regular day to day life stuff and make it interesting.Also you update so fast...great how you come up wid so many ideas.

Congratulations on 25 chapters.

PS: dt 100 reasons... was awesome.Couldn't believe you actually wrote dt many.

Thank you so much tapasi! Honestly It wasn't too hard to come up with 100 reasons for Neil. He is husband goals afterall...uske liye toh aur bhi bahut reasons one can write!😊