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@ shaiksafia Thank you very much for your consistent feedback and also for the idea to put all the parts together and organise it into one thread!

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 8 years ago

It was just great! Their date ad the whole get to know each other better, her love for bhojpuri songs the kiss and how shy sje was. do write more!

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Shaiksafia

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91
@ shaiksafia Thank you very much for your consistent feedback and also for the idea to put all the parts together and organise it into one thread!

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firsttimehere

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Posted: 8 years ago

Such a wonderful story ..thank you very much for penning it down 😊

Loved how you explored both their emotions , their love and things about each other that they don't really know .. I just can't pick a few things as my favorite ..I loved it totally and in entirety ..

Looking forward to more stories from you ..

I love the idea of exploring what they discussed in 20 things game ..count me in as your reader 😊

Also , I forgot to comment then , but I really loved your take on avni's insecurities in another OS .. it's so realistic and probably something which should have been explored further on the show

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Thank you tumpa

@firsttimehere thank you very much for your wonderful comments. I'm glad you liked the other OS as well.

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful part neeraja 👏 it's just gives me such a warm feeling reading this part it had everything I want AvNeil to enjoy about there relationship can't wat to read more

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Thanks a lot:) u r always so prompt with ur feedback and ur comments make me feel so happy that someone out there is enjoying my writing enough to always take time out to reply. Really appreciate it. Thanks

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Shaiksafia

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Thanks a lot:) u r always so prompt with ur feedback and ur comments make me feel so happy that someone out there is enjoying my writing enough to always take time out to reply. Really appreciate it. Thanks

That's because usually late afternoons are me time as little one goes to sleep and I enjoy reading and I love how quick your with your updates it's keeps me engaged in the story hope you're having fun writing

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 8 years ago

You know how much I have missed her nose ring . It comolements her fierce character .

Bike rides are always romantic than car ride ESP with speed breakers 😉

That 20 questions was really great . AvNeil should know about each other in the show . Par ye toh hone se hai

And rest of the part was a great bliss .

Neil never shows away to show his vulnerability or acknowledge his wife . He agreed he feels safe in her arms . That's one unique thing about him which makes us fall for him .

You have incorporated everything that was discussed of what avneil had to do . Avni riding a bike had always been a dream of mine 😃

Thanks for writing this ff . It's so great

Edited by AgnesFan - 8 years ago