AvNeil FF: FATEFUL COLLISIONS (closure pv 38)

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: avneil2
Awesome update. Cute update. I loved it dear.
Oh god phirse kab milenge yeh dono. They started to feel for each other.😳unknowingly😉
Loved it. Continue soon.

thank you!! Jald hi milenge, bas thoda sa wait. I'll try and update it soon :)

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: paayaal
First I don't mind the length...infact, the longer the better😃.
I got so engrossed in their catching up & what cud b termed as an unofficial date, that I was actually surprised when the chapters ended!

Loved that both remembered each other from the one time they met 2 years ago. This shows what an impact they had on each other even if it was an unconscious one considering Avni was still reeling under the feelings of revenge & Neil was still immature!

Neelaz decision to remove Avni from the environment was a good one! 2 years away from poison named DVM improved her disposition & allowed her to enjoy her life & grow up naturally!

Neil too has grown up to be a kind & thoughtful young man!

They both have feeling for each other...which ofc they cudn't recognize the last time they met!

& they've decided to meet after 3 yrs in NY! All hollywood movies have made us realize that this meeting is ill-fated!

They cud meet earlier...but once Neil comes to know that the Ananya Verma he met is in actuality Avni Parikh...tabb kya hoga??

Neela & Prakash r partners-in-crime against DVM! How cool is that? That's also 1 way for AvNeil to meet...

Thanks payal, I was rather worried about the length. I am glad that you liked it.

Yes, they definitely had a huge impact in each other's lives. And that is going to increase in the next meet. I am sure both of them have thought about each other over the years. Multiple times.

Yes, neela did everything she could to make sure the anger decreased and she had a normal environment to grow. Even if it meant that she had to live away from her.

Neil is a sweetheart. Always is. Always will be

They'll realize the feelings slowly and steadily. What is the hurry? According to current time line, neil is about to be 24 and avni has probably just turned 23. They have time :)

As far as whether they meet earlier or not or what happens when neil comes to know, you'll have to wait and watch ;)

And neela and prakash, again a secret. Shhh.

Thank you so so much!!!! <3

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy
I want to comment right away but don't want to just say few words! So,
Resss

no worries. Will wait for your comment :)

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me
no worries. Will wait for your comment :)

Unres (get set to read a long blabbering of mine 😛)

First of all dear, my face lit up to see ur ff updates... when I opened I was happy to read that u've given me a bonus in the form of posting 2 chapters back to back.. 😃 so thank u 🤗

Secondly its not at all lengthy 😳 I wanted to read on and on and on... it was so beautiful, peaceful and happy... I didn't want it to end 😊 and I'm not exaggerating...

This was pure bliss and I was flying high in AvNeil land.. for the whole time I had a smile on my face 😊 this ff is so pleasant without any negativity and obstacles and unwanted stuff... your writing is brilliant especially in these two chapters. 👍🏼

I just loved the way they met again, from the moment Neil saw her to the way he just approached and hugged her to manipulate Juhi, and Avni too joining in his plan to fool Juhi... their wine session , the small talks they had while sipping wine, the pizzeria scene where Neil was so generous and kind towards Jenny.. their beach talk... the way u've written the transition of Neil's character from a boyish brat to a mature man...with still same goodness everything is Beautiful!! ❤️

And Avni, I loved how she is more friendly and free with Neil now... and boy ! Both have started feeling that there's something more between them than a just a stranger relationship! Loved how u've written their feelings about this...

And aahh Neil kissed her on the cheek ☺️ I could imagine this scene right in front of my eyes... and wished kaash kaash yeh hota show pe ! This was cherry on the cake... 😊 and both ran back to each other seemingly disturbed with the current farewell... the pact was superrr!

On a whole these two were brilliant chapters and were AvNeilicious 😃

Phew done with my appreciations for u... iske badle I want the next update asap! 😆

PS: also liked how Neela had kept Avni away from the revenge mission and let her live her life normally an carried on all by herself to destroy DM...

Edited by Avni_reddy - 7 years ago

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Unres (get set to read a long blabbering of mine 😛)

First of all dear, my face lit up to see ur ff updates... when I opened I was happy to read that u've given me a bonus in the form of posting 2 chapters back to back.. 😃 so thank u 🤗

Secondly its not at all lengthy 😳 I wanted to read on and on and on... it was so beautiful, peaceful and happy... I didn't want it to end 😊 and I'm not exaggerating...

This was pure bliss and I was flying high in AvNeil land.. for the whole time I had a smile on my face 😊 this ff is so pleasant without any negativity and obstacles and unwanted stuff... your writing is brilliant especially in these two chapters. 👍🏼

I just loved the way they met again, from the moment Neil saw her to the way he just approached and hugged her to manipulate Juhi, and Avni too joining in his plan to fool Juhi... their wine session , the small talks they had while sipping wine, the pizzeria scene where Neil was so generous and kind towards Jenny.. their beach talk... the way u've written the transition of Neil's character from a boyish brat to a mature man...with still same goodness everything is Beautiful!! ❤️

And Avni, I loved how she is more friendly and free with Neil now... and boy ! Both have started feeling that there's something more between them than a just a stranger relationship! Loved how u've written their feelings about this...

And aahh Neil kissed her on the cheek ☺️ I could imagine this scene right in front of my eyes... and wished kaash kaash yeh hota show pe ! This was cherry on the cake... 😊 and both ran back to each other seemingly disturbed with the current farewell... the pact was superrr!

On a whole these two were brilliant chapters and were AvNeilicious 😃

Phew done with my appreciations for u... iske badle I want the next update asap! 😆

PS: also liked how Neela had kept Avni away from the revenge mission and let her live her life normally an carried on all by herself to destroy DM...

thank you so so much! I hope the chapter had put a big smile on your face like reading this comment has put on mine. So,big hugs right back at you🤗

I am glad that you didn't find it lengthy. It was one of my major concerns. and also that you could see the character growth. That was important. Because a sudden shift two years without knowing anything in between could go either ways. Both avni and neil have come a long way in two years.

Yes, this is mostly a light hearted read. So no major negativity here. Still trying to make them realize the value they have in each others lives.

Neil is a charmer. Always. At least that is how I see him. A total do gooder and very pure. That is why he is so good with jenny or even avni. But with a hint of mischief. So, that is why the initial lie and the cheek kiss.

Neela is such a character that will always want the best fir her daughter. And at that time sending her away seemed the best decision. So, a Normal life for avni to let her grow.

Thanks again for such kind words of appreciation. You are too kind❤️ I'll try and update the next part soon.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Your story is a immune boost . It puts a smile on my face . Happy go lucky with a cheeky charming Neil and Avni who is ready to adapt herself to changes .

I am dying here to pull Neil's cheeks like there is no end . How this guy can be so cute and irresistible . He is such a charmer and warm character . He must be the one in your description before he joined police force .Something in life should become a turning point . For Neil it was his Bebe's health issues .

I am loving Avni . She didn't spoil Neil's game when he seemed her help to get rid of Juhi . That's a good improvement in her character . I guess she has changed from a damn serious nerdy girl to someone who is open to changes and take life as it comes or was it the effect of Neela's phone call 😉

Neela is always a selfless soul . I wish she gets someone at least in your story .

I enjoyed all their silly talks and wine session. Neil helping out Jenny is so understandable . He misses his Bebe . He gave his extra pocket money to her . That was really so humble gesture . Omg the kiss . He kissed her so soon . That was so cute .😳

Your story is a Merry ride .

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Veenapai

@Veenapai

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Both the updates are beautiful & awesome. Continue soon

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1127246

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Gooosh.. It's freaking awesome I read it twice

and still wanting to read it for the 3rd time..

Day by day and chap by chap I have become

obsessed with this beautiful work of yours.

Still in the spell of the story that I'm in lala land

yaar and I'm sure if it goes in this rate I'm gonna

go bonkers.(hehee)

Don't know why I have a strong feeling that

I have read or seen something similar of this

sort.(may be deja vu).Hearing about NY made

me think about "Anjaana Anjaani"

Hey but as said earlier this is surely

the one close to my heart and don't know why

I feel connected to this particular tale.

PS: May I know your beautiful name.

(Its difficult to address you yaar.)

With Love

Kathy ❤️

Edited by Kathy_927 - 7 years ago

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Your story is a immune boost . It puts a smile on my face . Happy go lucky with a cheeky charming Neil and Avni who is ready to adapt herself to changes .
I am dying here to pull Neil's cheeks like there is no end . How this guy can be so cute and irresistible . He is such a charmer and warm character . He must be the one in your description before he joined police force .Something in life should become a turning point . For Neil it was his Bebe's health issues .

I am loving Avni . She didn't spoil Neil's game when he seemed her help to get rid of Juhi . That's a good improvement in her character . I guess she has changed from a damn serious nerdy girl to someone who is open to changes and take life as it comes or was it the effect of Neela's phone call 😉

Neela is always a selfless soul . I wish she gets someone at least in your story .

I enjoyed all their silly talks and wine session. Neil helping out Jenny is so understandable . He misses his Bebe . He gave his extra pocket money to her . That was really so humble gesture . Omg the kiss . He kissed her so soon . That was so cute .😳

Your story is a Merry ride .

thank you so much!!! Neil is exactly in my head as you've described. Glad that I could put it forward in that way. He is irresistibly charming! I too want to pull his cheeks. Lets do it together 😆

And avni, yes she has changed leaps and bound. Majorly because she had a normal environment around her. So she has had a major change of character even more than Neil.

And I had no plan to put a love angle for neela, but may be for you I'll put it in some part.😉

And the kiss was kinda friendly thing. Nothing overtly romantic. But both did feel something more after that.

And thank you so so much. I was grinning ear to ear after reading your comment. you are very very sweet