AvNeil FF: FATEFUL COLLISIONS (closure pv 38)

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Main already 3 baar padh chuki Hoon. Please temme ur updating 2 parts today also!!!

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Kathy_927
Gooosh.. It's freaking awesome I read it twice
and still wanting to read it for the 3rd time..
Day by day and chap by chap I have become
obsessed with this beautiful work of yours.
Still in the spell of the story that I'm in lala land
yaar and I'm sure if it goes in this rate I'm gonna
go bonkers.(hehee)

Don't know why I have a strong feeling that
I have read or seen something similar of this
sort.(may be deja vu).Hearing about NY made
me think about "Anjaana Anjaani"

Hey but as said earlier this is surely
the one close to my heart and don't know why
I feel connected to this particular tale.

PS: May I know your beautiful name.
(Its difficult to address you yaar.)

With Love
Kathy ❤️

hey thank you so so much kathy! I am glad you liked this.As i have said before, you are too kind with your words. Your comment always puts a big smile on my face. Thanks a ton!

Well, the concept of a multiple meets over the years is kind of a clich. Used both in Hollywood and bollywood multiple times. May it be when harry met sally or a lot like love or even humtum. So may be that is why the deja vu. I am trying to apply it on avneil and show the character development.

And I haven't seen anjana anjaani. So the Christmas at Rockefeller Center is more from serendipity /when harry met sally.

And I am glad that you feel connected to it. It is like the biggest compliment i could have gotten. Thanks a ton again. <3

And my name is puja! The most overly used name in india i guess

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Main already 3 baar padh chuki Hoon. Please temme ur updating 2 parts today also!!!

thank you neerja! Actually I am in a train right now for a little vacation. I'll try and update the next part very soon. But not right now. Extremely sorry. Umm..tomorrow?

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Sonali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

loved it thanks for sharing

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

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Amayrasharma18

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Hey..buddy..!! This was so amazing ..!! Loved Neil and Avni here..!! Especially the concept of crossing paths over the years is mind blowing..!! It gives refreshing feels to have such concept on Avneil..!!
Can't resist myself from mentioning the flight scene where Neil blurts out his secrets...i totally loved it.. 😛
P.S. Do upadte soonish please..!! Eagerly waiting..!!

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Globetrotter_me

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18
Hey..buddy..!! This was so amazing ..!! Loved Neil and Avni here..!! Especially the concept of crossing paths over the years is mind blowing..!! It gives refreshing feels to have such concept on Avneil..!!
Can't resist myself from mentioning the flight scene where Neil blurts out his secrets...i totally loved it.. 😛
P.S. Do upadte soonish please..!! Eagerly waiting..!!

thank you so much! I am glad you liked it. Neil was such a goof ball then, but times have changed.

And thanks a lot again. I have just updated the next chapter, do give it a read. :)

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Wow dear superb update.loved it.

Finally they won, that Daayan got her punishment for her deeds.👏

Haha, their mothers became their cupid. There is no secret between both family.

They accept avni with whole heart. They want to play a Cupid. Little did they know. they know each other very well.😉 can't wait for their next meeting.

Continue soon. Can't wait to read more.

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Ah ha...so now their mothers are going to carry forward what unknown to them fate has already started!

I love it!!

I also like the fact that the families know each other so intimately that there are no secrets between them anymore!!

Neil has met Neela but doesn't know Avni!! Now that's going to be a shocker for him!

It's surprising how closely these families have known each other & work together but had not seen Avni's pic till date! But the moment they saw it they knew their kids would be perfect for each other...fate indeed!!

I'm eager to know what will happen next but I know you are on a holiday & even then you are taking time out to update your story!

So, thank you and enjoy your vacation!!

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Wow !Neil met Neela many times but has no idea of Avni . I'm shocked 😆 Khanna's never talk of Neela and her daughter . They have so close relationship with her. I'm surprised that Khanna's never have seen Avni even in pictures. Neil ko heart attack ayega 😆

I'm happy that Khanna's are forward thinking and accepted Avni with her past . In show though they created hue and cry they accepted at last.

I'm excited even more to learn AvNeil reaction after they learn their family's plan .