AvNeil FF: FATEFUL COLLISIONS (closure pv 38)

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darsh333

@darsh333

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

This was beautiful puja😊

I loved the parts wer they started to feel the pull😛

Update the next part soon!

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radzshakti

@radzshakti

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Read all the chapters in one go...very interesting,loving it..

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Suspended

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Cuteness max!!!! Love it. Eagerly awaiting next update!

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Awesome update. Cute update. I loved it dear.

Oh god phirse kab milenge yeh dono. They started to feel for each other.😳unknowingly😉

Loved it. Continue soon.

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

First I don't mind the length...infact, the longer the better😃.

I got so engrossed in their catching up & what cud b termed as an unofficial date, that I was actually surprised when the chapters ended!

Loved that both remembered each other from the one time they met 2 years ago. This shows what an impact they had on each other even if it was an unconscious one considering Avni was still reeling under the feelings of revenge & Neil was still immature!

Neelaz decision to remove Avni from the environment was a good one! 2 years away from poison named DVM improved her disposition & allowed her to enjoy her life & grow up naturally!

Neil too has grown up to be a kind & thoughtful young man!

They both have feeling for each other...which ofc they cudn't recognize the last time they met!

& they've decided to meet after 3 yrs in NY! All hollywood movies have made us realize that this meeting is ill-fated!

They cud meet earlier...but once Neil comes to know that the Ananya Verma he met is in actuality Avni Parikh...tabb kya hoga??

Neela & Prakash r partners-in-crime against DVM! How cool is that? That's also 1 way for AvNeil to meet...

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

I want to comment right away but don't want to just say few words! So,

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: vaish_patel
Another brilliant update! I love how Avni has loosened up and Neil has become more grown up - it's beautiful! And I LOVE how it was Avni who turned to run back to him because she wanted to see him again sometime.. She really has changed! The whole London part made me have a goofy smile on my face, probably mirroring your Neil's haha! So so so adorable!

Waiting for the next update already! 😳

PS YES ZAIN LOOKED EXTRA YUMMY TODAY

thank you so much! I am glad that this could put a smile on your face. 😊😊Yes, not being a part of dvm revenge plan has changed avni a lot!

I'll try and update the next part soon.

And yes, gym is working in zain/neil's favour. He did look delicious.

Edited by Globetrotter_me - 7 years ago