AvNeil FF: FATEFUL COLLISIONS (closure pv 38)

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I have this brand new ff coming up. Here's a little teaser. Would you like me to continue with it? It is partly funny partly intense and mostly love filled.

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TEASER

4 fateful meetings.
3 different cities.
2 individuals.
1 heart.

What happens when they meet for the fourth time? Do they end up parting ways forever or is it a commitment of the lifetime?

Join Avni parikh and Neil Khanna on this ride, spanning over 6 long years, that will leave them with memories they'll cherish till the end of times.
A journey of not only discovering love, but re-discovering themselves

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Index below


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Index :

  • Teaser :UP

  • Chapter 1: First impressions: pg 2

  • Chapter 2: secrets and sounds pg2

  • Chapter 3: cross fires and canals pg2

  • Chapter 4: so we meet again pg8

  • Chapter 5: through the eyes of a stranger pg8

  • Chapter 6: cupids conspire pg 11

  • Chapter 7: revelations and reassessments (part1) pg 15

  • Chapter 8: revelations and reassessments (part2)pg 17

  • Chapter 9: confusions and realizations(part1) pg19

  • Chapter 10: confusions and realizations (part2) pg 22

  • Chapter 11: longings pg 26

  • Chapter 12; pg29

  • Chapter 13: pg 31

  • Chapter 14: Marina Bay Sands(part 1):pg 33

  • Chapter 15: Marina Bay sands (part 2): coming soon



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It's so interesting
Eagerly waiting to read
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Nice, interesting.
Waiting for update.
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Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan

It's so interesting

Eagerly waiting to read

thank you. I 'll post the first part shortly. Stay tuned!
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Nice, interesting.

Waiting for update.

thank you. Part one is coming up in few minutes!
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Chapter 1: first impressions

Mumbai International airport.
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A 20 year old, Avni was sitting at the airport, waiting to board her plane. Angry at the world, angry at life and angry at her mother. Neela ma.

'Why?'she thought. 'Why? Neela ma? Why did you have to stop me? I was so so close at taking my revenge. Two days and everything has changed now!'

She glared at nothingness in front of her.


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Precisely 2 days ago, she had got the information from a trusted source that, Dayawanti Mehta had succeeded in turning her aman, the sole reason for her existence, her long lost baby brother, into a cold hearted criminal just like her. He was caught in a hit and run case, while driving under the influence of drugs.

As soon as she heard the information, she saw red. Furious eyes and a determined mind thought only one thing. The evil had to die. avni took out her gun, loaded it with all the six bullets. Determined to end the whole thing that night itself. ' tumhare papon ka ghada bhar chuka hai Dayawanti Mehta, ab to ya tum bachogi, ya mein.' saying this she proceeded towards the door, when a sharp hand on her hand, yanked her back, and threw the gun out of her hand.

The noise made by the tumbling gun brought her back to her senses. And a sharp slap echoed on her face.

Neela ma was crying. She had slapped her and was crying like a child. She cupped her face and said,
" baccha, ye kya kar rahi thi tum. Hosh me aao. Avni, itne saal laga diye mene tumhe us aurat se chipa ke rakhne me. Tumhe avni se ananya banaya. Kyu, baccha?? Taki tum ek criminal ban jao? Taki apni poori zindagi jail me kato?" she cried, shaking avni's shoulder. " kabhi apni ma ke baare me bhi socho Avni. Tum aesa kuch karti to mera kya hota? Huh?? "

Giving a long pause, she turned neela ma turned away from her and said, " bas bohot hua. Me ab tumhe iss badle ki aag me nahi jalne dungi. Tum yaha se jaa rahi ho!"


"ja rahi hu? Kaha? Iska kya matlab hai ma? Mein aapko chod kar kahi nahi jaungi." avni cried.


" baccha tumhe ye sab chod kar ek nayi shurwat karni chahiye. Aur yaha rahogi to wo kabhi nahi ho payega. Tum wo mass communication ka course karna cchahti thi na. Me tumhe uske liye Boston bhej dungi. Haa, ye sahi rahega." neela ma said. Broken. Trying to explain it to Avni as well as to herself.

" par ma," avni protested. "mera badla?"

" tum uski chinta mat karo. Mein apne tareeke se uss aurat se badla le lungi. Par tum ab iss me involve nahi hogi. Aur ye final hai avni. Mujhe koi aur discussion nahi chahiye." saying this neela had walked off. Leaving avni behind.


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So today, 2 days later, she was sitting at the terminal waiting to board her flight. She hadn't spoken to Neela for two whole days. Longest than ever since she could remember. But last night, when she had silently packed her bag along with neela, she hugged her mother tight and cried her heart out. Both the ladies with tear -stained cheek and feeling the pangs of impending seperation.


She remembered the moment, and started missing her mother already.


Suddenly her eyes fell on a guy, dressed in leather jacket and wheeling his way on a skateboard. A carry on bag on his shoulder and big head phones on his ears.


'what a wanna- be' she thought. And didn't give a Second glance to the guy.


Sometime later, a big bout of laugh caught her attention. she saw the same guy teaching how to skate-board to another little kid of some fellow passenger and this put a momentary smile on her glum face. Nothing major. Just a small smile. Just then the boarding announcement was made. And she proceeded to board the flight.

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Neil khanna was wheeling his way through the airport. Loud Linkin Park music blasting in his ears. He wheeled through the boarding area. And his eyes fell on a beautiful girl. Her kohl lined eyes trying to convey something, something he had no idea about. She had big chunky jewelry on her. And he thought, how did she ever manage to pass the security gate. And chuckled at an image in his head of her setting up all the alarms on.

He gave her one more look and thought that she was a grumpy little girl. Nothing special but the sheer gloom surrounding her added to hee beauty. Then he proceeded to the opposite side, when a kid approached him and asked cutely if he would teach him how to skate board . He laughed at the child's innocence and started playing with the kid.

He was bloody excited . his spirits so high that it was rather infectious. He was going to London . For two freaking years. Was going to live alone ,for the first time in his whole life. all alone. in a new city starting a new chapter of his life. And was looking forward to it. 'No more mumma's nagging' he thought. and a huge grin lined his face. Seconds later he thought,' but I'll miss them. My home, my room, bebe's murrabba sandwich , his and his papa's serious yet funny talks and his mumma. Every tHING About Her'
. But he didn't let that hamper his excitement . He pulled up a jumping stunt on the skateboard for the delight of the kid as well as himself and proceeded to board the flight. a big goofy grin on his face.

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That is it for part one. Nothing special. No wind blowing or no violins playing. just one normal glance . THAT TOO FLEETING!

what do you think is in store for them. tell me !!
Lots of love!

Chap 2 and 3 below
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So, I wasn't really going to post this for the next few days. But after watching today's episode,may be all can do with some cheering up. So here is chapter 2. Hope you enjoy this.
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Chapter 2: secrets and sounds

Neil began to move inside the flight and saw from two blocks away that he was supposed to share his seat with the grumpy girl. 'Oh this is going to be interesting', he thought to himself.

He placed his bag in the compartment above removed his jacket and sat down beside her with a huff.

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Once she made herself comfortable in her seat, she saw the same guy, and with a big huff he landed his ass on the seat next to her. 'It is a cute ass she thought'. And then chided herself mentally to be focused. She had greater things to do in life than check out people.


He looked here and there and then straight into her kohl lined eyes, and said with a warm smile, " Hi, I am Neil, and you are?"


Taken aback at the sudden intrusion by a complete stranger, avni moved a little back in her seat, and after a long pause, replied in a single word, " Ananya "


"oh, that is a lovely name! So are you going to London too?"
He asked.

She shook her head and said, " boston, I have a layover at london". And then turned away.

' god! I hate small talks. Why???' she thought in her mind. ' but turning away should give him a hint enough. NOT INTERESTED in capitals'



But to her dismay, the guy continued. " oh! Boston. Damn, a known face in London would have helped. I am going there for an MBA degree. They are going to be long two years. Just like this flight. Phew"

She sighed to herself and thought, ' indeed it is going to be a long flight' and rolled her eyes.

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Half an hour into the air, and avni realized that the guy could chat. He had talked with her continuously, bitting her ears off to say the least. And now she was aware about his mum, dad and bebe.

Later, While Neil was telling her something about business administrations, she thought to herself, ' what is he going on about for the past hour. I have no bloody idea. Sure he is decent to look at. Boyish charm and all. But that mouth. It has no pause button. What was his name anyway? It had to do something with a colour. Sky? Akash. No... Umm blue? Neel. Yes, Neil. How silly just like neela ma.'


She stopped him mid sentence and said, "umm.. Neil, hope you don't mind,but I'd like to sleep now."

And the guy nodded politely and didn't disturb her for a while.

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Neil thought to himself as he saw her sleeping, ' how can people be so boring. In the past 2 hours she has not even said a complete sentence to me. Yes she is beautiful but a little too harsh. Anyway, ananya, hmm, that is a nice name. But she certainly is not as nice.' he then decided to uplift his mood by listening to some Nirvana music and lifted his headphones from his shoulder and placed them on his ears. One song in and his happiness and excitement was back.


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Nearly 7 hours later, she found herself again talking to him.

When he suddenly said, " you know, every one has a secret. Every one. So how about, I'll tell you my secrets in exchange of yours?" and raised his one perfect eyebrow

"what?" Avni all but shouted. "no way".

"common yaar ananya, I mean, we both are definitely not going to meet ever ever again. What harm will it cause? Let's do it"

As soon as he had finished saying this, the entire plane jerked with a turbulence. all the lights started blinking and the oxygen masks came down fromthe ceiling . He suddenly held avni's hand in a vice like grip and said, " ye kya hora hai?"

Avni, concerned and a little scared too looked at him blankly.

A voice was heard over the console. " hey this is your captain speaking. Seems like we have hit a little bit of turbulence. I request you all to put on your seatbelts back on and be seated till further notice. "


"oh my god! Oh my god! We are going to die". Neil panicked. the plane was jerking violently.
" I don't want to die, I am barely 21.I don't want to die," he gasped.

Avni squeezed his hand and said, " chill, nothing is going to happen."

"No, he replied, we are going to die. Omg! I have so many secrets. I don't want to die with them on my chest. I Feel So Burdened." And As if he had no control he Started Saying

"I, umm, my mum makes the worst, the worst upma, but I pretend to like it.

And dad, when he suspected that I had smoked a cigarette, he was correct. But that was once. Never touched a cigarette again. The first time ended in bouts of major cough...so promised myself, never ever do it again.

Every morning when bebe, hands me a glass of milk, I throw it out in the drain" he blurted in his panic. Not being able to control himself, he continued.

"God! I don't want to die. his secrets kept on coming out at a faster rate as the jerks turned more and more violent .

"I cheated on my 10 th board exam history test. Had carried a chit. But every one was doing the same. History sucks

I am just 21. Still a virgin.god I don't want to die a virgin. I so Damn Don't Wanna Die A Virgin .

My first ever kiss was with a girl called mona in the engineering college. It was gross. Only saliva. Yuck

My best friend, dd, he gave me his pet goldfish when he went to travel, it is not the same fish he got back. It had died. Just like we are going to!!"
He added.

The plane was still jolting and his grip on avni's hand had tightened. Avni had no idea what to make of the situation .whether to be amused that a big ass man beside her was panicking so much that he had lost the filter and tge cintrol to his mouth. or to herself panic for the safety of her life.
d

" the 25 year old whisky bottle, my father had saved for a special occasion, Let's say it has apple juice in it now.

Dd wanted to date mona. Yes, the same saliva mona. I lied to him and said, she is into voodoo. The guy could never look at her in the same way."


The captain took the mike again and asked every one to be calm and be seated but this further agitated Neil. and probably as an automatic defense mechanism he continued telling avni all his deep down buried secrets.e

"I sometimes keep my comic books in my study books and pretend to study in front of my mum.

I, even though a guy, believe in true love. And am waiting for her.

I once had a very scary night mare on communal riots. I was 10. Didn't know how. But it has still stuck with me even after all these years.

I secretly like heart breaking sappy music. Even though i put up a extreme rock love face up."

Now a little emotional , he added "I just want my dad to be really really proud of me. He is my everything.w BUT Can't Do That If I AM DEAD!!" He Screamed .

He kept on pouring his so called secrets one after the other, when an announcement was made " due to the disturbance we are landing at Amsterdam airport. You all will be given free accommodation and connecting flights tomorrow. Sorry for the inconvenience. today, you have a day at leisure. "

As soon as the announcement stopped, Neil's cheek turned a deep shade of crimson red out of embarrassment. His eyes flushed and mouth dry he turned to avni and said, " let's just pretend that the last one hour never happened. Please. It was not very manly. Was it? Don't answer that. Let's just... "

She stopped him by a gentle squeeze and said," it never happened " and gave him a true smile. A first true smile.


He nodded and said," umm. so, if that part is ( clears his throat ) is dried and dusted, Amsterdam. huh? do you want to see it together? No pressure though, I mean ...".

" sure," avni replied. In a single word to ensure that he no longer felt embarrassed .

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So, the next part is a day in Amsterdam.

How did you find this childish Neil? Do you relate to any of his secret?? Tell me few of your. And ill let you know mine.

PS. few of his secrets are my secrets too!!😉
Ps. I know Amsterdam travel would require a visa. Let's just skip that part. Sorry for being a little illogical ;)
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Hello peeps! Good morning! Have fun today in Amsterdam!!
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Chapter 3: CROSS FIRES AND CANALS

That day. Amsterdam, Netherlands
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"so, ananya, what do we do? " Neil asked. "One day in Amsterdam. Let's make it worth while."

"ummm, " avni looked at the tourist map and said, "let's go to the Rijks museum,first"

' shit, yaar. No way, a museum. How boring. ' neil thought to himself. But nodded a yes to avni, still embarrassed about the little incident they had in the flight.

So, they first went to the rijksmuseum. The National museum of Amsterdam. But before entering the museum they posed in front of the I Amsterdam sign. Neil climbed up the letter S rather comically and asked avni to click a picture for him. She just smiled at his antics and clicked a picture for him.

Then they went inside the museum and saw the entire museum, war collects and important paintings.

While Avni was enjoying the whole museum thing. Neil was more than bored. He was disinterested in everything. and they weren't interacting much. He was just not a history or museum person

While walking together, he said to ananya, "aren't you like a 50 year old trapped in the body of a 20 year old".


Slightly offended, avni turned to him and said, " excuse me?"

He saw the narrowed eyes and a frown on her features and said, " no, I mean, I was just trying to figure you out. You are a little too serious. " he rectified himself.

She said to him, " you don't have to FIGURE ME OUT!! And you are way too immature. What about that!"


He just raised his hand up as if surrendering. And said, "let's forget this. How does it matter if I am childish and you are aunty-ish. We just have today. Where to next?"

Avni knew he wasn't enjoying the museum thing so, pat came the reply, " van gogh museum. I want to see his self potrait "

Neil groaned. And said, "no. Not again"

Avni's frown increased.


So, he said, " fine. let's go but you get only half an hour. And I decide the next two places.I am trying to work out a compromise here".


Avni gave him a sarcastic thumbs up and They next went to the Van gogh museum. The entire museum was filled with beautiful paintings. They saw the Van gogh self portrait and Avni was awed.

While Neil just murmured " so, the guy cut his own ear and painted himself by looking in a mirror? What is so good about thay. Narcissistic fool."

Avni gasped, " what is wrong with you? Can't you appreciate anything? History is really boring for you, isn't it?"

Remebering the secret blabbering incident that happened precisely 4 hours ago, Neil turned red and said, " you don't get to say that. Firstly, we promised that never to bring it up. Secondly, You yourself are so tight. Such a kill joy. Please smile sometimes. "

"oohh!" avni fought back. " so what if I am uptight? Everyone cannot be as immature as you are. Look at yourself. You are 21 years old!!! and still skate-boarding," she said pointing at his skate board. "Grow up."

"uggh" neil said, clenching his fist and stompped away from her. Then came back a second later and said, "I am sorry, I know we are just two strangers, let's just enjoy this day. Without trying to kill each other. Let's just celebrate not being dead. And may be I'll help you loosen up a little bit". He added with a wink.

'I don't need any loosening, but your screw is definitely loose.' avni thought to herself but didn't say anything. She simply Nodded agreeing to not fighting any more.

"so, you are not going to say sorry?" Neil asked curious now.

Avni raised her eyebrows and asked, "why would I? "

He just raised his eyebrows in return and shook his head from side to side and said, "Fine, let's just go to a place of my liking next."


So they went to the Heineken experience next. It was a brewery. And they showed how all of their alcohols were brewed. Neil was rather enjoying himself. Plus they were getting little bits of alcohol to taste too. Avni was having a good time too.

Coming out of the brewery, Neil's eyes suddenly lit up and he said, "I 've got an idea. Let's just do something reckless to loosen you up. Let's make a rule. We will do something absolutely opposite to what your normal response would be. And will see how things go. So let's get
drunk "

"absolutely not. It is 1 in the afternoon. I am not drinking." she said.

"oh you have already begun the game. Good good. So you said no, therfore we will do it", neil replied happily. His eyes twinkling.

"no way, that is the most childish plan I've ever heard" Avni protested.

"So, be a child for a day. live, laugh, love. I promise we'll have so much fun it would last a lifetime for you!" Neil replied, sarcasm lacing his last sentence.

Avni thought to herself, ' may be by loosening up I'll be able to forget about the whole Dayawanti thing. And how will it matter if this stranger thinks anything about me? We surely won't meet again ever. May be this is my chance to be reckless. Get the teenage rebel I never had'.


As if hearing her thoughts, neil said, " common say yes. How will it matter. We aren't meeting anyway in future and I promise I won't judge. I mean, you know all of my secrets already and still are here. So, say yes"


So, they were at a bar, sitting on high stools. And ordered a huge amount of drinks.Already having had 4 vodka shots. And large pint of beer in front of the which was now empty . Avni was now feeling a little buzz and Neil was a little drunk. They decided this much was enough to enjoy today. Not overtly drunk and staggering but with just a happy buzz with which they could enjoy their whole trip without tripping over one of the canals.

With this they went out. Neil pulled her uo to the cobbled pavement and they started walking around the canal. When neil said, " let's do the canal boat ride."

Avni was alarmed. " neil, hum pani me nai jaa sakte. We are drunk. Doob gaye to?"

" firstly, you said No. So we are definitely doing this. Secondly we aren't that drunk. Chalo. And I was a swimmming champ. I'll push you"

"what?" Avni asked incredulous.

" I mean I'll save you", he said shaking his head and blinking his eyes twice. Trying to understand the meaning of his own sentence.

So they sat in the canal ride and saw the multiple brown bridges that crossed above them. Colourful houses with small doors and large glass windows lining through out. Beautiful trees, with pink, yellow and green leaves, lining the entire thing around them. Bliss. Neil took a big piece of wooden stick and started hitting the water with it, creating splashes of water that fell on avni.

"stop it" avni said.

"Nope" he laughed, and hit the water again.

She took out her water bottle from her bag pack and emptied it on his head. And laughed an unhindered laugh.

While neil just smiled at her. Feeling that finally she was having some fun too.

Later, they got down at vondel park and entered the beautiful park. They moved around the garden watching birds and trees and made a small talk about their respective colleges, careers and how both of them were starting a new chapter in their respective lives. Then The fed the ducks swimming in the pond when
Neil said, " so you know, most of my secrets. You should tell me one of yours. You know. That is only fair"

Avni, felt a little red and thought, 'all of us don't have similar secrets. Some secrets are so big that they are better burried deep down within. So,painful that they prick your heart and make it bleed'.

Looking at her lost in her own thoughts he shook her shoulder and said with a smile, "Ananya, your secret?"

Avni said, " I am not telling you anything."

"you said a no!"

"uggh.. You and your stupid rule. Fine, I think I am enjoying this day. Never thought I would. That is my secret. Fine?"

"okay" said Neil

"okay?" asked avni.

"yeah, okay, I 'll take that" he said back. Giving her a big smile, and Something fluttered inside avni's stomach, seeing him smile like that. As if the smile was meant just for her.

By the time they were done with roaming about in the park, It was getting a little dark.

"So," neil said, "where to next? Do you want to go to tha red district? " he asked a little slowly, trying to gauze her reaction at the outrageous suggestion "we won't do anything, just watch. I mean,you can say no. I just want to watch the thing! What is it all about?"

Avni laughed and said, "and as per your rule, we'll as it is end up going. So let's just go." she was curious too. But she didn't want to tell him that.

So, they went to the red district. Just for an experience And it was another world to say the least. Different shops were lined with big glasses and women stood in those like mannequin , some scantily clad, others with leather straps and leather boots. There were strip clubs, beer houses, weed selling cafes.
They didn't enter any of the establishments. Just walked through the street. but, nothing seemed vulgur or bad. Rather the entire street was lively and fun. Buzzing with activity.


Due to obvious reasons avni and neil didn't talk much throughout the walk. Though beautiful, it was awkward sharing this experience with an utter stranger.

Having done that, they took a cab to their hotel.once they reached the hotel, They stood at the entrance of their hotel, near the parking lot, which was rather secluded. Neil turned to avni, and said " this was a good day. Thank you stranger."

She took out a hand and shook with his . "yes, thanks to you too. I did enjoy today. And let's hope I am not as uptight now."

They laughed at that. Something twitched in Neil's heart. He saw a lock of hair come infront of her cheek, and he had the instant urge to tuck it back. He lifted the strand and tucked it behind her ear and leaned forward towards her, very little space in between them and said, " keep my secrets safe".

Avni leaned in too. Lost in the intense eye lock for a moment. They were all but going to kiss, when Avni suddenly pulled out and said, " I think I should go now. Goodbye...Stranger." and walked away. Leaving him behind, looking at her retreating figure.


Next morning, avni didn't meet Neil. He had an early connection to london. While she had a flight directly to Boston.

Both of them, with different ambitions in their eyes and a hope for better future, parted ways from Amsterdam, With fond memories and a weird connection with a stranger.


But, the fate had different plans for these star crossed lovers, which they were unaware of. Which would happen in due course of time. Because cupid had already made them have a lasting impression about each other.

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so, that was all about a day in Amsterdam . what do you think about this chapter? do let me know.

PS. okay ? okay was inspired by JOHN GREEN. augustus waters is BAE. And they were in Amsterdam too. But, luckily no faults in AvNeil's stars

announcement : later in the day I'll be updating stor
HOWL OF THE TEMPEST. stay tuned!
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