AvNeil FF: THE HOWL OF THE TEMPEST note pg 20, update pg 21 - Page 13

The first half of the update was damn cute, with Avni having her midnight cravings and Neil's short yet sweet banter with their unborn baby. Can we have more scenes like these in near future in your story. Vidyut, as I previously said, is at a point where obsession towards Avni has become his everything. Nothing, nobody matters to him anymore. Now, I'm really excited to read how you take forward this plot where Neil and Vidyut have their ultimate face off. Neil's connecting all the dots, so hopefully he will near the truth very soon.

me second, OMG what an update 👏, I mean i got goose bumped while reading ,VR in AvNeil's bedroom...😲 he is getting bolder everyday. I love chotu is asking for pasta and Neil calling him self papa. whole family is around Avin and console her, and Avni's reaction for their child's safety, Neil's concerned, why avni is so afraid ,and then seeing her holding baby bump , and realizing her motherhood concern for their baby is beautifully written❤️. I love when you divide the story into two situation one side Neil is making pasta and admiring his wife and on other side horror in their room😲. cutting Avni's hair is the height of VR's pagalpaan 😲I love Avni took advantage and hit VR ... always want to see that in show and you grant my wish😆Amazing job👍🏼👍🏼 dear, any future plans for directing a movie😉

Awesome update puja 👏 loving the way story is unfolding you have kept both Neil and vidyuts brains intact did not compromise with either which makes me think I wish cvs were this intelligent while dealing with vidyuts obsession track anyways I am loving everything about this story can't wait for next part

Awesome update! Can't wait to see what happens next.

VR and his maniacal behavior . She cut her hair for breathing her scent ? Heights of obsession . He is just getting more desperate with each passing day to get Avni . I hope he doesn't harm the child be it what come may . Avni has already become vulnerable .

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

The first half of the update was damn cute, with Avni having her midnight cravings and Neil's short yet sweet banter with their unborn baby. Can we have more scenes like these in near future in your story. Vidyut, as I previously said, is at a point where obsession towards Avni has become his everything. Nothing, nobody matters to him anymore. Now, I'm really excited to read how you take forward this plot where Neil and Vidyut have their ultimate face off. Neil's connecting all the dots, so hopefully he will near the truth very soon.

Love,

Nivi

so, yes, here on the story becomes kind of intense. Though I am pretty sure I'll end up putting romcom kinda scenes because that is what I tend to do. I really have to restrict myself and not turn chapters into gooey romance mess.

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

wow... superb

loved it

update soon

thank you. I am trying to put up the next chapter soon.

Originally posted by: canzasana

me second, OMG what an update 👏, I mean i got goose bumped while reading ,VR in AvNeil's bedroom...😲 he is getting bolder everyday. I love chotu is asking for pasta and Neil calling him self papa. whole family is around Avin and console her, and Avni's reaction for their child's safety, Neil's concerned, why avni is so afraid ,and then seeing her holding baby bump , and realizing her motherhood concern for their baby is beautifully written❤️. I love when you divide the story into two situation one side Neil is making pasta and admiring his wife and on other side horror in their room😲. cutting Avni's hair is the height of VR's pagalpaan 😲I love Avni took advantage and hit VR ... always want to see that in show and you grant my wish😆Amazing job👍🏼👍🏼 dear, any future plans for directing a movie😉

I had a huge grin lining my face while reading this comment. So thank you so much! I am really glad. And thank you for liking the writing style too. I have never written something like this, so this means a lot!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Awesome update puja 👏 loving the way story is unfolding you have kept both Neil and vidyuts brains intact did not compromise with either which makes me think I wish cvs were this intelligent while dealing with vidyuts obsession track anyways I am loving everything about this story can't wait for next part

thank.you so much safia didi!! This means a lot. I'll try and update it as soon as I can.

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Awesome update! Can't wait to see what happens next.

thank you! I'll update soon