AvNeil FF: THE HOWL OF THE TEMPEST note pg 20, update pg 21 - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

VR and his maniacal behavior . She cut her hair for breathing her scent ? Heights of obsession . He is just getting more desperate with each passing day to get Avni . I hope he doesn't harm the child be it what come may . Avni has already become vulnerable .

Neil , Avni and Avni's cravings . 😆 Neil should open a pasta outlet soon exclusive for Avni 😆

yup. Vidyut is a total psycho in this story. And obsession does not just cut out his behavior towards Avni.
Avni is a littke taken aback, so is Neil. They thought he was dead.

Neil opening a pasta joint is a good option. Isn't it! But here he is still a police officer 😆

Thank you so so much Sri!! <3

P.s who is the hottie in your dp. For a second I thought it was Tom Felton
Edited by Globetrotter_me - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

yup. Vidyut is a total psycho in this story. And obsession does not just cut out his behavior towards Avni.

Avni is a littke taken aback, so is Neil. They thought he was dead.

Neil opening a pasta joint is a good option. Isn't it! But here he is still a police officer 😆

Thank you so so much Sri!! <3

P.s who is the hottie in your dp. For a second I thought it was Tom Felton

If he gets a bizzare idea to quit police as he want to spend more time with family he can very well open a pasta outlet .😆
Merlin yes! I have a great crush on him ❤️ Such hot and his eyes 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg it was scary.
That pyscho cut her hair. He's very dangerous man.
Hope neil find him soon and beat him black and blue.
Poor avni I felt bad for her. She got scared. Anyone in her place react that way.
Iam glad neil know wat to do. Actually he will do anything for his family.
Hope yeh pyscho baby ko kuch na karre.
I loved starting scene. Pasta craving.
Loved it. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ooo.. You are scaring me Puja. This VR looks too
dangerous than the originial version. Even though
the first half was super duper cute, I'm concerned abt
this psycho coz he thinks that Avni too loves him.

Aww Poor Neil the lil peanut of his isn't allowing him
to sleep properly. 😆 Great job dear keep going.

P.S: See you can't blame me dude, I'm just a lil obsessed
with Fateful collisions (wink !!). Sorry couldn't resist
myself.

With Love
Kathy ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Omg it was scary.

That pyscho cut her hair. He's very dangerous man.
Hope neil find him soon and beat him black and blue.
Poor avni I felt bad for her. She got scared. Anyone in her place react that way.
Iam glad neil know wat to do. Actually he will do anything for his family.
Hope yeh pyscho baby ko kuch na karre.
I loved starting scene. Pasta craving.
Loved it. Continue soon

thank you Safana, yes, the psycho is on the top level of being a psycho. And let's see who beats whom. Wait and watch.
I am so glad you liked the starting scene. Thank you once again. <3\0
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kathy_927

Ooo.. You are scaring me Puja. This VR looks too

dangerous than the originial version. Even though
the first half was super duper cute, I'm concerned abt
this psycho coz he thinks that Avni too loves him.

Aww Poor Neil the lil peanut of his isn't allowing him
to sleep properly. 😆 Great job dear keep going.

P.S: See you can't blame me dude, I'm just a lil obsessed
with Fateful collisions (wink !!). Sorry couldn't resist
myself.

With Love
Kathy ❤️

well, If I was able to scare you, I'll consider it as a success. And yes Vidyut is more dangerous and psychotic. May be jail made him so.
And Neil, well he still loves cooking for peanut and the wife. That is why the giy never refuses.

And Fateful collisions. Well, my laptop was recently re-booted. And, I lost 3 chapters on that story. So I have to rewrite the whole thing. So, eventhough plot is crystal clear, the dialogues have to be re done.
A little bit of wait. Technical glitches. But I'll post one chapter at a time. So you won't have to wait much. Over this weekend ?


So thank you so so much. And sorry for the delay.
Big hugs as a compensation
Edited by Globetrotter_me - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Puja :
Sorry I hvnt read the full FF ( very poor reader in general).But I just read dis chapter out of curiosity.Was in a dilemma whether to cmmnt or not.

Love the way you hv written dis.I could imagine the whole scene so vividly.
Neil is such a adorable husband and Dad.Cooking skills coming to use at midnight.So cute.

VR is scary here.I love dt you hv kept VR negative and didn't turn him into a cartoon like in d show.
Also Neil is still a cop and intelligent...love it.

PS : Awesome title.
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Posted: 7 years ago
@ Puja

No problem dear. I will wait as long as it takes coz I know
this is fruitful. Even to you.🤗

Kathy ❤️
Edited by Kathy_927 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
please update soon, curiosity is killing me!! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello guys! Hope you all are doing good.

Now, I know I have totally loved writing here and am glad that I have been given so much love and appreciation throughout. You guys have always been such fantastic supporters . I can't thank you enough.

I am stepping into a new phase in my life and here on, it will be extremely difficult for me to post any chapter on this story. This story- The howl of the tempest has been extremely important for me, probably the most difficult thing that I took on to write, and leaving it incomplete is almost similar to abandoning your own child. And I feel totally guilty and sad.

I know the readers will feel bad, cheated; hell I feel like shit to be honest. But because of time constraints and heavy work hours and even the fact that this story is not even half finished yet, it is frankly impossible for me to complete it.

I AM SO SO SO SORRY!!

So, instead of leaving it as it is, I am going to post a plot summary. Or something I would have done down the line in this story.

I don't know about others, but whenever I start a story, the plot is in my mind and I write down chapter wise what I want to incorporate . Obviously, iy undergoes major editing. You write, you scratch, you write again. Add things, delete things out, add up completely new things.


But in general, this is the raw material as to how this story would have progressed. If anyone wants to pick this up from here on and progress with the story, I'll be more than happy to let you do it. You can change the story line after this. no problem. Just Pm me. And mention me in co-author 😉 . If not, that's fine too.😆

As for the readers, thank you so so much for showeringYour immense love!! words will fall short at expressing the gratitude!! i need all the blessings that I can get before stepping Into this new venture in my life. thank you and sorry again.

p.s. fateful collision is just short of a few chapters so if I can I'll surely complete it.


PLOT Summary : PG 21



Edited by Globetrotter_me - 7 years ago

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