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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Hotness max! Absolutely love it. He proposed in police station and SR in jail bathroom! Fab!!! Can't wait for more. Please update NOW!!!!

SR in jail shower! It's not a bathroom! Lol. I thought they had to do this in a unique way! Wish SP was bold enough to at least imply a couple can have thier SR in a shower! But I doubt it!

Tillu is feeling very mature these days! Lol I wish Dragon read this! AvNeil SR is her dream! lol

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Oh ho.!!!
What was that.! The temperature has increased here.
Ahem ahem.!! That was so unique and so Avneil.

I loved their similar thoughts, albeit with different reasons at the end of their shower Adventure.!

No matter how pissed off Avni is, she can never hate Neil. Never.! She always melts down in front of him. So this was no different.!

Thoroughly enjoyed it.!
Well done.!
Waiting for next.!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: docritu99
Oh ho.!!!
What was that.! The temperature has increased here.
Ahem ahem.!! That was so unique and so Avneil.

I loved their similar thoughts, albeit with different reasons at the end of their shower Adventure.!

No matter how pissed off Avni is, she can never hate Neil. Never.! She always melts down in front of him. So this was no different.!

Thoroughly enjoyed it.!
Well done.!
Waiting for next.!

Hey thanks Doc! Yes the temperature is up, and I thought that was the need of the hour! Yes Avni is a fool in love and she knows it too! This was bound to happen and I am happy at least I got a chance to make it happen in my story!

Glad you liked it! Will try and update the next part soon before my holiday ends.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#44

sizzling hot love the series so far, that sr was so risky

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Kmhcrazyfan

@Kmhcrazyfan

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Read all the three os in one go

All are so damn wonderful ones

Especially the third one is smoking hot

Totally enjoyed reading these ones

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
sizzling hot love the series so far, that sr was so risky

AvNeil's relationship and their love was always a risky one. So to me the SR had to reflect this. Especially given the situation, they are in now, this sort of thing was bound to happen.

Glad you liked it.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan
Read all the three os in one go
All are so damn wonderful ones
Especially the third one is smoking hot
Totally enjoyed reading these ones

Thanks! Glad I got a new reader! Glad you enjoyed part 3, coz that took the longest to write.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Too hot the handle Mandy ☺️ But given to the emotional state they were in this is bound to happen . All the frustration , craving for each , anger should come.out in some way . What would be better than sex . I didn't expect them to make out though . I thought Avni will stop with the kiss .

I'm waiting for next . What happened to Avni of a sudden ?

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Too hot the handle Mandy☺️But given to the emotional state they were in this is bound to happen . All the frustration , craving for each , anger should come.out in some way . What would be better than sex . I didn't expect them to make out though . I thought Avni will stop with the kiss .
I'm waiting for next . What happened to Avni of a sudden ?

You know what? Initially even it thought she would stop with the kissing. That she will come to her senses! But as I was writing it, I realised no she was not going to. Because this has been a long time coming and she was too emotionally strung up, and being close to Neil just made her lose her mind. Neil too wanted her too much and was too much in love to stop this if she was willing. So it went to its conclusion as it should! I didn't want to get too graphic but I hoped everyone realised they finally sealed the deal! Lol

Yes sex was the only solution here. But as expected it causes its own set of problems! Because things are anything but perfect between AvNeil. But they have to figure out a path going forward, coz now they have taken yet another irrevocable step in their relationship! I have to think for 1 more day what's next? I need to find my inspiration for part 4. Tomorrow is a busy day being New years! Let's hope I get inspired soon!

Happy new year!

Edited by MrDarcyfan - 7 years ago

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Happy New Year to you too !_

Will Neil be able have peaceful sleep before he talks with Avni . I don't think so and same goes with Avni too . I thought he will be restless and come to her cell to find her sitting lost .

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