'PRISONER OF LOVE'-AN AVNEIL OS SERIES-COMPLETED

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Now I can imagine what kind of AvNeil dreams you get😆😆
To hot to handle ! Both were completely in previous day's hangover . And Neil ki tok koi baat hi nahi . He loves khulam khula pyar😆Dekne wale sharm kare !

He knows how to arouse her☺️And she is not so easy . She is very much aware of the place they had started off . Warna Neil would have eliminated the barriers between them *clothes*☺️

I enjoyed dialogues thoroughly👏tashn-e-ishq

Thanks! After reading it I thought I should have made it longer. But hey I am happy with it! Yes they ate definitely tashan e Ishq! The two of them never give an inch. Especially Avni! But that's what we love about her! Neil is the more laid back one!

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

It's a wonderful end I love the way you mix emotions

I would loved to read more please continue to write other stories 👏

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

I kinda love your take on how they come together to take on Vicyut... hoping the show takes a similar route. Terrific job here

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: RomComFan
I kinda love your take on how they come together to take on Vicyut... hoping the show takes a similar route. Terrific job here

Hey thanks! I personally think Avni and Neil need to unite to defeat Vidyut. At the moment they are each making separate plans. But the moment they work as a team (coz they are a great team), that is when they can bring anyone down. They brought down Daya, Ragini and even Vidyut once. They can do it again. Not to forget they got the better of Rat darling too! LOL

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Mandy! If this comes true, I would come hug you <3 <3

Amazingly written and beautifully visioned! <3

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: .IamShonali.
Mandy! If this comes true, I would come hug you <3 <3
Amazingly written and beautifully visioned! <3

Ha Ha...thank you! If this happens I will hug myself too! Or better still will fly to Mumbai and hug Gautam Hegde, and maybe Lage haath Zain ko bhi hug karungi! 😆 How can I let such a chance slip away? 😉

I am so glad this prison track broke my writer's block. I had not written anything in close to 1 year and I was too busy at work and home as well. But finally I had 10 days off and this is what I did with it. Now back at work. Hope I get the time to write again now!

Thanks again and glad you liked it.

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