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"Crazy In Love!" -OS 3
"It's the way that you know what I thought I knew...It's the beat that my heart skips when I'm with you...
But I still don't understand...Just how your love can do what no one else can..."
"Avni! said Neil as she walked out of his cabin. But Avni didn't stop. She was upset and angry after finding out about Vidyut. This part he had expected. But her reaction was not something he had been prepared for. The fact was, he had never really known what reaction he was going to get. It had always been a gamble. But he had to accept that the way she had found out, from Vidyut, and not from him, had made things significantly worse. But he could not let her walk away like this. He could stand everything, but that dejected disappointment in her eyes that he saw had been his undoing. He had got used to that accusing look in her eyes since they had met again. But this look was different. She looked defeated, and he could not stand his Avni to be anything but victorious. He needed to make her understand, this was their battle to win, and to win they needed to be one force against Vidyut. Not pulling in opposite directions. For the first time, he wondered, had he made a mistake not taking her into his confidence right from get go?
"Too late to think of that now Neil!" he told himself. "It's time to face the music!" he sighed and walked out of his cabin in pursuit of Avni. He went out the door and saw Avni rushing down the corridor. He had to stop her before she went back to the cell area. "Avni," said Neil again as he called out to her. Avni started to run and Neil perused her.
Neil caught up to Avni and held her by the arm and turned her around. "Avni, listen to me..." he said and Avni struggled against him "Let go of me, Neil!"
"No. Not until you listen to me!" said Neil.
"I don't want to hear anything you have to say, just leave me alone!" said Avni as she tried to push him off her. Neil's grip tightened, and in frustration, he pushed her towards the nearest door, and the door merely opened, and it led them into the shower rooms.
"Avni, stop this..." Said Neil as Avni continued struggling with him. Neil had his hands around her upper arms and trying to make her stop. When they had made their way to the shower cubicle in front of them and when Avni's arm hit the shower knob neither knew. Avni gasped as the water hit her and Neil and they were both drenched.
"Now look what you did?" said Avni staring at Neil in anger as they stood facing each other in the shower. Neil's hands still holding Avni's arms.
"What I did?" asked Neil. "You're the one who was pushing me..."
"You deserve it!" said Avni as she looked at her arms which had Neil's hands around them. Then she looked up at Neil pointedly. Neil sighed as he let her arms go and lifted his hands in a gesture of defeat. "Now let me go!" said Avni as she pushed past Neil and in her rush to leave, she slipped and as she fell back Neil caught her in his arms.
Suddenly they both froze as they were both transported to a moment from their past.
They simply stood there staring at each other while the water fell between them and around them. Neil knew she was thinking of the same moment from Holi over 2 years ago. That had been a turning point of sorts for their relationship. In their drugged state they had let their guard down with each other. That day Avni had been in white and today she was in red. But what had not changed was that she was equally beautiful both times. In fact, she was even more beautiful now than ever! He hadn't been able to stop staring then, and he could not stop staring now. 2 years and nothing had changed. She was the only woman who could make him feel this way.
Avni stared back at Neil, remembering the exact same memory that he was. That Holi, when they had been locked in a bathroom together. She remembered feeling something she had never felt before that day. It had confused her. Neil had confused her. He had been so handsome, so hot. He was just as handsome now, just as hot. In fact, even more so now. Every time Neil was close to her, she forgot everything. 2 years and nothing had changed. He was the only man who could make her feel this way.
"Avni..." said Neil huskily as he lifted his hand to her face and cupped her cheek. His other arm around her waist pulling her even closer. Neil bent his head towards hers and captured her lips. Avni was so lost in the moment, all she could do was give in. Her hands clutched the front of Neil's shirt as she kissed him back.
As Avni kissed him back Neil's hands only tightened around her. She gave a small gasp and he used the opportunity to deepen the kiss. Avni's hands moved around Neil's neck and her fingers buried in his hair as she pressed herself closer to him. Neil's hand around her waist moved to her back as he started to pull at the strings keeping her blouse in place.
Avni registered it somewhere but didn't react. She was beyond reasonable thought as being this close to Neil in 6 months was making her weak. Her hands moved to the front of his shirt as she started to fumble with the buttons, trying to open them. She managed to open a few and encountered his singlet. She made a sound of frustration which Neil heard and he broke their kiss and looked at her and his lips twisted in a slight smile. He lifted his hands to hers and moved them away from his shirt front and unbuttoned the rest of the shirt buttons himself and took his shirt off, and his singlet followed. Avni could only stare. Yes she had seen Neil without his shirt before. In fact she remembered the first time she had seen him without a shirt. He had been fixing his bike outside and it had rained and he had taken his shirt off while he played football with some kids from the neighbourhood. She remembered how he had caught her starting and how she had been embarrassed. Well she was not embarrassed now. She hadn't even known how she really felt about him then. But now she did. She loved him, and that is the one thing she could be totally sure of. Everything else was messed up.
The only clarity she had in all this was that she loved Neil. Loved him so much that right now she didn't care he had let her down. That was so scary. She didn't want to be her Mom. Either of them. She had thought her greatest strength was Neil's love, her love for him. But it had turned out to be her greatest weakness. Looks like she was not that different from her Mothers. The apple didn't fall that far from the tree. "Pyar main kabhi koi shart nahi hota". She had told Neil describing her Mothers' love for her Father. She was in the same place right now. She loved Neil with no conditions attached. Whatever this love brought with it, she was ready for it. Good or bad. She was tired of fighting.
As Neil reached for her again, pulling her close to him, he bent his lips to her neck, placing nibbling kisses on it. She sighed and ran her arms over his bare chest and around his neck as he eased her blouse off her shoulders and it joined Neil's shirt on the floor. She was now just covered in her red saree and that didn't leave much to the imagination with the water making the cloth stick to her. Neil's hands eased away the material and it started to fall down, and his hands moved up and one of his hands splayed her waist and the other moved up and cupped one breast. Avni gasped and Neil lifted his head and looked down into her eyes. There was a moment of silent communication between them. His eyes were asking a question. "Do you want this to continue?"
She simply looked back at him. Her eyes giving him her answer. She suddenly remembered an incident from their past, when due to a misunderstanding, she had accused Neil of taking advantage of her when she was drugged. His response had been "I'm a real man and I know how to treat women. I didn't take advantage of you! One thing she knew about Neil was that he was a gentleman. Even in this situation when it was clear she was melting in his arms, he was asking for her consent. It made her love him even more. Avni lifted her hand to Neil's face and her fingers touching his cheek, she leaned forward and pressed her lips to his. It was all Neil needed and he pulled her fully into him and started to kiss her back.
From that point onwards there was no turning back as Neil backed her away from the shower to the wall and lifting her arms on either side of her as he held her against the wall his fingers linking hers. They kissed for what felt like ages, and soon the rest of their clothes came off, as they did everything to get closer to each other. Neil lifted Avni off the floor, pushing her more against the wall as she wound her legs around him. Other than the sound of the shower the only other sound was their laboured breathing and their sighs, saying each other's name, as they completed what they had started so many months ago.
"Avni..." Neil gasped as they came down to earth again. They opened their eyes and looked at each other as they stood against the wall their fingers still intertwined as their bodies were. Neil slowly moved away from her and lowered her to the floor.
"Are you OK?" he asked roughly, and she nodded her head in assent, not saying anything. Avni quickly glanced around looking for her clothes, which she saw a little further away from her. Neil saw this, and quickly reached for his pants, pulled them on, and got her clothes for her. He turned around while she got dressed quickly and Avni looked at his back gratefully. He understood her need for some privacy, even though a few minutes ago, they had been in such an intimate situation. After she had put on her clothes Avni moved forward and hearing this, Neil turned around. He reached for her, and pulled her close. He lifted his hand to the side of her face and his figures tangled in her hair as he looked down at her. He leaned forward and placed a soft tender kiss on her lips.
"I love you! he whispered.
It was like that kiss and his words broke a dam inside her, and all the emotions she had been feeling for the past 24 hours came crashing down on her, and tears started to flow down her eyes and she broke into sobs. Neil started down at her, not knowing what to do. Why was she crying? Neil looked at her with concerned eyes.
"Avni, Baby, what's wrong? he asked, as he tried to reach for her. But in the mood she was in now, she really could not handle being close to him again right now. She had to get away and be on her own. "Not now Neil...Not now!"said Avni in a broken whisper as she turned on her heel and almost ran out of the shower room and into the corridor.
"Damn it! said Neil as he punched his fist against the shower wall.
Avni looked around to make sure no one was around and made her way quickly to the laundry room where found some clean towels and she quickly dried herself and found a laundered set of uniforms, and quickly changed into them. She then made her way to her cell. She entered her cell and looked around at the emptiness around her. Suddenly she felt very alone, very cold. Avni took her mat and placed it against the wall and sat down on it with her back against the wall. She had not thought too much about what it would be like to make love for the first time with Neil. But she knew this had not been it. What had happened had exceeded any expectations she had. But just like the high had been so high, the low was very low.
She lifted her legs to her waist and put her arms around them. She leaned her head against the wall as she closed her eyes. "What do I do now? she whispered to herself.
In the meantime, Neil had completed dressing himself in the shower cubicle and rushed back to his cabin. He could not risk anyone seeing him like this. He found a towel in the bathroom attached to his cabin and wiped his hair. He was starting to feel cold. Cold and alone. He had fantasized about the moment that he and Avni would make love, and in his wildest dreams, he had not expected it to be what it had turned out to be. It had been so damned hot, so amazing, but now the comedown had been just as hard as the high had been. Avni's tears had put a dampener on the otherwise most perfect hour of his life to date. Did she regret what had happened? Even the thought made him catch his breath with the pain it caused him. He had to talk to Avni in the morning, make her understand why he had done what he had done. He couldn't let her go, especially not after tonight. But he knew it was easier said than done. Maybe he rushed her into this intimacy? Maybe she was not ready for it?
Neil ran his hands through his hair, as he closed his eyes. "What do I do now? he whispered to himself.
* "Got me looking so crazy right now... your touch, got me looking so crazy right now...
Got me hoping you'll save me right now, your kiss...got me hoping you'll save me right now...
Looking so crazy your love's got me looking, got me looking so crazy your love...
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*Lyrics derived from the song "Crazy In Love by Beyonce - Album - Fifty Shades of Grey
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Hi All,
This is OS 3 and by far the most challenging one to date. I had to take a day or more to write it, as it has its intimate parts, and it's been a while since I wrote anything like this. I hope everyone enjoys this!
This one is dedicated to Dragon that always wanted an AvNeil SR and I made it a pretty risky and hot one. (What we won't see in the show, but how I would have loved it to be). So Dragon if you are reading this, hope you liked it! 😉
Please give me feedback, and let me know how you guys liked it!
Cheers
Mandy
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