Learning How To Love And To Be Loved (24 Parts, Complete) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Entirely different plot . Please do continue. .
If Vidyut really doesn't have any interest why has he kept her . He has kept her hostage and treats her mistress ? or are they married for real .
Waiting for Neil's part to play out
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Entirely different plot . Please do continue. .

If Vidyut really doesn't have any interest why has he kept her . He has kept her hostage and treats her mistress ? or are they married for real .
Waiting for Neil's part to play out

Hi! Thank you! Its more of a power thing, he enjoys having someone to take his anger out on, sadly they are married for real, and she's to scared to leave
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5-
Vidyut dragged Avni towards the car, pulling the car door open he shoved her in

"You wait till we get home" Vidyut growled
Avni did her belt up as Vidyut sat in the car and started it

Turning the car around, Avni saw Neil stood outside , drinking his glass of scotch, his eyes stayed on hers until she couldnt see him anymore

Avni blocked out Vidyut's constant complaining through the car journey
Arriving home, she got out and followed him inside

All at once she was shoved into the door and his fist hit her face
"Let another man touch you again and I will kill you"

Avni wished he would keep his word and finish her
"Sorry" she muttered looking down
"Now, get into bed"

Avni looked at her reflection in the mirror as she washed her face, god she looked horrible
She had no idea what she was doing with Neil, like he would ever want her as a friend, not when she was like this

Pulling her dress off, she traced the bruises on her stomach, with a sigh she pulled her pyjamas on and walked out of the bathroom

"You are not getting into my bed like that"
Avni dropped her clothes in the basket and nodded

Walking into the living room she led on the sofa, pulling the sofa throw over herself she closed her eyes

The throw was pulled off of her and she was shoved onto the floor, the corner of the table just missing her eye

Vidyut walked out with the throw as she led on the floor
Her phone buzzed beside her, looking at the message she sighed

Neil: What did you mean earlier?

Avni: Just that my husband is a very jealous man

Neil: I think I would be to if you were my wife

Avni couldn't help but blush, unsure of what to reply she placed her phone down again but picked it back up as she saw another message come through

Neil: Sorry, that was inappropriate I know, so what are you doing?

Avni: I am about to go to sleep, you?

Neil: Wondering how to ask you out for a coffee tomorrow without it sounding like a date?

Avni smiled, maybe for the first time in years had she met someone who could make her smile so easily

Avni: I can meet you at the mall, at say 10am?

Neil smiled at her response
Neil: It's a date

Avni: It's not a date! I'm married!

Neil: Let a guy dream, sweet dreams Avni, I hope you sleep well

Avni: Thanks, you to

Neil was sure he would have some very sweet dreams , all inclusive of Avni
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow he's openly flirting with her loved it a lott... man this Vidyuth!! Phew hope Neil knows his truth and kicks the hell outta him... next update soonish pls
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Wow he's openly flirting with her loved it a lott... man this Vidyuth!! Phew hope Neil knows his truth and kicks the hell outta him... next update soonish pls

Aw, thank you! I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 6-
Avni sat infront of her wardrobe, a towel on her head as she sighed
"What to wear, what to wear"

Avni stopped "Wait, why does it bother me, I dont need to impress anyone"

Standing up she grabbed a dress and changed, looking at the time she stuffed her shoes on and ran to the car

Driving to the mall she parked, looking at her watch again she huffed , she was late by 10 minutes

A knock on her window made her look up
Neil stood smiling in the rain with an umbrella over his head

Avni stood out of the car, Neil walked towards her
"Better we atleast link arms so we fit under the umbrella"

Avni stuttered as he linked his arm through hers
"I thought you had stood me up"

"No, I just couldn't decide what to wear"
Neil smirked
"Didn't know you wanted to impress me that much"

Avni stuttered again
Neil turned around, standing outside of the umbrella he held it over his head so he could face her

"Do I make you uncomfortable Avni"
Avni shuddered, she wasnt sure if it was from the cold rain or his smoldering gaze

"No, of course not, shall we go inside"
Neil nodded, closing the umbrella, the rain landed on Avni's face, slightly washing away her make up


Avni sat down as Neil brought the drinks over
"So Avni, tell me about yourself"

Avni fiddled with the tissue on the table, Neil placed his hand on hers making her gasp

"Why are you so nervous Avni"
Avni smiled looking up at him "I'm just not used to this"

"Used to what"
"Attention"

Neil kept his hand on Avni's "Well, if you were mine Avni, you'd be very used to attention"

Avni pulled her hand back , pushing her hair out of her face, Neil's jaw clenched

His hand reached out stroking the bruise on her cheek
"Who did that" Neil's voice was low

"Oh I, knocked myself in the face "
Neil scowled but nodded

"Anyway, theres not much to say about me"
"Actually Avni, i'm sure there is a lot to know about you"

Avni smiled "Can I ask you something "
"Of course"

"Why are you so interested in me"
Neil slouched back on his chair "Well one, you are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen, two your eyes tell me a different story from what you tell me"

"What do you mean"
"You look scared Avni, broken and unhappy and I have taken it upon myself to change that"

"But, thats not your job"
"It is now"
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 7-
Neil walked beside Avni, as they walked through the mall

Avni looked through the windows, Neil looked at her
Avni stopped at a window, she looked at the snowglobe

A beautiful angel stood under stars
Glitter fell inside the globe

Neil walked into the shop
Avni waited patiently outside
Neil came outside with a box

Handing it to her she looked up "Whats this for"
"Open it"

Neil watched as she opened it
"Oh my god its the snowglobe, Neil I cant take this"

"Yes you can, I will be offended if you dont"
Avni looked at the ground, her eyes welled with tears
"No one has bought me something in a long time"

Neil tipped her chin up with his finger "Im sorry about that"
Avni wiped her tears "Im sorry, im just being stupid"

"No, not at all, have you ever been ice skating before"
Avni looked terrified "Nope, and I dont think I want to"

"Come on, it will be fun"
Tugging her over to the ice skating rink
He picked out some skates for the two of them

"Ready just hold my hand"
Avni shook her head "Easy for you to say" she muttered

Neil pulled her along slowly, her hand grasped his arm tightly
"Oh my god" Avni screamed as she nearly fell

Neil helped her to the barrier, then let go of her
"No, Neil I said not to let go"

Avni lost her footing, Neil tried to grab her but they skid across the ice
Avni laughed loudly, Neil looked down at her adoringly

"Ive never heard you laugh"
Avni stopped "Oh sorry, Vidyut always says I have an awful laugh"

"He's wrong, its beautiful " leaning closer towards her
"Neil, im married"

Neil pulled back , helping her up "I know Avni, theres just something about you, I can't stay away"
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks! Haha , ill update now
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Part 8-
Avni turned the key to start the car, "it wont start"
Grabbing her phone she saw it was dead

Getting out she realised she would have to catch a taxi
Neil drove up by her "Need a lift"

"Yeah, actually my car broke down"
Avni pulled the car door open and sat inside

"Do you want the address"
Neil passed her his sat nav to type it in

Driving down to her house, he parked
Avni's eyes widened as she saw Vidyut's car, he was home early

Getting out quickly she thanked him
"Is he in "
Avni nodded
"Great i'll come say hi"

"Uh I "
"Avni, stop worrying"
She smiled softly back at him and unlocked the door

"Avni where the f**k"
Stopping he looked at Neil

"Neil, what are you doing here"
"I was out for some work, Avni's car broke down, I offered to take her home"

Vidyut's gaze fell on Avni "Where did you go"
"The mall"
Vidyut laughed turning to Neil "She never stops spending my money"

A flush of anger went through Neil but he controlled it
Avni pushed past them "Ill go get dinner"

Neil and Vidyut sat down on the sofa as Avni cooked, putting her phone on charge she yawned

When the dinner was made she served it to them
Neil looked up "Why aren't you eating"

"Oh uh, im not hungry"
Neil pulled the chair back
"Please"

Avni put some on a plate and sat down, trying to avoid Vidyut's glare
Vidyut shoved the plate forward "This is disgusting, dont eat it to be nice Neil"

Neil glared up at him, stopping Avni who tried to pull the plate back
"I actually really like it, Avni can I have some more"

Vidyut's jaw clenched, walking out the house he slammed the door
"Thanks, you dont need to act anymore he's gone"

"No, I want more, why do you let him treat you that way"
Avni stood up "You wouldn't understand "

Neil stood up, following her to the kitchen "If he was the one that gave you thag bruise, i'll kill him with my own hands"

"Well he didnt so"
Neil pulled her arm, turning her around to face him and backing her into the corner

"Neil, you're hurting me"
"You're hurting me" he shouted back

"I wont let him treat you this way"
"Hes just tired, this isnt any of your business"

Letting go of her arms , he rested his hands on the side
"Dont you dare make excuses, look me in the eye and tell me he doesnt hurt you"

So she did, she lied to him
She hated herself for it

Slamming his fist on the side he stormed off

Avni huffed and ran after him
"Neil, Neil wait"
Her hand went to the door frame, he slammed the door

Her scream stopped him, turning he pulles the door back open
"Avni, Avni"
Grabbing her wrist he sat her down

"I have a first aid box in my car"
Running out he grabbed it and brought it back in

She pulled her hand back "I'm okay "
He pulled her hand back gently, cleaning it he bandaged it "They're not broken, thank god, Avni , I am so sorry, I didn't see you there"

Avni was in shock "You're sorry? Wait, you didnt do it on purpose"
"No, why would I"

Pausing he raised her chin
"Oh for gods sake dont look at me like that"

"Like what" she whispered
"In a way that makes me want to kiss you"

Pressing his lips onto hers, his hand wrapped in her hair, pulling her closer

Pulling back, he caught his breath "Shit, Avni i'm so sorry"

Touching her lips she looked back at him
"Get out, Get out" she shouted

Neil couldn't say anything, standing up he walked away as Avni burst out in tears

Thoughts?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woah! That was marvellous!! He kissed her 😳 well next if Vidyuth has seen this then I'm sure Avni will be beaten to death and if he hasn't then Avni should become strong and not like a damsel in distress

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