Date Night- AvNeil Two-shot (2nd part on pg 6) *completed*

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-WingsOfFire-

@-WingsOfFire-

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Can't wait for the next update.It was so good.Why can't the cvs think of something like this.FD will make you the next cv of NK.will it do dear after such a wonderful story?

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Amazing start, eagerly waiting for next part

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840837

Suspended

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Amazing! It's so well written! I wish Neil's bday track on the show happened like this. Please update soon. Can't wait for the next bit

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

It has everything I wanted to watch on-screen . Avni taking him on a scooter ride is my dream 😭 U just made it happen . I love this smartass thief Avni who is a bundle of surprises to Neil . I could imagine his reaction 😆 He must have gone bonkers with his wifey's strange behavior . She was ready to hit him with a big stone as he wasn't coming down 😆 U cracked me up . Such a chic she is . I always love her mawali gang around her . I could exactly imagine Neil and his reaction when sheru came out of nowhere 😆

Update soon please .

I wish we get to watch something like this 😭

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

superb.this has to happen in the show😃

cvs pls show us this

pls do continue

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Kmhcrazyfan

@Kmhcrazyfan

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Wow ...

It's so interesting update

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

This was so adorable.!
Just loved it.!
I can totally imagine Avneil doing all that in my head.!
I demand the next part soonish.!
Avni has planned a surprise for Neil. Yayy.!

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Spacebound

@Spacebound

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shyna_x
Just loved it
Continue soon

Thankyou 😃

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Spacebound

@Spacebound

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: avneil2
Wow,yeh idea kaafi acha hai.superb continue soon.😳

Thankyou 😃

Will do.

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Spacebound

@Spacebound

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Afsana103
Loved it mind-blowing how I am already desperate to see all this happening in the show please update soon it's perfect yaar waiting eagerly

Thank you🤗Guess what? you wait is over.😆

I hope you like second part as much as you liked the first. 😳