Date Night- AvNeil Two-shot (2nd part on pg 6) *completed* - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much for reading 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veenapain

Loved it very much.Thank you for the beautiful story.

Thank you for reading 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I am carried away to their world . I knew she will take him to the beach where they first met . I always love the flashback they use in show for AvNeil . That really implies how they mean to each other and they cherish each moment spent together . I loved it a lot . U guys made me greedy to watch the scene played in the show but CVs are behind polygraph šŸ˜• I wish the spoiler is true and Avni kisses Neil on his birthday šŸ˜• AvNeil are beautiful even when in silence or sorrow . They just nail such scenes . I can imagine the scene play through .

It looked as though u were gonna continue as u mentioned of Bebe .

Thank you for the story . Keep writing

Thank you so much 😳
CV's ne pachka kardiya...Bechara they didn't even let him cut the cake. šŸ˜†

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Suoerb superb superb superb superb.I cant tell u how good it is.amazing dear.so many good writers r in this forum.unfortunately,we r bearing senseless writing.bcoz of avneil.superb dear.šŸ‘ Well done.

Omg thank you so muchšŸ˜³šŸ¤—
You making me blush now ā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: paayaal

So many feels...gah..!!!


Awesome, just awesome!

Avni planned a perfect date for her Mr.Perfect😃 Coming full circle to where it all startedšŸ‘ It was insanely romantic...could actually see it happening!!

Don't want to spoil the mood by mentioning pests roaming around at night😔

Wish there was more...



Thank you so much😳
Never expected such romance from Avni now did we? Well she had a good teacher *looks towards Neil*
They say rats roam after dark late at night .That's what she was doing šŸ˜†
Aw I'm sorry but I'm glad you guys liked it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SaskatoonDan-

Oh my god.Such a beautiful date night.Can't think of anything but only Avni and Neil.So beautiful and awesome.šŸ‘

Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Simi1711

Such a beautiful story!

Loved it ā¤ļø

Thank you so much for reading 😳
I'm glad that you loved it!šŸ¤—

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