Date Night- AvNeil Two-shot (2nd part on pg 6) *completed*

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this. It's one of my favorite FFs recently

Awesome awesome job. I'm gonna reread it a couple more times definitely!! Beautiful!

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Veenapai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Loved it very much.Thank you for the beautiful story.

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

I am carried away to their world . I knew she will take him to the beach where they first met . I always love the flashback they use in show for AvNeil . That really implies how they mean to each other and they cherish each moment spent together . I loved it a lot . U guys made me greedy to watch the scene played in the show but CVs are behind polygraph 😕 I wish the spoiler is true and Avni kisses Neil on his birthday 😕 AvNeil are beautiful even when in silence or sorrow . They just nail such scenes . I can imagine the scene play through .

It looked as though u were gonna continue as u mentioned of Bebe .

Thank you for the story . Keep writing

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Suoerb superb superb superb superb.I cant tell u how good it is.amazing dear.so many good writers r in this forum.unfortunately,we r bearing senseless writing.bcoz of avneil.superb dear.👏 Well done.

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

So many feels...gah..!!!

Awesome, just awesome!

Avni planned a perfect date for her Mr.Perfect😃 Coming full circle to where it all started👏 It was insanely romantic...could actually see it happening!!

Don't want to spoil the mood by mentioning pests roaming around at night😡

Wish there was more...

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-WingsOfFire-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Oh my god.Such a beautiful date night.Can't think of anything but only Avni and Neil.So beautiful and awesome.👏

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Such a beautiful story!

Loved it ❤️

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Spacebound

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Ayesha134
Loved it to bits 😳 AMAZING 👏 Update soon 😊

Thank you so much 😳

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Spacebound

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Drama_Queen-
It all seemed as if i was watching this whole scene of their Date :D It was amazing!! 👏👏❤️ Good job :)

Thank you for reading 😃😳

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Spacebound

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Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this. It's one of my favorite FFs recently
Awesome awesome job. I'm gonna reread it a couple more times definitely!! Beautiful!

Thankyou so much...I'm really very glad that you loved it 😳