#5 MR. PROTECTIVE Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!!

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docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: neeraja91
Beautiful! Please keep writing. This is one of my fav FFs. Look forward to your updates!

Thank u so much , that means a lot to me.!
Keep reading.!

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docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ...SA...
This is beautiful...❤️
Ri... I can't really Express it in words , that how much i love reading your works..
Keep writing.. waiting for the broken Khanna😳

Aww sanju.
Thank u so much dear.
This was an utter random thought though while counceling a patient of depression.!
Kind of Raaste se bhatak gai thi mai.!
Anyway i have some good ideas for coming chaps
So keep reading.!

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docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy
Wasn't bizarre at all... It was beautiful :) soulful :) as usual fell in love with Neil again bcz of ur writing and potrayal of his character :)

Wohh. Thats such a relief.!
Thank u so much for such wonderful words of appreciation.!
Keep reading.!

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Nidhii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Tremendously awesome work . Just loved it. So similar to Neil in the show. Perfect understanding between the couple.

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-WingsOfFire-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

@docritu99 I can't even think of giving a lecture after such a wonderful post.Keep on writing and keep going with the flow. All the best👍🏼

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Gosh u write so beautifully😳👏..I could imagine every bit of your story in my mind..Loved this shade of NeilKhanna..😳❤️ Loved how he comforted and instilled tat confidence in her..This story is sooo relatable to the beautiful bond of #AvNeil and loved that mischievously romantic bit at the end..😆😳❤️ Amazing job buddy😃👍🏼

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Ekta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Its a very thoughtful one i guess...

Different from the previous ones but a good different.

Afterall there r many flavours to neil khanna

Keep writing more

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HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Ab kya bolun mein...it was absolutely brilliant👏👏

When we think of protection we only ever think of the physical but you've thought beyond that!

Here Neil is protecting her emotionally & mentally...by giving her strength to voice her fears, by actually listening to her & not trivalizing her inner turmoil, by encouraging her to rise above her insecurities, & by being an awesome 1 man cheerleader for her..!

Amazing!!

Edited by paayaal - 8 years ago

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Moi Neil ! 😊 This is always our Neil who is in the show .

Long lost scene of AvNeil lying on grass Wonder why they chopped it off . U fulfilled that wish 😉 At times I think Neil is a psychologist with his theories on inner fears and ways to tackle them .

Avni is someone who just need a tap on her shoulder to turn into that fierce warrior she is and Neil exactly knows what she needs . I loved their conversation 👏

We got our naughty Tillu too . Heyah ! Avni kissed him . 😲 I love when she doesn't shy away . Neki aur puch puch 😆😆

Edited by AgnesFan - 8 years ago

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docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
Tremendously awesome work . Just loved it. So similar to Neil in the show. Perfect understanding between the couple.

Thank u so much dear.!
M glad u liked it.!
They really have an unbeatable undersatnding.!