#5 MR. PROTECTIVE Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.!! - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -SaskatoonDan-

@docritu99 I can't even think of giving a lecture after such a wonderful post.Keep on writing and keep going with the flow. All the bestšŸ‘šŸ¼


Thank u.!
Will continue for sure.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: itsme_aish

Gosh u write so beautifullyšŸ˜³šŸ‘..I could imagine every bit of your story in my mind..Loved this shade of NeilKhanna..šŸ˜³ā¤ļøLoved how he comforted and instilled tat confidence in her..This story is sooo relatable to the beautiful bond of #AvNeil and loved that mischievously romantic bit at the end..šŸ˜†šŸ˜³ā¤ļøAmazing job buddyšŸ˜ƒšŸ‘šŸ¼


Such a beautiful comment.
Thank u so much dear.!!
Means a lot to me.
Well end karte waqt kuch toh accha hona chahie na taki readers smile leke jaae.!
Thanks again
Keep reading.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u so much.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

Its a very thoughtful one i guess...

Different from the previous ones but a good different.
Afterall there r many flavours to neil khanna
Keep writing more


Thank u so much.
Well the whole idea was to show Protection in a different light.!
As i said this series will be my different version on Avneil.!
Thanks again.
Keep reading.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

As usual its brilliant šŸ‘


Thank u dear.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: paayaal

Ab kya bolun mein...it was absolutely brilliantšŸ‘šŸ‘


When we think of protection we only ever think of the physical but you've thought beyond that!

Here Neil is protecting her emotionally & mentally...by giving her strength to voice her fears, by actually listening to her & not trivalizing her inner turmoil, by encouraging her to rise above her insecurities, & by being an awesome 1 man cheerleader for her..!

Amazing!!


Oh man.!!!! This was the comment i was waiting for.!

U got the whole essence of this story.!
Whenever the Protection word comes, we think of, protection from someone, as u said physically but a human is more vulnerable emotionally. U can even fight alone for ur own physical protecrion but when it comes to deal with ur inner self u cant do it alone. U need someone to push u.! That was the whole idea behind writing this story.!

Thank u sooo much for this comment.!
This made me feel i conveyed what i wanted to.!

Thanks again
And keep droping such comments.!
Love ya.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Moi Neil !😊This is always our Neil who is in the show .

Long lost scene of AvNeil lying on grassWonder why they chopped it off . U fulfilled that wishšŸ˜‰At times I think Neil is a psychologist with his theories on inner fears and ways to tackle them .
Avni is someone who just need a tap on her shoulder to turn into that fierce warrior she is and Neil exactly knows what she needs . I loved their conversationšŸ‘
We got our naughty Tillu too . Heyah ! Avni kissed him .😲I love when she doesn't shy away . Neki aur puch puchšŸ˜†šŸ˜†


Thank u so much.!
Yeah exactly, it was such a beautiful and soulful scene, i wonder y they scraped it.!

Neil will always be her support system, always ready to give her that extra push.!
The last part was last moment addition but i am glad it came out well..
Thanks again
Keep reading.!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: docritu99


Oh man.!!!! This was the comment i was waiting for.!

U got the whole essence of this story.!
Whenever the Protection word comes, we think of, protection from someone, as u said physically but a human is more vulnerable emotionally. U can even fight alone for ur own physical protecrion but when it comes to deal with ur inner self u cant do it alone. U need someone to push u.! That was the whole idea behind writing this story.!

Thank u sooo much for this comment.!
This made me feel i conveyed what i wanted to.!

Thanks again
And keep droping such comments.!
Love ya.!


awww...love you too!šŸ¤—

You write such awesome meaningful stories that have such depth...its hard not to be moved by them..Keep it up!šŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mind-blowing dear Neil guides Avni to fight with inner demons is something definitely unique and beautiful your ff and each shades you give to Neil Khanna is undoubtedly Making me fall even more for him and luckily this isn't something unreal Neil Khanna has all these shades you have mentioned as a part of him keep writing more and more waiting eagerly to know what's the next shade of Neil Khanna
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Superb šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...neil protecting avni against her inner demons...it is just mind blowing yr...now m waiting for more shades of mr. Tillu ...specially possesive one...plz do write😊

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