RS:Juhi's bachha track : (08-10-2017) last part on pg 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm speechless...just aewsome...please update soon
Edited by Lusi123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lusi123

I'm speechless...just aewsome...please updat soon

Thank-you dear 😳😃
Is that your eye in the dp?(just curious..)😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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U have beautiful eyes...😳

Aur ha...I'm a girl.. don't think otherwise..😆 don't worry.😛
Edited by ...san... - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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WOW👏 so well written.😳 U described it so well. her emotions😭
pls continue San... will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vijaya138


I am bad in writing but write with this concept if u can. Avni in super angry mode and Neil pachtava for taking her granted.he should manofy her and our ladydon should not bend that easily.
Is fan ki armaan puri kardo pls in a form of os

wah wah jay kya kurafati ideas derahi hai u read ff stories here good jay😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So beautiful os.Avni's pain is heart wrenching. Poor soul feel sad for her.please continue soon.Avni shouldn't easily forgive him.he should be desperate for avni
Edited by avishimishra - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sash4love

WOW👏 so well written.😳 U described it so well. her emotions😭

pls continue San... will be waiting for the update

thank-you soo much😳
Glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: avishimishra

So beautiful os.Avni's pain is heart wrenching. Poor soul feel sad for her.please continue soon.Avni shouldn't easily forgive him.he should be desperate for avni

Hey.. thank-you soo much avishi..😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...san...

I'll surely try to...
But I prefer revealing my thoughts..(what if I couldn't manage to write another one)
I didn't think of marriage at all. I just thought what if he brings them home. Introduce the kid as his child... What if there is more to it. May be she is not his child. But at the moment, when they look at each other, he knows that she knows he has some plan in his mind. Obviously , she'll feel bad. Imagine some kid, who is not her kid.. calling her hubby as papa.. imagine how she must have felt when he held juhi's hand and enters the house.
And thank-you😊

You are making me cry by saying this di 😭 This OLV had killed my peace! Why can't it be a dream sequence!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the way you wrote about Avni's feelings :)

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