A thousand years- AvNeil TS (Part 3 updated!) *completed*

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

o man ! confession couldn't be more better than this . I'm breathless after reading your update . Beautifully penned ! I loved loved and loved Neil's confession 🤗😭 My heart broke for Avni when she was sharing her pain . So well written ! Your dialogues were so wonderful .

Keep entertaining !

Lots of love 🤗

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

read 2 and 3 together...and they were amazing👏

i felt really nice while reading it..and now i feel y this had to be the last shot of this...

can u please write a epilogue for us...we all wud love to read it..😊

and keep writing ...😳

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Shailja

@Kshailja

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Oh God!!! Why this story has to end?? Why??

Dude, it was just awesome... You wrote it so perfectly.. The selection of word, the dialogues and everything was just amazing.

You know what, all the while reading this chapter I was having Goosebumps... It was like all this was either happening to me or happening in front of me..

It was so realistic. I just visualized the whole scene..

I badly want this to happen in the show..

Please CVs read this and show the same in the show...

I just can't stop myself to appraise you. It's really really amazing..

Please do write more..

I am here to read more from you..

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Beautiful punishment.. 👏

She deserved it.. And needed too..

You words painted that kiss in my mind..

Any person would react the way she did after going through a difficult childhood and seeing a brother doing worse than an enemy would do.. But Neil I know he will heal all her wounds with love.. Just the way you described.

You write so well that I want to keep reading and reading and reading...

All the dialogues were awesome... Specially Neil's confession.

Beautiful confession.. Really it couldn't have been better..

Your pen possess great potential dear... Keep writing such beautiful stories..

I'll be waiting for a more longer story from you.

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aishwarya12joys

@aishwarya12joys

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

It was beautiful and magical. I love this story.

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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Confession was amazing...It could not be better than this...Loved it..I loved the reassurance that Neil gave Avni

He was ready to wait for her and win her love

Neil is hubby goals ❤️

If possible please write an epilouge or write one more story...I would love to read ur stories...🤗

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shreya

@shreya2202

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Best confession for avneil..

The way Neil poured his heart out in front of Avni is really very heart touching n avni the broken soul her side of story the way you have portrayed is just outstanding,

You have written very beautiful n yet perfect which perfectly suite for avneil,

I just love this TS..

Please do write more on avneil,

You r great writer.. 👍🏼