A thousand years- AvNeil TS (Part 3 updated!) *completed*

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Part 1

-AVNI-

Avni was standing away from the group of people whom she cared a lot as she stared into nothingness. It's only been 24 hours that she realized her love for Neil and not even few hours have passed since she knew about Amol's ugly truth. She smiles a sad smile. How many times has her heart broken because her father was too coward to fight for his family? How many times has she lived her Ayesha Maa's death since childhood? How many sleepless nights has she spent worrying about her brother Amol? Endless!
And now it is all coming to an end. Her little brother, who tried to sell her along with her grandmother is getting arrested. Juhi is also free of the hell that she is been living past 5 years.

Yet she is not happy. Her heart is suddenly feeling very heavy. A lot has happened in these last few days. She had busied her mind into helping Neil, and getting those girls and Juhi out of Rangmahal.But now as all that is over and done with, she feels as if a dam of emotions is broken. She is feeling every emotion with twice the intensity.

From last 15 years, all she has dreamt about is getting Aman back to her. After the anniversary fiasco, when he came back to her with a rakhi, her happiness knew no bounds. There was hope that she could reform her brother, that hope is what she lived on for since then. And Neil. Neil came into her life as a stranger who not only saved her but made her believe in humanity again.Her made in believe in love again. He glued all her broken pieces together and cared for her even with all her imperfections.

But all that has changed now. Amol, her little brother tried to sell her, he tried to sell his own sister whom he promised to protect from all the evil. And Neil, Neil was never hers in the first place. She knew he had always loved Juhi and with Juhi coming back, she had to preserve her heart and her self-respect. She couldn't continue to stay in this farce of a marriage when she knows the extent of Neil's love for Juhi. There was a point in time yesterday when she had though Neil also loved her. But all her illusions were cleared when she heard Neil talking to Juhi.

After the whole fiasco, she had gone to search Neil. She had wanted to confess her love to him and ask if he loves her too.She wanted to know where does his happiness lie because all she wanted for him is to be happy. She found Neil, but he was with Juhi. She witnessed their reunion, she witnessed their hug, she heard Neil say how he became a police officer because of her, he told her about DD and how he reformed her, he told her how his world fell apart when he thought she died.

With her heart and all her illusions shattered after hearing all that, she walked away from there. She walked away from all the people whom she loved. She walked away because Dayawanti Mehta was right. All she does is bring havoc into her loved one's lives. She walked away because they all are better off without her.She walked away never to come back.


-to be continued-



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice shot
do update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please don't leave us hanging! Update soon please
I follow this forum mainly for the fanfics. I like several of them more than the actual show plot! N it's so difficult to wait for an update! Please update the whole story in one go...please please!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great start ! Please try to update soon . Loved your work 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb,
Plz update next part soon
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I was barely waiting for such a ts...thx for penning it down...wonder god catches my thoughts and gives it to others
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing start!
Please update soon :)
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Nice start.. Please update soon!!
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Nice start dear
It's interesting
Pls update soon
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Really good! Waiting for the next part!

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