A thousand years- AvNeil TS (Part 3 updated!) *completed*

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TheBrillz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Oh god damn. What an update omg I loved it. Pls do continue. Looking forward to the next part. ⭐️

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IsisEirene

@IsisEirene

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Oh Gosh...
Read both the parts now. So beautifully written.
Poor Neil. Avni always makes the decision and he is left to drag her back making her see the error in the process.
Do continue soon.

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pri12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Amazinggg.. Loved it Loved it...

Please make chapters long 😆

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__VIHU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Hello dear..

Read both parts at once.. And this was freaking awesome.

Avni is reckless I agree But Neil will be balanced..

Just loved the last part of chapter 2.. He picked the best thing to do..

Awesome piece of writing yaar..

You keep the reader so captivated.. I was running out of battery so decided to read first part only... But when I read that I couldn't stop myself from attaching to charger point, reading both parts and typing this review..

👏

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Shailja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Wow!!!

It's amazing. Both part is written so fantastically amazingly awesome...

I just want to write all the appraisal for you in one word but I can't find that word..

The way you described Avni's feeling and emotions in first part was like I am feeling that. I think it's exactly what Avni will feel when everything ends and when she will see Neil and Juhi Milan.

And then comes Neil's part. He just convinced Juhi which was really the hardest part for him to do. And then went on search of his Wifey. But wait his stupid wifey went away. Avni really takes all the decisions by herself, never asks Neil about his opinion. And the way you showed Neil's condition like he was loosing Avni was just amazing.

And then the station scene. I wish he do that and this scene happens in the show.

Last but not the least, He kissed😳

When we will get the kiss in the show?

I just hope your this track get to the director and they also do something like this.

It's really so so so good.

When I was reading the story, it was like I was going through the emotions, my heart beat was raising.

Please Update soon.. and if it's possible please pm me too.. I will send you the buddy request... I m so excited for the next part...

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Prani08

@Prani08

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

It's so amazing and word to word so perfect and apt like having the visual of Neil and Avni.
Beautiful in words and awesome in expressions of feelings.

😉 Upload part 3 of Avniel

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

That was an awesome update!
Neil's anger and helplessness was so well described
I hope now Avni understands how much her Husband loves her!

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1125485

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

waiting for p3
update soon buddy

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Spacebound

@Spacebound

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sushfiza
Grt start
Cont soon

Thank you😊

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Spacebound

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Raina_Malik
nicely written
Neil anger and rage..
👏
again cliff hanger... 😆
hope to have third part soon
😳 do write more love to read more stories from you 😛

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. 😃

The third part will be up in few minutes so you don't have to worry about the cliffhanger as this is the last part😆

Yes, will definitely write more stories 😊